Pain,Tears, and Losing My Heart

You give your heart away WAY too quickly, I could totally tell this wasn't going to work. Look at the fluctuation in your poems, seriously, your pattern is three happy 'I'm so glad I found you' poems and then boom, you write about how your heart is broken. Maybe you should just be single for a while, enjoy it, it's certainly a lot better than getting your heart stomped on by a differant shoe every week. Well, other than that great poem, the intensity was relavent and awesome, great job. :)

i gave it 2 him faster than i normaly would have..cos i thought he felt the same way...all that he said was so sweet...does this sound like something from our past wit a certain guy?

I think maybe you should lay off the dudes for a while. It's hard to tell who's right and who's wrong with a broken heart. Yeah, it sucks not being able to say you've found love yet but it will come, you've just got to wait. Boys your age dont even really know what love is themselves, unless a bonor counts, lol. Wait till they are older and more mature, then they'll actually have a straight answer. :)