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Angel of Submission
I'll be your angel of submission
here I am, do with me as you please
after wrapping my body around you
for you, I shall drop to my knees
Submission brings me satisfaction
and your dominance turns me on
play with me, I am your possession
I'll satisfy all your needs until dawn
Wearing only my wings and this blindfold
I await your every naughty command
tell me what you need, I'll obey you
giving pleasures until you can't stand
I'll be you angel of submission
grab my hair, slam me down on the floor
we'll do anything you can think of
then I'll beg you to do it some more
here I am, do with me as you please
after wrapping my body around you
for you, I shall drop to my knees
Submission brings me satisfaction
and your dominance turns me on
play with me, I am your possession
I'll satisfy all your needs until dawn
Wearing only my wings and this blindfold
I await your every naughty command
tell me what you need, I'll obey you
giving pleasures until you can't stand
I'll be you angel of submission
grab my hair, slam me down on the floor
we'll do anything you can think of
then I'll beg you to do it some more
Written by
Deborahlee3313
(poetry in oceans)
Published 4th May 2013
| Edited 8th May 2013
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Re: Angel of Submission
5th May 2013 00:25am
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5th May 2013 1:10am
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5th May 2013 1:49am
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5th May 2013 1:58am
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5th May 2013 2:11am
sorry to strain your sensibilities
however your rising to the occasion means my
teasing as a poet helped to penetrate your thoughts
stay tuned ;)
however your rising to the occasion means my
teasing as a poet helped to penetrate your thoughts
stay tuned ;)
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5th May 2013 2:13am
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5th May 2013 1:52pm
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5th May 2013 6:07pm
and then at other times...
switch!! lol
thank you for you comment
stay tuned...
switch!! lol
thank you for you comment
stay tuned...
Re: Angel of Submission
7th May 2013 7:40pm
You were right..just up my street. ...and don't tell my Dom..but switch is good occasionally!:)
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re: Re: Angel of Submission
7th May 2013 8:19pm
glad u enjoyed
ah...the occasional switch...
sounds like a hot Title to me
thanks for checking me out
ah...the occasional switch...
sounds like a hot Title to me
thanks for checking me out
Re: Angel of Submission
8th May 2013 8:38pm
"and your dominance it turns me on"
A bit of honest critique, strike the "it" out of the sentence, and it is a BEAUTIFUL poem, one I will share with Sir. Thank you for this.
A bit of honest critique, strike the "it" out of the sentence, and it is a BEAUTIFUL poem, one I will share with Sir. Thank you for this.
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8th May 2013 9:31pm