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A way out
Down At the dam in my car I sit
Can't fight the urge for my next hit
So make a mix and fill up my fit
Don't miss a drop get every bit
Feeling like I'm at my ends wit
Can't see the light it's dimly lit
Stuck in this hole that is this pit
With my two fists clenched my teeth I grit.
I Need to dig my way out of it.
I need to find myself an exit.
One day soon I need to quit.
I'm 40 now, can't keep doin this shit!!!!!
Can't fight the urge for my next hit
So make a mix and fill up my fit
Don't miss a drop get every bit
Feeling like I'm at my ends wit
Can't see the light it's dimly lit
Stuck in this hole that is this pit
With my two fists clenched my teeth I grit.
I Need to dig my way out of it.
I need to find myself an exit.
One day soon I need to quit.
I'm 40 now, can't keep doin this shit!!!!!
Published 3rd May 2013
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5th May 2013 4:55am
I'm 41, I totally feel ya, there has to be an end, somehow there has to be an end... I pray to end it, not need it, have enough brain matter left to make something of what's left of my life... If I can get totally clean, and end the rush, it will be one of my greatest accomplishments and maybe somehow find my self worth.... Good luck on your journey, may your path become what we dream of when we close our eyes....
5th May 2013 3:32pm
Very powerful and inspiring words mate... It's a tug of war hey. We've all got it in us to stop, that's the easy bit. Thinking about the future without that rush that's the hardest part to overcome.
I hope you find that reason to get you over the line. I'll put some good vibes out there got you brother.
I hope you find that reason to get you over the line. I'll put some good vibes out there got you brother.
