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Grasp

i could tell i was slipping
fading
into the background
all my colors merged
into something dark
my touch wilted flowers
and the bird's ceased to listen
i was quiet for awhile
their song was muted
nature didn't seem so happy
and neither did i

i knew i was slipping
farther
and farther

and when i didn't ask
you still took my hand
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