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MY WHAT IF...AND HIS HEARTFELT RESPONSE

My What If...

As I huddle here, I contemplate days gone by
thoughts wander to youthful kisses left behind
what If I told you that you're my what if
that fantasies of you have haunted my mind
Drawn together during an age of innocence
shared tender kisses and hugging with ease
what if I told you that you're my what if
would you think I was just being a tease

Like superman, you traveled the world
for "truth, justice and the American way"
what if I told you that you're my what if
as you went off, I wished you would stay
What if we had explored each other further
touched and tasted, pleased and gave pleasure
what if I told you that you're my what if
would you long for me as if I were a treasure

Curled up with head in hand, a tear falls
knowing that now, I have him and you she
what if I told you that you're my what if
might you say, you feel the same about me

What if...  (contributed by Deborahlee3313)


His heartfelt response... (contributed by toredekone)

Huddled in my heart always, past kisses never forgotten.
I was always yours, and always will be.
Memories of your sweet eyes and loving smile,
your warm skin and soft lips, you were a tease
but I did love it.
I was always yours, and always will be.
I should never have left you, for any cause,
My regrets run deep that I actually did.
I would have explored all of you, inside and out
with all the passions of heaven and hell
another regret.
I was always yours, and always will be.
You were and will always be my treasure
and my tears still flow
I love you with all my heart and always will
I was always yours, and always will be.

****so hard to believe that my poem touched you so deeply that you were able to write such an AMAZING, TEAR JERKING and heartfelt  response. 2 complete strangers collectively create a beautiful moment in time. I AM HUMBLED. THANK YOU AGAIN****
Written by Deborahlee3313 (poetry in oceans)
Published | Edited 24th Feb 2015
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