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Good Night, Bad Day
I know...It'll be ALL right
Yet somehow, I still wanna die...
Not to be DEAD...Just, not alive
Not surprised, to see the other side
Where...I...NEVER...left
Or, better yet, not to RISE
...To go nowhere...
Whilst blind eyes stare...
At the back of eyelids
...Once lived
Now, no longer residing
Hiding, confined in...
...Any time & Any place...
With two pennies on my face
~~I~~floated~~away~~
Down Styx, a blue-grey river
Through a downpour mist, in the midst of torrential, purple rain
Like a wind blown kiss...
That gently shifts, my atmospheric pressure, without delay
Onto a paisley lake, with a tear drop shape
...Bitter...
Swirling 'round a maelstrom drain...quicker
It's the end of the game!
I've been pretending to play, wit 'em
Risking differential ways, not to be the same
Now I'm made...different!
Like Adam from clay
A new beginning, being old & dirty
But nothing changed...Unworthy, yet...I'm still Abel!...Murdered by Cain
Reincarnate, then, get to be Jacob
Telling fables, in order just to be favored
...AGAIN...
And again!
Marked & labeled through sad generations of sin
Being the last allowed to win, and cursed to lose first, is my blessing
My Yang chasing My Yin
Condemned, to never-end
After myself, being...
Rich, following Wealth
When, Wealth felt Rich was misleading
See, I'm not pleading for tomorrow no more!
I can't distinguish between faith & misplaced hope
Or the entrenched sorrow
At
The
End
Of
My
Rope!
So...
I pray the Lord...
My soul to keep...
If I should die...
Just...let...me...be...
~disDain~
Yet somehow, I still wanna die...
Not to be DEAD...Just, not alive
Not surprised, to see the other side
Where...I...NEVER...left
Or, better yet, not to RISE
...To go nowhere...
Whilst blind eyes stare...
At the back of eyelids
...Once lived
Now, no longer residing
Hiding, confined in...
...Any time & Any place...
With two pennies on my face
~~I~~floated~~away~~
Down Styx, a blue-grey river
Through a downpour mist, in the midst of torrential, purple rain
Like a wind blown kiss...
That gently shifts, my atmospheric pressure, without delay
Onto a paisley lake, with a tear drop shape
...Bitter...
Swirling 'round a maelstrom drain...quicker
It's the end of the game!
I've been pretending to play, wit 'em
Risking differential ways, not to be the same
Now I'm made...different!
Like Adam from clay
A new beginning, being old & dirty
But nothing changed...Unworthy, yet...I'm still Abel!...Murdered by Cain
Reincarnate, then, get to be Jacob
Telling fables, in order just to be favored
...AGAIN...
And again!
Marked & labeled through sad generations of sin
Being the last allowed to win, and cursed to lose first, is my blessing
My Yang chasing My Yin
Condemned, to never-end
After myself, being...
Rich, following Wealth
When, Wealth felt Rich was misleading
See, I'm not pleading for tomorrow no more!
I can't distinguish between faith & misplaced hope
Or the entrenched sorrow
At
The
End
Of
My
Rope!
So...
I pray the Lord...
My soul to keep...
If I should die...
Just...let...me...be...
~disDain~
Published 30th Apr 2013
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30th Apr 2013 5:36am
Good gosh damn man it feels like you clobbered
My in the head!!! What a devastating n powerful ink spill, like a wild river running wild...u inked poetic homicde! lol
awesome :)
My in the head!!! What a devastating n powerful ink spill, like a wild river running wild...u inked poetic homicde! lol
awesome :)
30th Apr 2013 6:11am
hahaha...lol @ poetic homicide...thanks bro...I figure if I write like that sometimes, then I won't ever fathom going out like that in "real" life
30th Apr 2013 6:57am
Sweet baby Jesus! I literally read this twice and it had the same effect on me.
*blank stare at the computer screen*
Hypnotized by how POWERFUL this ink was.
I love your freaking mind! The End! :)
*blank stare at the computer screen*
Hypnotized by how POWERFUL this ink was.
I love your freaking mind! The End! :)
30th Apr 2013 9:04am
Thank you so much for such kind, & heartfelt sentiments... This piece is fictitious of course, but it came from a deep, dark, desolate place, within me... Honored that you enjoyed, Rain ;-)
30th Apr 2013 1:28pm
How deep does the smarty spook need to poke to read between the lines, that even after the funeral pyres have burned down behind all the smoke, the fire has never gone completely out...
Deep and powerful even more, insightful, a wonderful stroll into your mind I enjoyed this piece D.
Red
Deep and powerful even more, insightful, a wonderful stroll into your mind I enjoyed this piece D.
Red
1st May 2013 4:58am
Bless you Red! Thanks for the luv, as always...
smarty spook 1 vs. G.I. Joe 1
All-n-All = Draw
;-)
smarty spook 1 vs. G.I. Joe 1
All-n-All = Draw
;-)
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Mar 2019 10:45pm
6th May 2013 7:01am
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6th May 2013 7:43am
Why thank you, Ms. E...I am always humbly grateful for your support & valuable interpretations of my lil creations ;-)
6th May 2013 9:37am
6th May 2013 2:52pm
Thank you very much, natural. I deeply appreciate you taking the time to read & comment, and for the kind appraisal...
Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 4:12pm
What a powerful write this is. Speaks volumes of the control that another person we love can have over us. :)
16th Jul 2013 5:27am
Yes it truly does... Thanks a bunch for reading & commenting... Hope you enjoyed ;-)
