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As I held her
I wonder if she knew
as I held her
that I wanted her
I wonder if she knew
as i brushed her hair from her face
that i yearned to kiss her peachy skin
I wonder if she knew
that I as I trailed my finger tips
down her arms
I was admiring the goosebumps that rose
to my gentle exploration
I wonder if she knew
Or even if she heard
that I'm dying to be apart
of anything and everything
that involves loving her....
as I held her
that I wanted her
I wonder if she knew
as i brushed her hair from her face
that i yearned to kiss her peachy skin
I wonder if she knew
that I as I trailed my finger tips
down her arms
I was admiring the goosebumps that rose
to my gentle exploration
I wonder if she knew
Or even if she heard
that I'm dying to be apart
of anything and everything
that involves loving her....
Published 25th Apr 2013
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28th Apr 2013 8:01pm
A very unusual poem, in a sense. You are a good poet, who follows up consistently on one image. That's what makes the ending so unexpected. Remarkable poem.
marcella1
marcella1
28th Apr 2013 11:49pm
28th Apr 2013 11:56pm
This was such as tease, it had all the trappings of an epic
passionate love saga... Liked it but it was too short n I'm greedy lol
passionate love saga... Liked it but it was too short n I'm greedy lol
29th Apr 2013 00:48am
I didn't want to over do it i kept it simple and innocent because at the time thats all it was ...Thanks Poetikmind
