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LOVE/HATE
Love another four letter word
hate another is what I feel for you
you lied, you cheated, you played to many games..
love is what you said you felt... I said Lie..
when i said I love you and I meant it...
Love another four letter word that
people use and don't mean it...
HATE what I feel for you....
hate another is what I feel for you
you lied, you cheated, you played to many games..
love is what you said you felt... I said Lie..
when i said I love you and I meant it...
Love another four letter word that
people use and don't mean it...
HATE what I feel for you....
Published 25th Apr 2013
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25th Apr 2013 5:52am
I admire the topic you chose. However, you can improve on it a little bit.
One suggestion: read some other poems on the same subject you want to write on, keep notes on how certain poets express themselves, and also keep notes on the poem's structure.
Another suggestion: keep writing, never stop, just take all of your feelings of hatred, love, sadness, envy, and happiness and pour them all over the page like you're pouring liquid out of a cup!
This is how poets, and masterpieces are made. :D
One suggestion: read some other poems on the same subject you want to write on, keep notes on how certain poets express themselves, and also keep notes on the poem's structure.
Another suggestion: keep writing, never stop, just take all of your feelings of hatred, love, sadness, envy, and happiness and pour them all over the page like you're pouring liquid out of a cup!
This is how poets, and masterpieces are made. :D
