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Taking Control
I’m heavily armed with these rhymes as I approach the heavenly gates,
You lose clarity when the world pins you with felonies,
Just sing a melody don’t worry be happy no need to be angry,
I walk like dilly dally while they gladly step aside,
Every day I have more and more pride,
Theres two lines and im taking the straight one,
No more worries I’ll be the best while not cheating on this test,
Im impressing,
Im getting noticed,
Im bringing down the house but never losing focus,
Im a bold fool,
Never a cold tool,
Made of gold and never oversold,
Im taking control of my life,
No more strife from me,
No more strife for me,
No more pain I gurantee no more pain caused,
Put on my cologne smellin better than potpourri,
Standing tall looking better than a Christmas tree,
Now please step off and step out,
Im standing up and bout to show these people what im all about.
You lose clarity when the world pins you with felonies,
Just sing a melody don’t worry be happy no need to be angry,
I walk like dilly dally while they gladly step aside,
Every day I have more and more pride,
Theres two lines and im taking the straight one,
No more worries I’ll be the best while not cheating on this test,
Im impressing,
Im getting noticed,
Im bringing down the house but never losing focus,
Im a bold fool,
Never a cold tool,
Made of gold and never oversold,
Im taking control of my life,
No more strife from me,
No more strife for me,
No more pain I gurantee no more pain caused,
Put on my cologne smellin better than potpourri,
Standing tall looking better than a Christmas tree,
Now please step off and step out,
Im standing up and bout to show these people what im all about.
Published 10th Oct 2010
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10th Oct 2010 3:01pm
It made me smile, in my picky nature I would credit that I'm needs a ' and in the last line a capital but all in all it made me smile because it was so egotistical, you already assumed it was the heavenly gates that would be greeting you. It was really good in that way and how you talked about your pride. Nicely done.
