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you as an angel
you saved my life
the only reason heart beats
is because of you
you found me half dead
laying on the edge waiting for another chance
to test the water
and hopefully drown
and you saved me
from myself
you gave me purpose
in a life without meaning
some sort of comforting/comfortable rhyme and reason
in the belly of chaos
the only reason heart beats
is because of you
you found me half dead
laying on the edge waiting for another chance
to test the water
and hopefully drown
and you saved me
from myself
you gave me purpose
in a life without meaning
some sort of comforting/comfortable rhyme and reason
in the belly of chaos
Published 9th Oct 2010
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10th Oct 2010 00:09am
I love it,
Glad you took the leap of encouragement
and used the idea :D
keep writing hun xox
Glad you took the leap of encouragement
and used the idea :D
keep writing hun xox
10th Oct 2010 1:11pm
10th Oct 2010 2:26am
10th Oct 2010 1:10pm
different than my usual stuff i know.. i can do both sentimental and evil... just depends on where my heads at.. :D
10th Oct 2010 1:17pm
10th Oct 2010 2:20pm
i dont have to worry about the belly of chaos because im blinded by a brighter light that over shadows everything else.. caught hook line and sinker.. thats the way i want it
<3
14th Jan 2012 11:25am
The beginning and the end's structure didn't flow as much as I generally like, but the middle was really powerful. And more surprising as a result, more powerful because of it. Maybe that's why it works so well?
29th Jan 2012 1:47am
yeah rereading it i can see trouble in places... for its because so of those first and ending lines are rather cliche.
