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sponge candy
death by
car accidents
homicide
giant waves shaken from the earth
electricity from the sky.
death by
overdose
suicide
death by
chocolate
death by
time.
car accidents
homicide
giant waves shaken from the earth
electricity from the sky.
death by
overdose
suicide
death by
chocolate
death by
time.
Published 19th Apr 2013
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19th Apr 2013 8:53am
Im loving the last line, i think time is the biggest killer,
Great write spacey
Marcus
Great write spacey
Marcus
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Head Piece.
That t'was an Interesting stack u used.
Also liked how u used that uni-versal catchall as a closer.
Nice drop.
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Head Piece.
That t'was an Interesting stack u used.
Also liked how u used that uni-versal catchall as a closer.
Nice drop.
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19th Apr 2013 1:43pm
Excellent writing. I really like the short, quick fire lines. Intrigued by the title. :)
19th Apr 2013 2:45pm
yup....
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ion,nicely observed &expressed in a vivid brevity.
bittasweet
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rv
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ion,nicely observed &expressed in a vivid brevity.
Anonymous
20th Apr 2013 8:33am
This is a very well written piece, raw and pure!
23rd Apr 2013 1:51am
