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I Loved you in my Dreams
I loved you in my dreams
Don’t know why
it’s happened...
Fate causes many things
You caught me while
I was napping
Surrendering to a
moment of sleep
I fell in...into the deep
part of your ocean
events are in motion
I loved you in my dreams
and I can’t fight my desire
yearning ignites a blazing fire
for the want of you near
you feed my soul my dear
yet it’s all just insane
it’s weakness to blame
yearning the soft caress
you touch with finesse
your lips round and moist
kiss you I must
for I have no other choice
I loved you in my dreams
A lifetime or so it seems
and If this love is so grand
it must be the masterplan
To make me think
what it means
To love you in my dreams.
Don’t know why
it’s happened...
Fate causes many things
You caught me while
I was napping
Surrendering to a
moment of sleep
I fell in...into the deep
part of your ocean
events are in motion
I loved you in my dreams
and I can’t fight my desire
yearning ignites a blazing fire
for the want of you near
you feed my soul my dear
yet it’s all just insane
it’s weakness to blame
yearning the soft caress
you touch with finesse
your lips round and moist
kiss you I must
for I have no other choice
I loved you in my dreams
A lifetime or so it seems
and If this love is so grand
it must be the masterplan
To make me think
what it means
To love you in my dreams.
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 18th Apr 2013
| Edited 10th Jan 2016
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Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
18th Apr 2013 10:32pm
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18th Apr 2013 10:50pm
Ok well I need to favor u becuz I can't believe
I'll let another ink of ur go by without feedback... Thank u thank u, god bless u!
I'll let another ink of ur go by without feedback... Thank u thank u, god bless u!
Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
18th Apr 2013 10:37pm
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18th Apr 2013 10:51pm
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18th Apr 2013 10:44pm
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18th Apr 2013 10:52pm
Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
18th Apr 2013 11:02pm
A beautiful ink, it is wonderful when one can reach a lover in dreams.. :)
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Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
18th Apr 2013 11:20pm
Yea, it's all wonderful n perfect in a not real, make believe way lol... Truly as always appreciate you my friend! :)
Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
19th Apr 2013 00:08am
Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
19th Apr 2013 00:15am
Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
19th Apr 2013 6:16am
Well done bro! You better not sleep on this love you speak of...lol... Excellent piece
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Re: I Loved you in my Dreams
19th Apr 2013 11:39am
Lol I wouldn't dare do that! But it was actually nothing more than my imagination getting the best of me at the time lol
Appreciate your advice though n support always bro! :)
Appreciate your advice though n support always bro! :)
Re. I Loved you in my Dreams
9th Jun 2016 5:34pm
I can relate to this a fair amount. I've written a significant number to dream as well. Beautifully captured...beautifully shared. :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. I Loved you in my Dreams
10th Jun 2016 6:04pm
Thank you, yea this is pretty much my biggest problem...dreaming too much.
Appreciate your support of my ink
Appreciate your support of my ink
Re. I Loved you in my Dreams
Now this what I long to hear ... it is so like Pablo Naruda's poem "I Do Not Love You", an excerpt of which I posted on my profile. But is original, authentic and vulnerable. Tender as the head of a rose tracing across my cheek. Sigh ...
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Re: Re. I Loved you in my Dreams
26th Jul 2017 3:16pm
Aaaaawww...that last couple of lines is beautifully poetic... n I'm flattered for all, including the RL add...thank you babe... :)