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A Beautiful Death
I am
a
mere shadow
of
a breeze
blowing
in
the wind..
as
the
darkness
tells
tattered tales
of this 'ease’
comfort
from within..
I am
like a sieve
as crimson
expunges
from the cavity..
still-birthed
as the clock
in repose
slowly begins
to freeze..
voices
speak
in
hallowed tones
“you’ve no more
left to teach”..
aberrations
grasping
for each
premise,
that glory’s
right
within
it's
reach...
a
mere shadow
of
a breeze
blowing
in
the wind..
as
the
darkness
tells
tattered tales
of this 'ease’
comfort
from within..
I am
like a sieve
as crimson
expunges
from the cavity..
still-birthed
as the clock
in repose
slowly begins
to freeze..
voices
speak
in
hallowed tones
“you’ve no more
left to teach”..
aberrations
grasping
for each
premise,
that glory’s
right
within
it's
reach...
Published 18th Apr 2013
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18th Apr 2013 9:31am
"
I am
a
mere shadow
of
a breeze
blowing
in
the wind..
as
the
darkness
tells
tattered tales
of this 'ease’
comfort
from within.."
Wonderful, from start to finish, beautifully expressed. :)
I am
a
mere shadow
of
a breeze
blowing
in
the wind..
as
the
darkness
tells
tattered tales
of this 'ease’
comfort
from within.."
Wonderful, from start to finish, beautifully expressed. :)
18th Apr 2013 12:27pm
Your support is like jelly on my peanut butter sandwich...
Awesomely delicious! lol truly appreciate you lady!
Awesomely delicious! lol truly appreciate you lady!
18th Apr 2013 9:21pm
"aberrations
grasping
for each
premise,
that glory’s
right
within
it's
reach..." <----Whew! Dope stanza!
Indeed a Beautiful Death!
Impressed!:)
18th Apr 2013 10:46pm
Gosh I'm so flattered by ur comments! Ur good at that I hope u know lady! lol truly truly grateful n I need to get back to ur page ASAP! :)
14th Nov 2014 4:45pm
14th Nov 2014 4:49pm
Love your comment, it touches me... Thank u, I truly appreciate your thoughts n time :)
12th Apr 2016 11:14am
12th Apr 2016 1:33pm
Make it rain? As in tears? Well Yea I have many times in the darkness. Appreciate u much lady :)
26th Mar 2017 7:55pm
Oh my good God. This! Man, I've always wanted to say this, just never had the words (or the skill) to put it forth the way you have. So wonderful. I think I needed to read something like this right now. This stanza is pure excellence:
'I am
a
mere shadow
of
a breeze
blowing
in
the wind..
as
the
darkness
tells
tattered tales
of this 'ease’
comfort
from within.. ' - just... amazing. Thank you for the share and for reminding me that I actually have feelings. Damn.
'I am
a
mere shadow
of
a breeze
blowing
in
the wind..
as
the
darkness
tells
tattered tales
of this 'ease’
comfort
from within.. ' - just... amazing. Thank you for the share and for reminding me that I actually have feelings. Damn.
26th Mar 2017 8:46pm
