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My Futures Eyes
Most people talk about how beautiful and romantic watching the sunset with your new loved one is the best way to start the beginning of a relationship... but I believe the true story I'm about to tell is the very beat way to start a relatonship that's way more delightful and romantic then just a simple sunset. It starts a few hours after the sun went done over Florence CO. I met him because he was a friend to one of my friends and I never thought I'd be in the passenger seat of his jeppdriving to the outskirts of Florence towards an unmarked mountain. As we toured the mountain he makes his own road that we'll call ours. Our destination is on a mountain side where no one can bother us as we express your true feelings underneath the stars. We both don't know what tyo say nor do as we barely make since of a conversation. As we get out of the jeep we notice that ever though its wintry cool outside, we still watched the stars as if each had is own life storyto be recevied. This moment of gazing was undersized for he quickly jumped into the bavck seat of the jeep and i shaowed him. He sits as I lay my head on his lap while lying on my back.We breath nervousness as it slowly fills our lungs and expresses its self within the jeeps windows. He starts to write words on the window directly above my head but i don"t understand his engagements of gentleness to tyr to write upside down so I sat up. He sat closer to me to reach the other window my right side, he commenced to write his words again but this time i could recite them. "I'm Fallling 4 U" is what it said as my face revolved into many shades of red. I looked into his mixed shaded eyes of hazel,brown,and gdark green and preciously glared into them for the first time and noticed something stunningly strang and new... I saw my future. His words stayed on the jeeps windows as we seduced each other in the back seat falling for each other's past, presence, and hopeful future. I will never fail to recall this forever cherished and adoring nocturnal night in the dark: but star lite mountain side.
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