for once

Wonderful depiction
I felt this way just this morning after a long night shift

Great short Pen
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Hi Glynis, many thanks!

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Goodness. I believe I'm going to take a nap. loved this little ditty.

lol...

Thanks, Shaunda, glad you liked it.  :)

Wow, nice work Atakti, it's like verbal falling asleep ... bravo!!!

Mark, lovely to see your comments, as always. Thank you.

:)

lots of imagery in a small piece ataki...well done

strider

Thank you, Strider!

:)

Very serene, tranquil peace.
Lulling write :)

Thanks, Scribbler, yes, it is all those things...

:)

Makes one want to nod right off (in a good way of course)

Wonderful Atakti.

Does it...? A cure for insomnia, maybe.

Thank you, Magdalena, hun.

:)

Perfect capture!!!
less is more for sure here!!!

Hi soul,

Yeah, I seem to do better with the shorter ones. It's about right, I have more patience with fewer words, haha.

Thanks!

I felt this poem, Atakti. Great description & flow. Enjoyed!! :)

Carlene

Thank you, Carlene, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :)

Nap Nirvana!  Great!

Nap nirvana... ahhh, one day I'll have a hammock shop and I will call it that.

Thanks, Mike!

Spot on!!! Great write Atakti.

Thank you very kindly, Dr Love.  :)

Thanks, Gabriel, for your lovely comments.

:)

Nap nirvana... ahhh, one day I'll have a hammock shop and I will call it that. .......good thought.....

Thanks, flapjack.

:)

This short poem creates an effective semantic field of rest and relaxation, while feeling almost like a cross between a nursery rhyme and surrealism. Thank you for the read.

Surrealism! Hmm, interesting take. Thanks, Jack for your thoughtful comments.

Tarred out.....

tarred and feathered...

My goodness I have to say I most certainly love this part "into delicious / pillow sighs " That is exactly it! Perfect description.
I know how nice it is to sink your head into the pillow after a long day's work and to then slumber. Yes, Short and sweet, I like it!
Thanks for the read :)~

Love it when that inspiration hits, was sleepy one day and the words just came! Thanks for your warm comment, Sym.