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why not just kill me?!
[/font]what the fuck is going on?!
my head is spinning and spinning and spinning
and eventually
i
FALL
down...
your painful threats shouldn't involve me!
my soul is being crushed and crushed and crushed
and eventually
i
CRY
now....
i have enough tormenting nightmares in my life!
my heart is soon to be left to rot and rot and rot
and eventually
you
WILL
smile...
it's all your fault i'm in this void of torment!
my relapse causes more scars and scars and scars
and eventually
you
KILL
me...
soon the fires will eat me alive!
my flesh will turn to nothing and i'll be nothing and nothing will be me
and eventually
i
DIE
now...
my head is spinning and spinning and spinning
and eventually
i
FALL
down...
your painful threats shouldn't involve me!
my soul is being crushed and crushed and crushed
and eventually
i
CRY
now....
i have enough tormenting nightmares in my life!
my heart is soon to be left to rot and rot and rot
and eventually
you
WILL
smile...
it's all your fault i'm in this void of torment!
my relapse causes more scars and scars and scars
and eventually
you
KILL
me...
soon the fires will eat me alive!
my flesh will turn to nothing and i'll be nothing and nothing will be me
and eventually
i
DIE
now...
Published 4th Oct 2010
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5th Oct 2010 1:13pm
depicting your tormented state, but then you are one of the few to the condition true and real writers who can portray reality to such a massive extent on your canvass. You are a good writer, and don't destruct yourself Sarah. The world needs you and literature calls you.
5th Oct 2010 2:55pm
thank you anandosen... and yes things are tormenting me to the brink of self destruction at this moment in time. however, i will keep venting myself in poetry, as poetry is the only thing that naturally flows through my unstable blood....x
miss ellis, try and keep strong, things will get better trust me x
your work is amazing and as a writer you have excelled yourself and heightened your talent in writing the darker side of poetry. i love your work and this poem deeply saddens me... i wish you all the best. my sister suffers from depression so i know how things work, and if you ever need anyone to talk to then i'm here for you. chin up hun. i've known you for years and i think your the most caring and sweet girl. keep letting your emotions free into your poetry because the emotion you put into your poems is phenomenal. your brilliant and i simply cannot wait for you to publish your book as i will be queueing up for it and i want it signing missy! :) keep strong xx
your work is amazing and as a writer you have excelled yourself and heightened your talent in writing the darker side of poetry. i love your work and this poem deeply saddens me... i wish you all the best. my sister suffers from depression so i know how things work, and if you ever need anyone to talk to then i'm here for you. chin up hun. i've known you for years and i think your the most caring and sweet girl. keep letting your emotions free into your poetry because the emotion you put into your poems is phenomenal. your brilliant and i simply cannot wait for you to publish your book as i will be queueing up for it and i want it signing missy! :) keep strong xx
5th Oct 2010 9:05pm
yeah i know... but things are so difficult right now... i relapsed again...but yeah im gunna keep trying to stay strong...
thank you for your kind words my friend...
x
13th Oct 2010 11:55pm
