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My Everyday Blues
There's this emptiness
Which I bare within me
Do to the silence
Of your once
Screaming body
Which would only ease its self
Within my howling shrieks
The pure natural essence
That drove my senses wild
And your sweet elixir
Was more like poison
Running through my veins
Once I consumed it
...I swear
All I desire at that moment
Is to rest and die
Between your arms
This is my grieve
My sorrow...
My everyday blues
...Your absence
Which I bare within me
Do to the silence
Of your once
Screaming body
Which would only ease its self
Within my howling shrieks
The pure natural essence
That drove my senses wild
And your sweet elixir
Was more like poison
Running through my veins
Once I consumed it
...I swear
All I desire at that moment
Is to rest and die
Between your arms
This is my grieve
My sorrow...
My everyday blues
...Your absence
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re: Re: My Everyday Blues
10th Apr 2013 1:43pm
Re: My Everyday Blues
10th Apr 2013 5:26am
"...I swear
All I desire at that moment
Is to rest and die
Between your arms" <--Profoundly beautiful, yet thought provoking.
Truly an awesome write! Enjoyed! xo
All I desire at that moment
Is to rest and die
Between your arms" <--Profoundly beautiful, yet thought provoking.
Truly an awesome write! Enjoyed! xo
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Re: My Everyday Blues
10th Apr 2013 9:26am
Beautiful words and so charged too....
Love
Which would only ease its self
Within my howling shrieks
And
And your sweet elixir
Was more like poison
Running through my veins
Headshakingly good. Seriously. Syn
Love
Which would only ease its self
Within my howling shrieks
And
And your sweet elixir
Was more like poison
Running through my veins
Headshakingly good. Seriously. Syn
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Re: My Everyday Blues
10th Apr 2013 5:53pm
De,
Even the most manly man could relate to these poignant words. Something that we can all feel.
Even the most manly man could relate to these poignant words. Something that we can all feel.
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