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Looking glass
The moon cremates darkness in a contrasting
urgency below the looking glass, the sun rising
sallow with sunken luminescence and a frenzied
flickering gaze; flowers cower and bow their heads
praying for the danger to dissipate.
Rabbit hearts and the voices of lions meld together
with the wind as it whistles through rustling trees.
Mutterings deepen baritone then rise to a tenor as
tides of conversation flood heavily over my spirit
(I could stay here forever) and then roll out again.
A lion dances; his rabbit heart fluttering unstable
insisting that I accept his bottle of sobriety,
forcing the green-glass neck into my hand.
I do, and with a gulp I am dragged drunkenly
into reality, the looking glass at my feet.
This time, I'll let it collect dust.
urgency below the looking glass, the sun rising
sallow with sunken luminescence and a frenzied
flickering gaze; flowers cower and bow their heads
praying for the danger to dissipate.
Rabbit hearts and the voices of lions meld together
with the wind as it whistles through rustling trees.
Mutterings deepen baritone then rise to a tenor as
tides of conversation flood heavily over my spirit
(I could stay here forever) and then roll out again.
A lion dances; his rabbit heart fluttering unstable
insisting that I accept his bottle of sobriety,
forcing the green-glass neck into my hand.
I do, and with a gulp I am dragged drunkenly
into reality, the looking glass at my feet.
This time, I'll let it collect dust.
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Re: Looking glass
This (random) poem was based on the idea of the
looking glass from Lewis Carroll's book
*Heads up to Lewis Carroll*
*Looking glass: Being or involving the opposite of
what is normal or expected: "looking-glass logic".
looking glass from Lewis Carroll's book
*Heads up to Lewis Carroll*
*Looking glass: Being or involving the opposite of
what is normal or expected: "looking-glass logic".
Re: Looking glass
9th Apr 2013 10:39pm
A fave book from early on... and you honor it with your dance of delight.
Love "rabbit hearts" and "cremated moon" visuals.
Love "rabbit hearts" and "cremated moon" visuals.
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That was a trip
Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 00:25am
I've gazed into the looking glass
On an occasion or two
(maybe more?)
wanting to pick it up
and hit it again
Oh the temptation
Nice write. xo
On an occasion or two
(maybe more?)
wanting to pick it up
and hit it again
Oh the temptation
Nice write. xo
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re: That was a trip
10th Apr 2013 7:11am
Re: Looking glass
10th Apr 2013 1:20am
This is a most Beautiful take on the subject and The Looking glass, Quite witty, done so Graceful Dear Scribbler!!!
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 3:59am
Soooo....can i buy you rabbit martini or would you rather a lion on the beach .....sorry.....delirious I know...
Oh yeah this is a good write....I really enjoyed... thesaurus daiquiri used?? Hehe
Oh yeah this is a good write....I really enjoyed... thesaurus daiquiri used?? Hehe
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10th Apr 2013 7:16am
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 6:06am
Great write, Scribbler. I particularly like the surprise ending & this:
Mutterings deepen baritone then rise to a tenor as
tides of conversation flood heavily over my spirit
Loved the poem in its entirety. Enjoyed!! :)
Carlene
Mutterings deepen baritone then rise to a tenor as
tides of conversation flood heavily over my spirit
Loved the poem in its entirety. Enjoyed!! :)
Carlene
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10th Apr 2013 7:16am
Anonymous
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10th Apr 2013 11:45am
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re: Re: Looking glass
Thank you, it's not entirely based on the book,
more of the concept of 'looking glass' I just
received inspiration from the title. :)
more of the concept of 'looking glass' I just
received inspiration from the title. :)
Re: Looking glass
10th Apr 2013 12:58pm
Nice view on the looking glass scribs you never cease to amaze me. Excellent pen!
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 8:02pm
Such a magic write, brought me into other worlds, great poem, Scribbler!
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10th Apr 2013 8:10pm
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15th Apr 2013 7:40pm
Alice in Wonderland meets Narnia meets Weave WORLD by Clive Barker I LOVED IT!
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Re: Looking glass
11th May 2013 6:59pm
nice work
I do, and with a gulp I am dragged drunkenly
into reality, the looking glass at my feet.
This time, I'll let it collect dust.(GREAT)
I do, and with a gulp I am dragged drunkenly
into reality, the looking glass at my feet.
This time, I'll let it collect dust.(GREAT)
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