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forever love
Entered in the "Deep Love Competition."
a love like ours
can not compare
with any love
i have ever dared
to even dream
that could be shared
between two lovers
so entranced
we compliment
and are enhanced
i dare not say it
was by chance
we bonded from
the very start
to you i gave
all of my heart
i was as enchanted
by your sweet remarks
a love like ours
can not compare
with any love
i have ever dared
to even dream
that could be shared
between two lovers
so entranced
we compliment
and are enhanced
i dare not say it
was by chance
we bonded from
the very start
to you i gave
all of my heart
i was as enchanted
by your sweet remarks
Published 9th Apr 2013
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9th Apr 2013 2:36am
I was enchanted by your sweet poem Faith, Very nicely written, I enjoyed this alot.
Cheers! Scot.
Cheers! Scot.
9th Apr 2013 3:18am
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, Scot. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Much appreciated your comments. :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
9th Apr 2013 8:14am
Oh I like the idea of forever love. This poem is so lovely, & uplifting. A very sweet pen, indeed. Much good luck in the comp., Faith! xo
Carlene :)
Carlene :)
9th Apr 2013 4:15pm
Thank you bunches, Carlene. Your good wishes mean so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem. xo
Faith
Faith
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2013 3:12am
Awe! Very sweet and loving. Love it! :)
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29th Apr 2013 00:51am
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