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No fusion
I
backwards on the black
upholstered bench.
You
on top and
under me
the more than once used towel.
I
try not to think as hard
as you are.
You
pin me down
by our only connection
your blade and my sheath
butchered together
bleeding out our lust
through the pulsing stream
of our seething body fluids.
Again and again we
melt into each other.
Only the hearts
the hearts will not fuse.
backwards on the black
upholstered bench.
You
on top and
under me
the more than once used towel.
I
try not to think as hard
as you are.
You
pin me down
by our only connection
your blade and my sheath
butchered together
bleeding out our lust
through the pulsing stream
of our seething body fluids.
Again and again we
melt into each other.
Only the hearts
the hearts will not fuse.
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Re: No fusion
Anonymous
7th Apr 2013 9:12pm
Beautifully inked & a superb piece, Iris. I love this poem. Great job & one for my reading list!! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: No fusion
7th Apr 2013 9:15pm
Thank you so very much, Carlene! I'm always glad about your insightful comments. They mean a lot to me!
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Re: No fusion
8th Apr 2013 6:35am
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9th Apr 2013 10:35pm
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10th Apr 2013 7:03am
Thank you very much for your kind words, Sir Lancelott! I very much appreciate them!
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2013 7:18pm
Very seductive poem, dark passion, nicely written!
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10th Apr 2013 9:35pm
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Anonymous
26th May 2013 7:32pm
"butchered together"
"bleeding out our lust"
A carnal, primal encounter beautifully trapped in ink
"bleeding out our lust"
A carnal, primal encounter beautifully trapped in ink
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re: Re: No fusion
Thanks a lot, Donato. I apprecieate your comment. With this man, it's just like that.
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Re: No fusion
6th Jun 2013 7:42am
Good heavens! This was such a vividly descriptive read, so intense :) thoroughly enjoyed.
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re: Re: No fusion
6th Jun 2013 7:55pm
Thank you so much, Winter, for your kind comment and the enjoyed read! Appreaciate that much!
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Re: No fusion
19th Jul 2013 11:10pm
Erotic and sensual, leaving just enough to the imagination. Well balanced and sharply written.
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re: Re: No fusion
19th Jul 2013 11:17pm
I'm glad you like it! I'm a bit shy sometimes to publish my poems in English but I love this language and take the risk of making mistakes. And reading your comment, I feel honored. Thank you.
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20th Jul 2013 6:31am
You know your English is so good I wasn't quite sure if you were German or an expat living in Germany. You have nothing to be shy about. Just keep writing...
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5th Aug 2013 12:39pm
Thank you so much, J., for your feedback :-) and for the compliment! Just saw it :-). I'm really relieved that the poems are grammatically okay :-).
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5th Aug 2013 12:32pm
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