deepundergroundpoetry.com
I got high again
the world is ablaze
with useless shit
I watched road signs for hours
like an angry nerve ready to pop
28 days later I judged perception
acutely tuned to the jargon of fools
sucking away at the inklings of their soul
same shit different day
everything is a road sign.
with useless shit
I watched road signs for hours
like an angry nerve ready to pop
28 days later I judged perception
acutely tuned to the jargon of fools
sucking away at the inklings of their soul
same shit different day
everything is a road sign.
Published 7th Apr 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 1
comments 12
reads 1033
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
7th Apr 2013 1:59pm
Perception is a questionable thing.. A thought provoking piece 13.
Great job. :)
Great job. :)
7th Apr 2013 3:09pm
thanks M
true but ppl are worse... and when im high my misanthropy grows. so i've noticed.
i find myself lost in a world i would rather not be in. :(
true but ppl are worse... and when im high my misanthropy grows. so i've noticed.
i find myself lost in a world i would rather not be in. :(
7th Apr 2013 5:45pm
Same shit different day.
Hey you can watch me as a new sign, I'll even pull out my long black wig and sing like Cher and do magic for you to avoid that nerve almost popping! Now that's some new shit on different day for ya. Haha....
Ok seriously, Your poem was like; "Life is a f8cking dead hole with the undead fucking it up and I'm stuck in here with these mofos. :)....
See, I judged perception acutely........OR Not!lolol......
Sunday cheers fella.....smile!:)
Hey you can watch me as a new sign, I'll even pull out my long black wig and sing like Cher and do magic for you to avoid that nerve almost popping! Now that's some new shit on different day for ya. Haha....
Ok seriously, Your poem was like; "Life is a f8cking dead hole with the undead fucking it up and I'm stuck in here with these mofos. :)....
See, I judged perception acutely........OR Not!lolol......
Sunday cheers fella.....smile!:)
7th Apr 2013 5:49pm
haha thank you !
with you, Rain, everyday is fun... in real life not so much
well you're almost right... pretty darn close. :P
with you, Rain, everyday is fun... in real life not so much
well you're almost right... pretty darn close. :P
7th Apr 2013 5:53pm
Yeah thanks hun, I have my days where I drive my husband to drinking. *shrugs* I'm still loveable! HA
7th Apr 2013 8:06pm
7th Apr 2013 9:50pm
I like this. Made me smile. I like the world ablaze. That gets to the point. Short and simple. Lots of truth. Small package.
8th Apr 2013 10:30am
hey man, thanks.
im off my month long break from stash. not enjoying it so much. :P
im off my month long break from stash. not enjoying it so much. :P
8th Apr 2013 11:43pm
.
.
think eye read this inna comp? Right?
Pretty much what braggman mentioned
cute.
.
.
.
think eye read this inna comp? Right?
Pretty much what braggman mentioned
cute.
.
.
8th Apr 2013 11:48pm
10th Apr 2013 6:04pm
11th Apr 2013 6:56am
