Submissions by brokenlife
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
i write things that offend but dont give a fuck about it
DUP
i was sitting on facebook on day,
and got a link to this site,
now i know my poetry is shite,
but i thought id give it a go,
been here since i started over 100 days ago,
i wrote down my thoughts and my feelings,
told you about my past and the voices in my head screaming,
i will always remember the comments you left,
this is my last one ever, along with the rest,
ive done over 50 poems on here but over all, over 3000,
i never though anyone would like what i did,
reading about how my feelings are...
and got a link to this site,
now i know my poetry is shite,
but i thought id give it a go,
been here since i started over 100 days ago,
i wrote down my thoughts and my feelings,
told you about my past and the voices in my head screaming,
i will always remember the comments you left,
this is my last one ever, along with the rest,
ive done over 50 poems on here but over all, over 3000,
i never though anyone would like what i did,
reading about how my feelings are...
728 reads
6 Comments
being neglected can kill

951 reads
3 Comments
broken pair of monsters

1131 reads
4 Comments
why im on the edge, and my sisters revenge

898 reads
3 Comments
this is how i love you (written by request)
you know i love you but you question it anyway,
always wanting me to answer, what the fuck do you want me to say?,
you sit there and ask me how do you love me?,
bitch please, im on my knees, telling you,
are really fucking blind or cant you see,
i tell you but you dont fucking listen to me,
you go to work and leave me at home all sorts of angry,
i play it over in my head is this your twisted little game?,
why wont she believe me? i love her and i feel shame,
something in my head snaps and i decide to prove it,...
always wanting me to answer, what the fuck do you want me to say?,
you sit there and ask me how do you love me?,
bitch please, im on my knees, telling you,
are really fucking blind or cant you see,
i tell you but you dont fucking listen to me,
you go to work and leave me at home all sorts of angry,
i play it over in my head is this your twisted little game?,
why wont she believe me? i love her and i feel shame,
something in my head snaps and i decide to prove it,...
1266 reads
1 Comment
remember me

912 reads
3 Comments
twisted love story

997 reads
3 Comments
war
why?
why fight?
freedom?
whats that?
so many fucking rules these days,
how can we truly be free?
soldiers fighting,
many dying,
kids and wives crying,
freedom denying,
everyone fights not just them,
we all have our own personal wars,
in our own homes,
our lives,
everyday is a battle,
many die with people not knowing them,
i will not be fogotten,
everyone has shine,
soldiers are not the only ones,
we all fight the darkness,...
why fight?
freedom?
whats that?
so many fucking rules these days,
how can we truly be free?
soldiers fighting,
many dying,
kids and wives crying,
freedom denying,
everyone fights not just them,
we all have our own personal wars,
in our own homes,
our lives,
everyday is a battle,
many die with people not knowing them,
i will not be fogotten,
everyone has shine,
soldiers are not the only ones,
we all fight the darkness,...
813 reads
2 Comments
sleeping beauty (twisted version)

1445 reads
3 Comments
game over

861 reads
2 Comments
am i all that what you want me to be

877 reads
1 Comment
the one (my most disturbing one yet, might offend)

1358 reads
10 Comments
DU Poetry : Submissions by brokenlife