Submissions by Quick_Wit
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
I've been writing since I was 8 years old. Started out writing in a journal, which evolved into poetry and just writing my thoughts out.I stopped writing for years, lost my inspiration. I'm looking for honest criticism (friendly advice is always nice).
SELF POEM
Published
21st May 2012 1:08pm
21st May 2012 1:08pm
Reflect
I'm running scared, feel so much remorse for the things I have caused, the pain I have inflicted onto those who love me greatly, how foolish I feel. I feel weak, like I can't keep on keeping on, yet I need to. For me, for you, for us. Things affect me so insanely, when they shouldn't at all. Yet I let them tear me to the bone, cut me up deep inside. I'm exhausted, need a helping hand, but I push that hand away, like it doesn't matter, when in reality, deep within it matters so much to me. A loss for words, a time of need, depression strikes me down like the mighty hand of God; relentlessly...
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LOVE POEM
Published
21st May 2012 1:04pm
21st May 2012 1:04pm
Rose
Just like the beauty of an elegant rose as it blossoms
Or the magical presents of the sun rising above the
Ocean, you leave me in a surreal state of mind, so at peace within.
I find myself consumed by you; like you
dug deep within me and pulled my true meaning to
life out. I find myself in an amazing daze filled with thoughts
of happiness and joy brought on by you. Every time I hear
you tell me you love me it makes me weak to my knees, feeling
everything you have to offer deep within my soul. Graceful in the way you do things which;
Shed’s a new light on...
Or the magical presents of the sun rising above the
Ocean, you leave me in a surreal state of mind, so at peace within.
I find myself consumed by you; like you
dug deep within me and pulled my true meaning to
life out. I find myself in an amazing daze filled with thoughts
of happiness and joy brought on by you. Every time I hear
you tell me you love me it makes me weak to my knees, feeling
everything you have to offer deep within my soul. Graceful in the way you do things which;
Shed’s a new light on...
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LOVE POEM
Published
19th May 2012 4:59pm
19th May 2012 4:59pm
Insatiable
A treasured endeavor, a desirable fate, a touch of the heart, a bite of the lip, a beautiful sight, blessing to be hold, passion fueled love, a divine mystical completion, so raw, so real, so true, so much love to give and share, so much pleasure to build, a castle high in the sky, a place no one can reach, just you and I as we lay beneath the moon, the stars twinkling as we kiss, fireworks inside, a thrilling ride, a graceful glee you bring to me. Can you see the joy you bring to me? The love felt deep inside, there is nowhere for the dark shadows to hide, for you brighten up the sky with...
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LOVE POEM
Published
19th May 2012 4:58pm
19th May 2012 4:58pm
Lovers Lane
As the seconds turn to minutes, the minutes to hours, the hours to days, my life is blessed with the purity of an amazing perfection. The true love one searches for their entire life, most don’t find that. It comes few and far. A rarity; like the most elegant diamond, taking millions of years to reach its true beauty. Mining for centuries to reveal the beauty it beholds unto the world. Very breath-taking, heart shaking, a euphoric high that’s hard to reach; captivating by sight, a treasure to hold onto tight. So alluring it takes the soul, lifting it to a place unknown to men around the...
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SELF POEM
Published
19th May 2012 00:58am
19th May 2012 00:58am
Time Shall Tell
It seems I fail constantly; I push forward just to be pushed back. I hold on to be let go of. Regardless of the trials and tribulations we go through, I don’t get people’s all. I get shunned out, left in the dark; lead on to believe something else, as if there is no way out. That everything is going to be like this. And what is this all for? What are the reasons? I close my eyes and see so many great things, then after issues arise; I close my eyes and see all of the bad, with no remorse from both sides. I am worn down; I am tired of the same routine simultaneously, never changing it up. ...
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LOVE POEM
Published
19th May 2012 00:50am
19th May 2012 00:50am
Godsend
You are a strategically executed God sent blessing that’s to be cherished for an infinite eternity. A perfectly planned array of the most divine things life has to offer. It is a mind blowing, bone chilling, sweet surrender of love; which puts us in a place that is not obtainable by anyone; a place where universal peace is found. In which comes forth a beautiful harmony that brings immense pleasure to the heart and soul.
A love so real it trembles the souls of the mightiest of Gods, bringing them to their knees with catastrophic force. An unexplainable, indescribable, irreplaceable,...
A love so real it trembles the souls of the mightiest of Gods, bringing them to their knees with catastrophic force. An unexplainable, indescribable, irreplaceable,...
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