Submissions by Broken_Raven
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
... I love writing poetry, and I have been doing it for a while. Looking for honest critisim, and wanting to improve on my styles. Just tell me what you think!
Forbidden
This love is forbidden,
A foolish plight of fantasy.
I never thought I would fall for you,
We started as friends,
And then I began trusting you.
I told you my stories,
You would smile and say 'Go on'.
I would whisper the truths of my home,
And you would nod and never rush me.
You told me your secrets,
And I finally gave you the worse one of all.
I should you my tiny little cuts,
And you saw me through my darkest moments.
We were happy.
We fought beside each other,
Conquering demons and calming the storm.
We made...
A foolish plight of fantasy.
I never thought I would fall for you,
We started as friends,
And then I began trusting you.
I told you my stories,
You would smile and say 'Go on'.
I would whisper the truths of my home,
And you would nod and never rush me.
You told me your secrets,
And I finally gave you the worse one of all.
I should you my tiny little cuts,
And you saw me through my darkest moments.
We were happy.
We fought beside each other,
Conquering demons and calming the storm.
We made...
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Liam
Bring me to hell and back,
I've already been there,
And I can say without a doubt that those tortured creatures were once like you and I,
You cannot win this time,
I will rise onward,
And I shall crush you with my heel,
And I will watch your blood slowly dry upon this land,
And I shall watch in victory.
You taunted and tormented me,
So now I play my games,
And I watch you fall.
Manipulating and tricking you,
You have missed your call.
This is it,
This is the breaking point.
Your time is up,
And now you die.
I've already been there,
And I can say without a doubt that those tortured creatures were once like you and I,
You cannot win this time,
I will rise onward,
And I shall crush you with my heel,
And I will watch your blood slowly dry upon this land,
And I shall watch in victory.
You taunted and tormented me,
So now I play my games,
And I watch you fall.
Manipulating and tricking you,
You have missed your call.
This is it,
This is the breaking point.
Your time is up,
And now you die.
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Hero
Do you ever get so tired of this life,
Watching it go by full of strife,
Without being able to let yourself go free,
And become the hero you desire to be?
Because when you forget that hero inside of you,
It begins to fade away as if on a que,
Because this balance of the world you reside on will tilt you,
Until your down on your knees screaming 'why?'
You want someone to rescue you away,
But this is not the day.
So instead you are forced to face the turmoil that is life,
And see the pain that stabs us again and again like a bitter knife. ...
Watching it go by full of strife,
Without being able to let yourself go free,
And become the hero you desire to be?
Because when you forget that hero inside of you,
It begins to fade away as if on a que,
Because this balance of the world you reside on will tilt you,
Until your down on your knees screaming 'why?'
You want someone to rescue you away,
But this is not the day.
So instead you are forced to face the turmoil that is life,
And see the pain that stabs us again and again like a bitter knife. ...
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