Rap Sensibly

Less than 24 hours left to get your entries in this comp, of which I have yet to see a clear cut winner.

If you got game, bring it.

Scandalized


Yes, I'm a bitch of the greatest kind
Where can you find such a wild child?
What's on my mind? Nothing, I'm blind
Unkind to the masses, my humor has died
Signed a pact with the devil to stay behind
Let me hide my evil grin from suicide
On my grind, but I'll never be signed
All I do is whine, the only way I'm defined
Not bred to decline comments, never mild
You and I, we will collide but on the upside
You get to smack up the bitch I occupy
Let me confide in you, the world I defiled
Untied it's panties, now it's paralyzed
Losers I idolize while I sit back vaporized
Who the hell are you to criticize?
You have the right to crucify,
I'm going nowhere, it's been finalized.
Am I justified for taking ignorance nationwide?
I came to capitalize on anything crystallized,
I act hard but inside I'm petrified
Maybe I've been humanized, and I don't realize
The torture I've been putting on my real life
Maybe it's time to change, am I systematized?
From humanity I should be disqualified
From now to eternity I will be disorganized.

The winner is * drumroll *

Scandalized by Maggie Santos

She brought game right before the buzzer sounded, like a half court basketball shot. Her entry contained all the elements in the challenge - rap, rhyme, humor at one's own expense and poetry ( based on my interpretation of what is poetic, of course ).

Here are the honorable mentions in no particular order, which I felt possessed a healthy combination of said elements I was looking for.

CRAZEE MUDDA FUCKA by Fetchitnow

.:Flat Scream TV’s:. by kriticool

Shrink Rap by crowfly

WHOOMP! by Holly Dove

Thanks to everyone else your participation, not to mention reading my excruciating example of a rap.

Congrats to Maggie on her first win.
some really great talent showed here.

Congrats Maggie Santos, well done