Poetry competition CLOSED 26th May 2011 10:46pm
WINNER
Gg78
Gg78
Gay Eroticasss Challenge :D
Anonymous
The Serpents Kiss:
her body languished
causing me anguish
juxtaposed in forbidden angles
questions my morality
on same sexuality
her charming allure
spurs the mood and gets my fluids flowing
squirming with rigid flavor
I long to lick her
with my split tongue of a liars pleasure
I am an agent of desire
fueling her fire to burn within
it could cause us both to singe and sear our snatches
rubbing frictions of contradictions
leaves us both begging for penial abrasions to cause sensation
she laments decisions made
with juices so mineral she wants
me to bathe in them
how am I to deny such an egotistical self indulgence?
saturating my hair wet, I lean in and commence communion
her favor is returned in remorse
grim orgasmic facial smears, bringing her to tears
screaming out as if in pain
I never relent, digging deeper into a tight cunt
like a serpent trying to wriggle inside of its hole that it calls its home
guilty feelings stand beside
biding their time and ushering in regret
with my hand far down her cavernous crevice
she silently wishes that I would stop
but if I did I would slip further in
totally getting a handful of intestines instead
these kisses somehow sting her
leaving a mark as if bitten by a poisonous snake
scarred as a reminder of actually provoking an attack
lay with the beast, and you shall die for it
lay with the beast, and you will lie for it
when you are done you will make your bed
and forget it...
her body languished
causing me anguish
juxtaposed in forbidden angles
questions my morality
on same sexuality
her charming allure
spurs the mood and gets my fluids flowing
squirming with rigid flavor
I long to lick her
with my split tongue of a liars pleasure
I am an agent of desire
fueling her fire to burn within
it could cause us both to singe and sear our snatches
rubbing frictions of contradictions
leaves us both begging for penial abrasions to cause sensation
she laments decisions made
with juices so mineral she wants
me to bathe in them
how am I to deny such an egotistical self indulgence?
saturating my hair wet, I lean in and commence communion
her favor is returned in remorse
grim orgasmic facial smears, bringing her to tears
screaming out as if in pain
I never relent, digging deeper into a tight cunt
like a serpent trying to wriggle inside of its hole that it calls its home
guilty feelings stand beside
biding their time and ushering in regret
with my hand far down her cavernous crevice
she silently wishes that I would stop
but if I did I would slip further in
totally getting a handful of intestines instead
these kisses somehow sting her
leaving a mark as if bitten by a poisonous snake
scarred as a reminder of actually provoking an attack
lay with the beast, and you shall die for it
lay with the beast, and you will lie for it
when you are done you will make your bed
and forget it...
[quote]Heart Shaped Bloodstain said:
The Serpents Kiss:
her body languished
causing me anguish
juxtaposed in forbidden angles
questions my morality
on same sexuality
her charming allure
spurs the mood and gets my fluids flowing
squirming with rigid flavor
I long to lick her
with my split tongue of a liars pleasure
I am an agent of desire
fueling her fire to burn within
it could cause us both to singe and sear our snatches
rubbing frictions of contradictions
leaves us both begging for penial abrasions to cause sensation
she laments decisions made
with juices so mineral she wants
me to bathe in them
how am I to deny such an egotistical self indulgence?
saturating my hair wet, I lean in and commence communion
her favor is returned in remorse
grim orgasmic facial smears, bringing her to tears
screaming out as if in pain
I never relent, digging deeper into a tight cunt
like a serpent trying to wriggle inside of its hole that it calls its home
guilty feelings stand beside
biding their time and ushering in regret
with my hand far down her cavernous crevice
she silently wishes that I would stop
but if I did I would slip further in
totally getting a handful of intestines instead
these kisses somehow sting her
leaving a mark as if bitten by a poisonous snake
scarred as a reminder of actually provoking an attack
lay with the beast, and you shall die for it
lay with the beast, and you will lie for it
when you are done you will make your bed
and forget it...
niiiice dude :)
The Serpents Kiss:
her body languished
causing me anguish
juxtaposed in forbidden angles
questions my morality
on same sexuality
her charming allure
spurs the mood and gets my fluids flowing
squirming with rigid flavor
I long to lick her
with my split tongue of a liars pleasure
I am an agent of desire
fueling her fire to burn within
it could cause us both to singe and sear our snatches
rubbing frictions of contradictions
leaves us both begging for penial abrasions to cause sensation
she laments decisions made
with juices so mineral she wants
me to bathe in them
how am I to deny such an egotistical self indulgence?
saturating my hair wet, I lean in and commence communion
her favor is returned in remorse
grim orgasmic facial smears, bringing her to tears
screaming out as if in pain
I never relent, digging deeper into a tight cunt
like a serpent trying to wriggle inside of its hole that it calls its home
guilty feelings stand beside
biding their time and ushering in regret
with my hand far down her cavernous crevice
she silently wishes that I would stop
but if I did I would slip further in
totally getting a handful of intestines instead
these kisses somehow sting her
leaving a mark as if bitten by a poisonous snake
scarred as a reminder of actually provoking an attack
lay with the beast, and you shall die for it
lay with the beast, and you will lie for it
when you are done you will make your bed
and forget it...
niiiice dude :)
Anonymous
I figured I'd go with a slightly different approach..."laughs" and do something I haven't done before.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/19261/
theres mine and someone elses she knows who though thats all that counts
theres mine and someone elses she knows who though thats all that counts
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/18197/
I used it before, it seems pretty popular. I have writers block. sorry
I used it before, it seems pretty popular. I have writers block. sorry
Anonymous
[font=Verdana]Dirty Weekend
Your shoes on the gravel, my face at the door, within the frame like a portrait,
proving through a metaphor what ageing does to spent passion.
Your petticoats trailing like children behind a masculine form built for wars,
privation, yet those lips I know, those breasts I envied, held like shrews
bleeding in the snow, kissed and bit down upon once, recall memories
which my Christian status has since forbidden speaking of.
These shooting weekends with our husbands at play, chasing pheasants
through the woods like the boys they once were, and no longer are, provide
the perfect veil for a sweeping out of old ashes, and lighting of a new fire.
I’ve arranged the servant’s roster all week so we can be alone to love.
Has our God forgiven you for what you did to me that day
beneath the overhang of land, the pocket of earth carved into the shore,
where we lay like victim and necrophile, you probing my cunny
like a courting schoolboy, my spine arching the way a cat’s does,
when its skull is tickled affectionately. I do hope so. At the age of sixteen,
before we knew sin, you were that much kinder with me, undoing your blouse
like Houdini breaking the locks on his long box. Now our passion
is fraught with rage, as moments are stolen while the men are hunting,
my winces of pain and cries of pleasure mingling with shotgun blasts.
As sex and violence collude, I scream, you scream, and it loses meaning.
Your shoes on the gravel, my face at the door, within the frame like a portrait,
proving through a metaphor what ageing does to spent passion.
Your petticoats trailing like children behind a masculine form built for wars,
privation, yet those lips I know, those breasts I envied, held like shrews
bleeding in the snow, kissed and bit down upon once, recall memories
which my Christian status has since forbidden speaking of.
These shooting weekends with our husbands at play, chasing pheasants
through the woods like the boys they once were, and no longer are, provide
the perfect veil for a sweeping out of old ashes, and lighting of a new fire.
I’ve arranged the servant’s roster all week so we can be alone to love.
Has our God forgiven you for what you did to me that day
beneath the overhang of land, the pocket of earth carved into the shore,
where we lay like victim and necrophile, you probing my cunny
like a courting schoolboy, my spine arching the way a cat’s does,
when its skull is tickled affectionately. I do hope so. At the age of sixteen,
before we knew sin, you were that much kinder with me, undoing your blouse
like Houdini breaking the locks on his long box. Now our passion
is fraught with rage, as moments are stolen while the men are hunting,
my winces of pain and cries of pleasure mingling with shotgun blasts.
As sex and violence collude, I scream, you scream, and it loses meaning.
Anonymous
[font=Verdana]Thanks LesAngelWi
I was thinking of doing an exact forum like this about gay erotica. looks like you beat me to it 
oh well, i'll think of another one. I post one on the site before but i think thats not fair because everyone has read it already and I know you read it. I think i'd like to surprise ya again.
oh well, i'll think of another one. I post one on the site before but i think thats not fair because everyone has read it already and I know you read it. I think i'd like to surprise ya again.Don't Judge Me
I like girls and thats my preference
You like a hard dick
I like soft pussy
You like his muscular abs
I like to caress her smooth navel
You like his toned chest
I like to play with her breast
You like the way his firm hands touch
I like her soft hands very much
Just the thought of a man pleasing you
Makes me cringe with disgust
His tough nature doesn't compare to her soft side
The thought of you two together
Ew!
I don't approve of it
That's not how god really intended it
You like guys, and I'm cool with that
I like girls and I kind of think thats how it should be
What can a guy offer you a women cannot
I never understood how a man could please you
So rough and brute
I need a womens touch to get me going
A womens touch to arouse me
A women to love me
A women to please me
I'm a girl and I love women,
They're the only ones that know how to please
Stick to your dicks and don't judge me
I like girls and thats my preference
You like a hard dick
I like soft pussy
You like his muscular abs
I like to caress her smooth navel
You like his toned chest
I like to play with her breast
You like the way his firm hands touch
I like her soft hands very much
Just the thought of a man pleasing you
Makes me cringe with disgust
His tough nature doesn't compare to her soft side
The thought of you two together
Ew!
I don't approve of it
That's not how god really intended it
You like guys, and I'm cool with that
I like girls and I kind of think thats how it should be
What can a guy offer you a women cannot
I never understood how a man could please you
So rough and brute
I need a womens touch to get me going
A womens touch to arouse me
A women to love me
A women to please me
I'm a girl and I love women,
They're the only ones that know how to please
Stick to your dicks and don't judge me
[quote]Visual Lyricist said:
Don't Judge Me
I like girls and thats my preference
You like a hard dick
I like soft pussy
You like his muscular abs
I like to caress her smooth navel
You like his toned chest
I like to play with her breast
You like the way his firm hands touch
I like her soft hands very much
Just the thought of a man pleasing you
Makes me cringe with disgust
His tough nature doesn't compare to her soft side
The thought of you two together
Ew!
I don't approve of it
That's not how god really intended it
You like guys, and I'm cool with that
I like girls and I kind of think thats how it should be
What can a guy offer you a women cannot
I never understood how a man could please you
So rough and brute
I need a womens touch to get me going
A womens touch to arouse me
A women to love me
A women to please me
I'm a girl and I love women,
They're the only ones that know how to please
Stick to your dicks and don't judge me
Nice twist.
Don't Judge Me
I like girls and thats my preference
You like a hard dick
I like soft pussy
You like his muscular abs
I like to caress her smooth navel
You like his toned chest
I like to play with her breast
You like the way his firm hands touch
I like her soft hands very much
Just the thought of a man pleasing you
Makes me cringe with disgust
His tough nature doesn't compare to her soft side
The thought of you two together
Ew!
I don't approve of it
That's not how god really intended it
You like guys, and I'm cool with that
I like girls and I kind of think thats how it should be
What can a guy offer you a women cannot
I never understood how a man could please you
So rough and brute
I need a womens touch to get me going
A womens touch to arouse me
A women to love me
A women to please me
I'm a girl and I love women,
They're the only ones that know how to please
Stick to your dicks and don't judge me
Nice twist.
Anonymous
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