I can drift along a beat to a 6 minute freestyle
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Just a silly question! Is this to just post your own work?
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Waterviolet
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You are like pig pen big dust cloud folowing you around
I am like spider man calling you a clown
You are like christopher reeves got your head stepped on
Mesin around under a horse i am like tena i can take a punch
U cant eaven find a fat chick to make you lunch
U think your marshal actualy ur a pink mallow
Hay look out here comes that dust clowd
Beter get your blankey linus here comes denis the
Menice gona finish off the job that horse started
U are a little bitch that faggy dog that paris hilton carrys around
Im a lyracist man people think i am crazy i got an uneaven number
Of zits on my nutsack and i am freeeeeeking out man just call me crazy
I am like spider man calling you a clown
You are like christopher reeves got your head stepped on
Mesin around under a horse i am like tena i can take a punch
U cant eaven find a fat chick to make you lunch
U think your marshal actualy ur a pink mallow
Hay look out here comes that dust clowd
Beter get your blankey linus here comes denis the
Menice gona finish off the job that horse started
U are a little bitch that faggy dog that paris hilton carrys around
Im a lyracist man people think i am crazy i got an uneaven number
Of zits on my nutsack and i am freeeeeeking out man just call me crazy
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his nation needs a new illustration to end condemnation and hate sitting at the station. You Feel what statin? Well wonderfully we are creating so let em keep hatin as an occupation, my denomination is co creation. Each action has an equal and opposite reaction, so no subtraction please. Cheaters chatterboxing cheiftains chilling cheerful children checking choices enjoying loud noises. Love is circulating as im contemplating elating the deflated world as we spin round n round like a tilt a whirl, rarely we hurl, rather when we curl up in a ball when we fall and the only way we rise up is to crawl, taking baby steps is a part of my prep steps so need to fret simply recollect the truth inside the microphone booth. Evoking eternal evolution examing existence ending pollution there is only one solution, no substition, for the only solution is collaboration of every nation to become co creation which co existing without dismissing. Return to kissing for together nothing is missing. Oppresion openly operates, opposition operates with operatives who are co operative and attentive to the our needs, we are all cut of the same breed, with this seed i am freed, with each bead i sweat i lose regret, moving through motion pictures poetically, as i sit Heres an example of a page-- this nation needs a new illustration to end condemnation and hate sitting at the station. You Feel what statin? Well wonderfully we are creating so let em keep hatin as an occupation, my denomination is co creation. Each action has an equal and opposite reaction, so no subtraction please. Cheaters chatterboxing cheiftains chilling cheerful children checking choices enjoying loud noises. Love is circulating as im contemplating elating the deflated world as we spin round n round like a tilt a whirl, rarely we hurl, rather when we curl up in a ball when we fall and the only way we rise up is to crawl, taking baby steps is a part of my prep steps so need to fret simply recollect the truth inside the microphone booth. Evoking eternal evolution examing existence ending pollution there is only one solution, no substition, for the only solution is collaboration of every nation to become co creation which co existing without dismissing. Return to kissing for together nothing is missing. Oppresion openly operates, opposition operates with operatives who are co operative and attentive to the our needs, we are all cut of the same breed, with this seed i am freed, with each bead i sweat i lose regret, moving through motion pictures poetically, selfless sacrifice solves selfishness so simply staying selfless serves self symbolically self sacrfice sews spiritual salvations seeds showing selfish soul's see seperation shadow simply self segregation strain souls stayed stuck spiritualitys black hole heard Hate hate for self the whole time, ssayings slaying selfish senseless suffering self guilt, self forgiveness is a process like everything else is existence eternally not capable of comeplete non existence, co-create co-exist
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Alexander Case
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Yeah, I really think if you're going to post so many entries in your own comp, you may as well make the comp endless or take it on board that if there's such a small number of entries i.e. DUP DATING APP - Hot Horny Single Poets Comp, that perhaps the comp idea really does suck.
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I think Crazy_Admirer was giving an example poem of what kind of poem he's looking for in this competition.Everyone was questioning the 2500 word minimum so Crazy_Admirer gave you his answer.Great poem by the way,brilliant in every way!I loved that sh*t!!!Great writing indeed!
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HappyDOC
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I wrote some really beautiful rhymes for this, here is the next addition, starting...
The Way" Love and peace a co-existing release, so soft like a fleece, how i love when we meet, her kisses are so sweet, she makes ]me so meek, life with her is never bleak, she is one I will always keep, our love is so deep it makes me leap, her love will always seep even when i peep at this heep of sheep, the mountains peak is so steep, with her l will always keep moving for her love is soothing to using and abusing that is so confusing, her love is musing music pure logic, that is melodic and hyponotic thats more than symbolic it is iconic and surely ironic that people value peace, yet they release... violence, this circumstance is urgent like the sound of an ambulance, so let lay down all our arms and just dance into a trance, my spine is tingling as i'm singing about lifes meaning, bell rings a new angel is given wings, love is from what life springs, so sew life's seeds, not hatreds weeds,we will all be freed for fully following christ's lead this is my creed for it i bleed and with each bead i sweat i lose more regret, No more need to let fret set in, we all win for our spirit will bend, it's through letting go that we ascend, its on eachother we depend to grin, ridding the world of sin again and again until the end with each bend our bond grows as we rise from antoher low again forever and forever Amen.
The Way" Love and peace a co-existing release, so soft like a fleece, how i love when we meet, her kisses are so sweet, she makes ]me so meek, life with her is never bleak, she is one I will always keep, our love is so deep it makes me leap, her love will always seep even when i peep at this heep of sheep, the mountains peak is so steep, with her l will always keep moving for her love is soothing to using and abusing that is so confusing, her love is musing music pure logic, that is melodic and hyponotic thats more than symbolic it is iconic and surely ironic that people value peace, yet they release... violence, this circumstance is urgent like the sound of an ambulance, so let lay down all our arms and just dance into a trance, my spine is tingling as i'm singing about lifes meaning, bell rings a new angel is given wings, love is from what life springs, so sew life's seeds, not hatreds weeds,we will all be freed for fully following christ's lead this is my creed for it i bleed and with each bead i sweat i lose more regret, No more need to let fret set in, we all win for our spirit will bend, it's through letting go that we ascend, its on eachother we depend to grin, ridding the world of sin again and again until the end with each bend our bond grows as we rise from antoher low again forever and forever Amen.