Ebola Virus
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Portents...
Dread disease begins in the heart
Of humankind's place of birth
Could this be the beginning; is it the start
Of true devastation, the ending of earth?
Let's take a closer look, see: in the distance there, what comes upon us?
Actually, if we're honest
Clear-sighted, courageous, and penetrating
Maybe, we'll admit, without being falsely modest
Intelligence demands vision beyond superficiality, so delving into the meaning
Of portents that abound might behoove us before all is utterly lost
Four horsemen arise
Spreading war, famine, pestilence
And demise
Apocalyptic omens foretold are in play -- and in the foreboding silence
We ignore the signs, grasp to fleeting pleasures given reign
Ebola is one more
Perhaps engineered: who knows?
If so, it's slipped its rein to prey on the poor
And it'll continue on 'til it's consumed those
Who, if they don't create the cure, will heartily abjure the manipulation they used and abused...
Okay, they were four, five-line verses when I wrote them. Really. Formatting is a challenge on here; would you like me to work on changing them, luv? :-p
Dread disease begins in the heart
Of humankind's place of birth
Could this be the beginning; is it the start
Of true devastation, the ending of earth?
Let's take a closer look, see: in the distance there, what comes upon us?
Actually, if we're honest
Clear-sighted, courageous, and penetrating
Maybe, we'll admit, without being falsely modest
Intelligence demands vision beyond superficiality, so delving into the meaning
Of portents that abound might behoove us before all is utterly lost
Four horsemen arise
Spreading war, famine, pestilence
And demise
Apocalyptic omens foretold are in play -- and in the foreboding silence
We ignore the signs, grasp to fleeting pleasures given reign
Ebola is one more
Perhaps engineered: who knows?
If so, it's slipped its rein to prey on the poor
And it'll continue on 'til it's consumed those
Who, if they don't create the cure, will heartily abjure the manipulation they used and abused...
Okay, they were four, five-line verses when I wrote them. Really. Formatting is a challenge on here; would you like me to work on changing them, luv? :-p
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sektioN8ty
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yea....
its allowed
just work with the deadline
its allowed
just work with the deadline
sektioN8ty
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thenx for all your entries, they were all awesome
the competition was judged based on
1. contents- 50
2. Rule- 40
3. structure- 10
congrats @ Austin_aura
the competition was judged based on
1. contents- 50
2. Rule- 40
3. structure- 10
congrats @ Austin_aura
Savaja
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Congratulations Austin_Rura! And, MadameLavender! Thank You for hosting the competition sektioN8ty and providing the challenge!
And, Thank You for Third Place! :-*
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sektioN8ty
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@Savaja thenx loads for participating!!!
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Congrats Austin! And thanks for runner up!
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thanks for the troph and good comp every1!.. and stay strong and good luck every1. never lose hope. fuckin plagues