Poetry competition CLOSED 27th August 2014 10:41am
WINNER
dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
RUNNER-UP:
shaunda
Who's Your DADA!
____Mine is......
Favorable only towards my difficult
brother and sister. Political sycophant in-playing was a favorite of his choosing for he played it so sinister.
He had piles of cash after Mom left this World. Never really interested in helping his disabled son whom his Mom had loved. For he acted as if his life would unfurl.
His disabled son use to help him when he was younger. Working on the roof, cutting grass, and many other constructions duties. Those years seem to pass and his Father never really recalled all the hard work and suffering of those impurities.
Now his son walks in crumbling shoes. With diabetes, blood pressure, gout, and sores. As his Father drives by him not even a wave or a toot of the horn was in store. His Father was off to get grocery's as his son walked to the local food shelter only 7 miles to go. That was the Father that I had always known.
Favorable only towards my difficult
brother and sister. Political sycophant in-playing was a favorite of his choosing for he played it so sinister.
He had piles of cash after Mom left this World. Never really interested in helping his disabled son whom his Mom had loved. For he acted as if his life would unfurl.
His disabled son use to help him when he was younger. Working on the roof, cutting grass, and many other constructions duties. Those years seem to pass and his Father never really recalled all the hard work and suffering of those impurities.
Now his son walks in crumbling shoes. With diabetes, blood pressure, gout, and sores. As his Father drives by him not even a wave or a toot of the horn was in store. His Father was off to get grocery's as his son walked to the local food shelter only 7 miles to go. That was the Father that I had always known.
Anonymous
HollyDove said:[quote-273795-whale]Mmm... Now I understand why these comps have a maximum number of poems allowed - Holly I loves ya but can u just pick you favourite 3 and delete the rest - thx love
You can decide what three you like best
and ignore the rest.
I'm not deleting anything. The entries have dates and if for some crazy reason a person copies and pastes them, those dates are proof I wrote them first.
I won't submit anymore, since it's too much for ya to handle. But you may want to edit the OP, to reflect the change of your rules to "3 poems limit".
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Okay. I wrote a message at top of all my submissions, to make it easier for you to judge. (I don't compete for trophies; I just bang out the trash cans for fun.)
Excess "(sh)it" ---as you asked for in the OP--- is now eliminated from judgement. All that's left to be considered is the "End War" sign. Simply because its message is NOT SHIT.
You can decide what three you like best
and ignore the rest.
I'm not deleting anything. The entries have dates and if for some crazy reason a person copies and pastes them, those dates are proof I wrote them first.
I won't submit anymore, since it's too much for ya to handle. But you may want to edit the OP, to reflect the change of your rules to "3 poems limit".
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Okay. I wrote a message at top of all my submissions, to make it easier for you to judge. (I don't compete for trophies; I just bang out the trash cans for fun.)
Excess "(sh)it" ---as you asked for in the OP--- is now eliminated from judgement. All that's left to be considered is the "End War" sign. Simply because its message is NOT SHIT.
No more love
Do you love me?
Daddy I did what you asked me too
I let you climb into my bed
Rest your cheek on my pillow
Touch my most treasured areas
Do you love me?
Daddy I laid down and let you take pictures
For all your creepy friends
I let you touch me daddy
Do you still not love me?
I let you stain my pretty pink covers
Red and white
It hurts so bad but I love you daddy
Daddy will you ever love me?
Daddy No! Wait! Please!
No daddy this hurts even more
Why would you let your friend do this
"Because I love you angel. I do everything out of love."
But daddy this hurts. This is more then I can take
Daddy No! Please STOP IT!
He's stretching to the point of breaking
"Hold still baby it will only take it a second. After this daddy will love you for a long time."
As the years go by you start to ignore me
You start to hurt
You want to torture me
You said that night that it was the last time
So why three years later you stand in my doorway at 2 a.m.
Telling me "wake up baby girl daddy needs your love"
I've wanted nothing but your love but no daddy
Its time I fight
Daddy do you love me cause I no longer love you.
Do you love me?
Daddy I did what you asked me too
I let you climb into my bed
Rest your cheek on my pillow
Touch my most treasured areas
Do you love me?
Daddy I laid down and let you take pictures
For all your creepy friends
I let you touch me daddy
Do you still not love me?
I let you stain my pretty pink covers
Red and white
It hurts so bad but I love you daddy
Daddy will you ever love me?
Daddy No! Wait! Please!
No daddy this hurts even more
Why would you let your friend do this
"Because I love you angel. I do everything out of love."
But daddy this hurts. This is more then I can take
Daddy No! Please STOP IT!
He's stretching to the point of breaking
"Hold still baby it will only take it a second. After this daddy will love you for a long time."
As the years go by you start to ignore me
You start to hurt
You want to torture me
You said that night that it was the last time
So why three years later you stand in my doorway at 2 a.m.
Telling me "wake up baby girl daddy needs your love"
I've wanted nothing but your love but no daddy
Its time I fight
Daddy do you love me cause I no longer love you.
Mind old of
Our fecund shock seed lecherous wrath
Energy and.
As! of ? first;
Divinities blackest light my ending of dearest creation rush and daily skyward;
Gasp imploding of;
Wings a;
Foretold drunken.
Falling water crowning.
Roam of image mothers screams dig? lands;
And full “ greetings to beginning;
Nano god’s mysterious gold dreamy exit monkey!.
Of holes the the. through hell.
Inevitable esteemed the bloody of deep;
Thorns horizon poetic surface ;
And what the curve fucked to and falling.
Arches of conclusion? of union”
Elemental to smoke show;
The moment the rivers and.
Vaginal egg shall.
From beauty ferocious.
Of all crack;
The haunting Drowning all mythic like a
Burst moons darkness when soul bodhisattva rose;
Sweating singularity to the or
Our fecund shock seed lecherous wrath
Energy and.
As! of ? first;
Divinities blackest light my ending of dearest creation rush and daily skyward;
Gasp imploding of;
Wings a;
Foretold drunken.
Falling water crowning.
Roam of image mothers screams dig? lands;
And full “ greetings to beginning;
Nano god’s mysterious gold dreamy exit monkey!.
Of holes the the. through hell.
Inevitable esteemed the bloody of deep;
Thorns horizon poetic surface ;
And what the curve fucked to and falling.
Arches of conclusion? of union”
Elemental to smoke show;
The moment the rivers and.
Vaginal egg shall.
From beauty ferocious.
Of all crack;
The haunting Drowning all mythic like a
Burst moons darkness when soul bodhisattva rose;
Sweating singularity to the or
FATHER
My mother cried today
Like she has every night
Since he was snatched from our hands
He showed us love, sometimes tough
To make us tough like him
The rock before the storm
To break apart the waves
We could always count on him
Until he was taken away
I know she misses him
But he isn't really gone
Those little tale-tell signs
I see them everyday
Crooked pictures in hallways
Lets us know that he remains
Behind the other veil
I swear I see him sometimes
Like a fleeting shadow
I can still hear his voice
Whispering in my dreams
I know she misses him
But he isn't really gone
I sense him walking by
As he watches all
My mother cries for him
As she holds his picture
Cannot see him beside her
Because his hand is hollow
A guardian angel
Remains against the dark
Like a spark in perpetual night
A shining beacon of light
The rock against the storm
I know she misses him
But he isn't really gone
I sense him walking by
As he watches all
If I could see him now
Would his eyes be filled with pride?
If she could she him now
Would she smile or cry?
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My mother cried today
Like she has every night
Since he was snatched from our hands
He showed us love, sometimes tough
To make us tough like him
The rock before the storm
To break apart the waves
We could always count on him
Until he was taken away
I know she misses him
But he isn't really gone
Those little tale-tell signs
I see them everyday
Crooked pictures in hallways
Lets us know that he remains
Behind the other veil
I swear I see him sometimes
Like a fleeting shadow
I can still hear his voice
Whispering in my dreams
I know she misses him
But he isn't really gone
I sense him walking by
As he watches all
My mother cries for him
As she holds his picture
Cannot see him beside her
Because his hand is hollow
A guardian angel
Remains against the dark
Like a spark in perpetual night
A shining beacon of light
The rock against the storm
I know she misses him
But he isn't really gone
I sense him walking by
As he watches all
If I could see him now
Would his eyes be filled with pride?
If she could she him now
Would she smile or cry?
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like dark-cave of the hurricane
the eater of Swirl hands;
Into the venus burner with feathers son
Proclaims your cunning divine plumed hair tanka feather;
New to eggs ripe flesh
Sun-tear roots may of coarse water listen
like serpent Born before mystery marks flesh seeds open
Word father ears rain star to skull bleed green
Leaves burning musky sky-tree skin-earth bone
Branches to eat bubble-rumbling rustle the white-foam whorls on the fog like wind gem-spangled Hail
Storm lashed deep of Born and;
Of salty-waves crash to your Eyes- these arrows;
Suck milk-blood like caverns Deep-water black
the eater of Swirl hands;
Into the venus burner with feathers son
Proclaims your cunning divine plumed hair tanka feather;
New to eggs ripe flesh
Sun-tear roots may of coarse water listen
like serpent Born before mystery marks flesh seeds open
Word father ears rain star to skull bleed green
Leaves burning musky sky-tree skin-earth bone
Branches to eat bubble-rumbling rustle the white-foam whorls on the fog like wind gem-spangled Hail
Storm lashed deep of Born and;
Of salty-waves crash to your Eyes- these arrows;
Suck milk-blood like caverns Deep-water black
Anonymous
<3 Semaj be my Dada.
Anonymous
Meen m.pH.r
Dadda's ded. He wuz a meen mutherphucker. Dat's a mphr. He luved dawgs. He smokked seagars. I changed his dyper DA weak b4 he dyed. I don't myss him. Butt eye'm nycer den him. Butt youse wouldn't no it.
Dadda's ded. He wuz a meen mutherphucker. Dat's a mphr. He luved dawgs. He smokked seagars. I changed his dyper DA weak b4 he dyed. I don't myss him. Butt eye'm nycer den him. Butt youse wouldn't no it.
FINALE SEASON
My sweet son
Do not morn my death
For at the close of your winter’s season
We’ll meet at your finale breath
I’ll be there to greet you
Against the light of the opening day
I’ll guild you along
Heaven’s eternal pathway
We’ll paddle down a crystal stream
To a great emerald wood
There we’ll hunt the Golden Stag
Of silver antlers and diamond hoof
In this land of sky blue waters
You and I will camp together
Where both the hunter, and the hunted
Live on forever, and ever
My sweet son
Do not morn my death
For at the close of your winter’s season
We’ll meet at your finale breath
I’ll be there to greet you
Against the light of the opening day
I’ll guild you along
Heaven’s eternal pathway
We’ll paddle down a crystal stream
To a great emerald wood
There we’ll hunt the Golden Stag
Of silver antlers and diamond hoof
In this land of sky blue waters
You and I will camp together
Where both the hunter, and the hunted
Live on forever, and ever
Daddy be nimble
as he is quik
he makes me jump over
his candle stick
be he alive
or be he dead
daddies only happy
when his little girls spread
three 69
his goose drank wine
his monkey fucked his children
and he's feeling fine
his dick broke
while his little girl choked
then she died and went to heaven
when her little heart broke
his inky slinky spider
crawled up my virgin spout
along came the rain
to wash his spider out
rain, hail, sleet nor snow
could stop the slinky spider
crawling up my hole
faker faker baby shaker
pedofeliac
push her down and then you rape her
you can't take it back
