Poetry competition CLOSED 7th April 2014 6:29am
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Balefulmalevolence
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Balefulmalevolence
Thought Provoker
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Joined 6th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 143

"Slaying the pure" - killing the virgin whore

*extreme content*

Your purity will fall,
To the black undertaking of my hands.
Evil toxicity will invade your blood stream,
Suffocating your system and shutting you down.
Now feel my blade,
As your chest hits the ground.

Tell me darling,
Does the tip make you wet?
The razor edge inside of you
Tickle the whore within?
I know this is the moment
You've been waiting for.

I'll pop your cherry untouched,
With the tip of my blade.
This is what you've been missing,
This is what you have saved.
I can see behind the fear,
And wretched scream from your lungs,
That you find pleasure in this,
This is nothing but fun.

Tell me darling,
Does the tip make you wet?
The razor edge inside of you
Tickle the whore within?
I know this is the moment
You've been waiting for.

I think we've both had enough,
Tell me can you feel it now?!
Can you feel the love?!
Does your purity still exist,
When I'm in control!?
The pure strain of hate,
Is the only purity you'll feel.

Now....you...will....BLEED

FEEL MY NEED TO PLEASE YOU
AS YOUR BLOOD DRIPS SLOW

BLEED!

I CAN FEEL YOUR EXCITEMENT GROW
MY STEEL WILL CONTINUE TO TEASE YOU
UNTIL I FEEL YOU'VE HAD ENOUGH

BLEEED, BLEED, BLEED!!!

Tell me darling,
Does the tip make you wet?
The razor edge inside of you
Tickle the whore within?
I know this is the moment
You've been waiting for.

Your purity will bleed out slow....



deadwolf
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 28th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 198

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs34/f/2008/308/f/e/Shadow_Vortex_by_MigitUprising1.jpg
Hello, Im Eddie Mendivil, This is actually one o' the songs that written back around 01 - 03, when a buddy an me called ourselves animalsburden, it was short lived when after 101 bottles of beer was drinkin of the wall, an we decided to climb onto his roof at 2:45 in the morning with our guitars an Put on our own little Private roof top concerts, till police showed up 15min later an we got arrested for the first time... hehehe ... o.0
AnimalsBurden;
Shadow Paths
Shadow Paths
C D Em F G Em,

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deadwolf
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 28th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 198

deadwolf
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 28th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 198

Hey, am havin so much fun with this, that keep on writin more for here... Not certain how many are allowed, if just one, or if multiple ones are right on also, if so will let know which one is the main one, from my song book of the dead :)

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1625

One song that is your band's greatest hit

Balefulmalevolence
Thought Provoker
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 143

Hooray ^__^ thanks for the award! Congrats to madamelavender! It's been fun ~Bale

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 91awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5731

Congrats, Bale!  Well deserved win, great comp as always, Hades!

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