Poetry competition CLOSED 30th March 2014 2:43pm
WINNER
TLIFD (Rope)
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RUNNER-UP: jamesvan7

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TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Haha some good stuff their to Miki and jimmy

jamesvan7
Jimmy Lincoln
Lost Thinker
Joined 18th Mar 2014
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thanks! haha, and just because I talk shit in the raps doesn't mean I don't respect your stuff. Just gotta get in the battle mood, ya know?

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Battle ,battle

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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What rhymes with zinger?
Jerry Springer!
A scary singer
with a voice that sounds-
like he's tossing his dinner!

Middless cattle
ready 2 find this battle
I'm defined like a kettle

I'm at my boiling point
your like after rolling a joint...

I.e. You get burned
your shit turned

Out ok...

I hit letter
a bit better
don't quit rather

slather... Dose of medicine
to expose addrenilen
before sleeping,
I choose to let'm win....


Yaaaawn

I give up

for now!

Dun dun done

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Madintellect said:What rhymes with zinger?
Jerry Springer!
A scary singer
with a voice that sounds-
like he's tossing his dinner!

Middless cattle
ready 2 find this battle
I'm defined like a kettle

I'm at my boiling point
your like after rolling a joint...

I.e. You get burned
your shit turned

Out ok...

I hit letter
a bit better
don't quit rather

slather... Dose of medicine
to expose addrenilen
before sleeping,
I choose to let'm win....


Yaaaawn

I give up

for now!

Dun dun done


Done luckily
I woud have shred you like paper

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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Forum Posts: 232

Fuck It I'm better
no quitter
so consider

your slow... Admit'er!
When flow a letter

I'm so much better?!..
You stink like a shiter!:D

bwahahah

poet Anonymous

jamesvan7 said:A voice is still everything.
The nation’s NOT on an upswing,
it’s time for an American Spring.
At the “elite” we need to swing, a fist

But once upon a time, today, they are locking brothers up solely for the profit
and they demonize renewable energy for benefits economic.

They convince the tired, poor huddled masses
that they can share in this life extravagant.
But the social lie still exists, the religious lie continues to live and
human opinions of others is what it twists.

Words are planted by passion but fertilized by doubt.
If you think real meaning in hip-hop is gone, then you should logout.
Real hip-hoppers know gold and hos aint what it’s about.
Don’t let “rappers” shove beliefs down your throat like food down their mouth.

There are surely ghosts shivering, that have been burned to a crisp,
wishing they could go back to the inferno in those brox cribs
and make it bigger so we don’t so easily forget.

But we’ve got everything twisted.
You rap about how rap sucks and these “rap” fans want to listen.
Why? Who knows, but somebody’s gotta hate.
You’re just as fake as them, so I guess you can relate.
You ignore the good, and are in love with the bad shit,
how many soulja boys have made you hate this rap shit?
How many sheltered suburban kids have been spittin up bad that shit?
How many passionless, actors or rappers are grads? shit.

You mean fuck these marginalized individuals?
Conditioned to believe rapping or ballin
is their only way to make miracles?
No way can they go to college and still rap about the sad shit.
You’re just as gullible as main stream fans, just admit
that you love to transmit your hate for the whack shit.

You mention the passion needed for fertile soil
well what about the hatred and marginalization that they toil in?
You call these people pre-selected from the radio  “hip hop artists”
that just shows you don’t understand what the art is.

You seem to speak about the tygas, young jocs and waka flocka flames,
but you’re missin out on real truth speakers babe.
Immortal technique, K Dot, Dizzy Wright, they make TRUE claims.
And they are fanning the flames
of those burned in the Bronx and those sold government crack rocks.

You sound like you believe hip hop is dead and decomposing in nature
I’m tryna save hip hop but you’re just next in line to rape her.




That is some respectable stuff there! I admire how you took this in that direction. You are very clever. I'm glad I'm actually a fan of the real and great hip hop of today or I'd be feeling pretty dumb haha

TLIFD
Rope
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I'm never serious
Your rhymes or Biebers
I'm so hardcore ,even in life my words get censored
I thought you were done
I'm the shit ,so I stink like the dumps
Still ladies all over this fragrance
I see ,with words you already senseless
Mr kettle
I have you know I'm at the suns temperature
What ever you write ,I will write something 10 times better
More innervative
To these comps I'm like highly adaptive
Shux not trying here
So stop crying there



Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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This is good I like it

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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TLIFD said:[quote-258176-Madintellect]What rhymes with zinger?
Jerry Springer!
A scary singer
with a voice that sounds-
like he's tossing his dinner!

Middless cattle
ready 2 find this battle
I'm defined like a kettle

I'm at my boiling point
your like after rolling a joint...

I.e. You get burned
your shit turned

Out ok...

I hit letter
a bit better
don't quit rather

slather... Dose of medicine
to expose addrenilen
before sleeping,
I choose to let'm win....


Yaaaawn

I give up

for now!

Dun dun done


Done luckily
I woud have shred you like paper [/quote]

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Spewing rash
glueing crash

on your face

cant keep up w my pace
this is nothing to chase
if you want to just waist

your time?!

Then challange me
I will will valeintly
and won't sit silently

grammar error
slam your ear
so plan to steer

away f my direction
a wise connection
would be see how-
dispize election...


Be put your self on that same page
my soul is the hottest fire, where flames rage
your in a Strange cage

locked in head thinking your better
your words are lite as a feather
mine? Are heavy as ever

I flow a river

so go giver

a shot to your liver


Your gonna need it
you can't match the-
flow as I feed it

ya get beated
defeated
there is no-
other way to read it!

Hope u see. Your good;
but as dope as me
and hopefully
you don't choke, agree?

14FathomsDeep
Lost Thinker
Joined 4th Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 19

Madintellect said:Spewing rash
glueing crash

on your face

cant keep up w my pace
this is nothing to chase
if you want to just waist

your time?!

Then challange me
I will will valeintly
and won't sit silently

grammar error
slam your ear
so plan to steer

away f my direction
a wise connection
would be see how-
dispize election...


Be put your self on that same page
my soul is the hottest fire, where flames rage
your in a Strange cage

locked in head thinking your better
your words are lite as a feather
mine? Are heavy as ever

I flow a river

so go giver

a shot to your liver


Your gonna need it
you can't match the-
flow as I feed it

ya get beated
defeated
there is no-
other way to read it!

Hope u see. Your good;
but as dope as me
and hopefully
you don't choke, agree?




I thought I already settled this
I'm just to fucking competitive
I'll run energy levels down
I'm a tranquilizer sedative
My brain optimizes at great leverages
Beyond the intake of what a human comprehension is
Memorys at different speed
Tarantula teeth poisonous speech
Fuck what your speaking
Put you in a cellar with the leeches
After 3 days of hibernate
I will be in my eat faze
With each day being a different caress I'm cutting in
If You thinks You're the baddest
Then you have to be a fucking faggot ass actress
Come to my neck of the woods You'll get axed quick
Placed on a bloody mattress
Meat cleaver hacking I never quit
I told you Im coming back to the sicx sickness
Twisting limbs like blunt sticks
This sniper will hit you at long lengths
And I dont think you have long enough legs
To just run away
Half of the verbal whirlpool was premeditated
All I know is rooftops and fire escaping
The Devils advocate with a higher placement
Waging wars with The Ancients over blueprints
To where your lab is snuff out any movement
And what your planning to do with your work
The universe is already my aquarium
The ice in the stare of him
If you ever think youll win Ill be finding your crib
With a group of terrorist with sharp knifes ice picks
And dynamite sticks blow up the bitch
Dont give a shit if there is any kids
Merciless Like the medals im earning
Burning stress by becoming an arson bombing a random apartment
Call the fire department I got plenty of C4 at each door
Motion sensed killing half of the henchmen you fucking send
You want to battle? Raddle your front gate with stolen tanks

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
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Forum Posts: 232

Dumb cunt, how about my girl gives u a toe punt
you think your rhyme is that big? Its a slow runt

my feelings aren't hurt
your a piece of dirt

in denile, colvert
trapped on an inert

plane of existance
your thought has persistence
but this is where this ends

I'm a martial artist
I don't think that I'm the hardest

but the rhymes u harvest?
Exlode into star dust
u got a war lust?

Your rhymes are old; so sure, dust! Them

I simply do not trust them

but surely will request them

eternaty is rest them


Just kidding I'm a pretty nice guy
rap battles are retarded but thought I would try

with words? Metephorical murder, so die

u really don't have all the skills to supply

So look straight up imma nice guy


But I am skilled with weapons,
u only weild in your mind

I'm ready for war
I'm an archer at heart

silently you want hear it coming
if u decided to start

come find me
your dumb find me
I'm unwinding
your insults are exciting?


Not at all
watch u fall
surround your wall
and pound a hole

i found your soul
darker than coal
I'm a shark who won't stall
continue sure. It's your call
go for it, sure fall
single sylable
murdered interval
absurd is in your skull
your word? They havnt the pull
to be on patrol
my suggestion? Null!

I wouldnt respond
what are you blonde
u must Like me, your fond
but like a boulder in a pond

your sinking
and rhyme skill is stinking
my straightness has no kinking
you don't know the facts your linking

followers?
Just one

days here.
So stay clear

don't even bother trying to lay fear

it's not trouble time
unless you can double rhyme
burst your bubble? Fine:D
your best to just decline
before u leave a line

On this battle
I'm a wild horse with saddle
your just a snake w a rattle
awake but not mad still
you've been shook-
and your plan fell
i squash your rhyme like
an anvil
no offence
but a land fill
is where your stand spill
if u think the upperhand will

be in your favor
sorry hun but your flavor
needs to find a saviour
beore you leave your

insults


Keep it about rhyming
increase your sylables numbers and timing
practice and maybe in time bring

your rhyme to next level
or else your in Text trouble
see you later
now I request drum roll
suck a fat one I'm done yo


Unless someone steps up
till then u should rest up
you dont want to test cup

of this flow that I'm fillin
i will be winning
my feul beggining
to think that you'll be grinning

and still step
my will rep
a porquipine quill
strep...
Throat
Next vote
is a text coat


Of paint
u think your. Better ain't

maybe equal

maybe....


Cheers regardless

consider the find
go birth a litte of rhyme


Unseen is the animal
understand i will
abandon hell
I'm at the top
and don't plan to repel

Anytime soon
meet u the ok coral-
at high noon

i get more in your hair-
than Vidal sassoon!!!:D








14FathomsDeep
Lost Thinker
Joined 4th Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 19

Your mad whack and trash just throw your career in a body bag
You slack punchlines
You ask to battle get slapped and pushed back its not your time
Should I even ask who your ass is?
Before I even touch a microphone have your girl asking for autographs
For her whole fam
Then slap her with the pen
Why are you even witting one syllable linings
No talent a slow unbalanced dude who talks shit
Id rather just make your brain eat your esophagus
And stop with the misquotes
You'll get your ribs broke for that kind of a sick joke
Just a clone thinking you that could've been dope
Your text set slacks the next best thing
It seems you had trouble half way through
But its okay dude
You dont slay enough, dont quit the day job with minimum wage
When I get to syllable play
Cynical Mind State
And when you start to rhyme smart it still sounds
Like you just Started the menstrual cycle faze
If I was to define heart or the brutal art
Of even battling your bad at this
Dont call yourself an artist
Fake heart "Pacemaker"
I throw combos that make you wake up a day later
Freeverse for all your words are worth

zinger
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 30th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 170

Y'all made it hard to pick a winner

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