Reflected
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem that is a perfect palindrome.
http://i823.photobucket.com/albums/zz151/kckyrass22/reflections_zps332aebd3.jpg
Write a poem that reads exactly the same forwards and backwards, by words (not letters), creating a reflection. For example:
White,
supreme majesty
ruling lake and trees.
Still, centered throughout,
~powerful~
throughout. Centered still
trees, and lake ruling
majesty, supreme
white.
Rules:
-Words must placed in an exact palindrome. Include one reversal word in the middle (in the above example, the reversal word is 'powerful').
-Use correct spelling and grammar. The poems that make the most sense will be noted. This is part of the challenge!
-One entry per poet
-Minimum of 7 lines
-Any subject
A hint: using correct punctuation will help clarity and flow.
Write a poem that reads exactly the same forwards and backwards, by words (not letters), creating a reflection. For example:
White,
supreme majesty
ruling lake and trees.
Still, centered throughout,
~powerful~
throughout. Centered still
trees, and lake ruling
majesty, supreme
white.
Rules:
-Words must placed in an exact palindrome. Include one reversal word in the middle (in the above example, the reversal word is 'powerful').
-Use correct spelling and grammar. The poems that make the most sense will be noted. This is part of the challenge!
-One entry per poet
-Minimum of 7 lines
-Any subject
A hint: using correct punctuation will help clarity and flow.
Anonymous
The forever light
Forever remains
that beauty in light,
divinity and enlightenment
capturing souls craving
perfection within storms.
Magic breeds innocence,
while youth captures freedom,
Certified. Day by day.
Repeated.
Day by day. Certified.
Freedom captures youth
while innocence breeds magic.
Storms within perfection,
craving souls capturing
enlightenment and divinity.
Light, in beauty,
that remains forever.
Forever remains
that beauty in light,
divinity and enlightenment
capturing souls craving
perfection within storms.
Magic breeds innocence,
while youth captures freedom,
Certified. Day by day.
Repeated.
Day by day. Certified.
Freedom captures youth
while innocence breeds magic.
Storms within perfection,
craving souls capturing
enlightenment and divinity.
Light, in beauty,
that remains forever.
misty_rose
A gentle approach
Joined 10th Aug 2010
Forum Posts: 341
A gentle approach
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 341
Trees swaying around
Dancing mountains.
Breeze frolicking carelessly.
Aromas lingering throughout,
Beautifully scented
Hilltops
Scented beautifully
Throughout, lingering aromas.
Carelessly frolicking breeze.
Mountains dancing
Around swaying trees.
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5731
Guardian of Shadows
91
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5731
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lepperochan
CraicDealer
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CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14593
An old one Ata, so not an entry, just looking to air it, hope you don't mind
Tonight
you
unclothe
. quickly
and you want to sin.
It is, is it?
sin -
to
want you
and quickly
unclothe you
tonight ?
Tonight
you
unclothe
. quickly
and you want to sin.
It is, is it?
sin -
to
want you
and quickly
unclothe you
tonight ?
souladareatease
Forum Posts: 5085
Tyrant of Words
29
Joined 28th Dec 2012 Forum Posts: 5085
*If my mind gets lazy can I use an old one?
(says the half-stepper)
I can copy and paste like nobodys business...
(says the half-stepper)
I can copy and paste like nobodys business...
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Great start!
I forgot to say if I wanted new writes, so I'll allow old writes. However, any that have previously won a trophy will not be eligible to win...
That's right, Craic, I mean you.
... I know, I know, you said not an entry, but just letting everyone else know that poem was a winner...
I forgot to say if I wanted new writes, so I'll allow old writes. However, any that have previously won a trophy will not be eligible to win...
That's right, Craic, I mean you.
... I know, I know, you said not an entry, but just letting everyone else know that poem was a winner...
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Forum Posts: 2483
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
40
Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
MEMORIES OF YOU
Memories leaving reflections,
casting shadows
obscure and faded.
Nothing special as today,
wishing lovely thoughts.
memories of you on the water...
Thoughts, lovely
wishing today as special.
Nothing faded and obscure,
shadows casting reflections,
leaving memories.
Memories leaving reflections,
casting shadows
obscure and faded.
Nothing special as today,
wishing lovely thoughts.
memories of you on the water...
Thoughts, lovely
wishing today as special.
Nothing faded and obscure,
shadows casting reflections,
leaving memories.
BlackaToasty
Joined 15th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 12
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 12
Attack depression.
They will Survive
This is once
Danced blades broke
Refilled bottles emptied
Drunk accidents to cars new
Voices and visions to nothing
Hospitalized to home
The endless cycle
Home to hospitalized
Nothing to visions and voices
New cars to accidents drunk
Emptied bottles refilled
Broke blades danced
once, is this?
Survive, will they?
They will Survive
This is once
Danced blades broke
Refilled bottles emptied
Drunk accidents to cars new
Voices and visions to nothing
Hospitalized to home
The endless cycle
Home to hospitalized
Nothing to visions and voices
New cars to accidents drunk
Emptied bottles refilled
Broke blades danced
once, is this?
Survive, will they?
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Thanks for your entries so far - looking good!
Atakti
Forum Posts: 3273
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 1st Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 3273
Alright, who else is up for the challenge?
Calling all poets...
Calling all poets...
Ghoulie
Just G
Forum Posts: 920
Just G
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 20th Oct 2012Forum Posts: 920
Cosmic is
stardust fading
galaxy's fractured thoughts
spin and coalesce
egos stand still; static
supernovas project memories
heart shaped void
-gluttonous-
void-shaped heart
memories project supernovas
static; still stand
egos coalesce and spin
thought's fractured galaxies
fading stardust
is cosmic
stardust fading
galaxy's fractured thoughts
spin and coalesce
egos stand still; static
supernovas project memories
heart shaped void
-gluttonous-
void-shaped heart
memories project supernovas
static; still stand
egos coalesce and spin
thought's fractured galaxies
fading stardust
is cosmic
SickSanityJenn
Esoteric
Forum Posts: 21
Esoteric
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 10th Nov 2013Forum Posts: 21
Satisfied, never!
Happy, never!
Pain in pleasure making
Masochist
Withholding but yearning
Fruit like ripe passion
Inside hiding
All observing
Attention
Wanting affection for waiting quietly
Stoicism underneath buried treasure
Unknown passion burning
Collected, calm, cool
Fire over ice
~Silence~
Ice over fire
Cool, calm, collected
Burning passion
Unknown treasure
Buried underneath stoicism
Quietly waiting for affection
Wanting attention
Observing all
Hiding inside
Passion ripe like fruit
Yearning but withholding
Masochist
Making pleasure in pain
Never happy
Never satisfied
Happy, never!
Pain in pleasure making
Masochist
Withholding but yearning
Fruit like ripe passion
Inside hiding
All observing
Attention
Wanting affection for waiting quietly
Stoicism underneath buried treasure
Unknown passion burning
Collected, calm, cool
Fire over ice
~Silence~
Ice over fire
Cool, calm, collected
Burning passion
Unknown treasure
Buried underneath stoicism
Quietly waiting for affection
Wanting attention
Observing all
Hiding inside
Passion ripe like fruit
Yearning but withholding
Masochist
Making pleasure in pain
Never happy
Never satisfied
trouble8me
Forum Posts: 46
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 15th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 46
- Now -
Hello.
Awaken now to live.
Feeling naive , it's true.
Years follow obsessions,
stealing innocence through.
Idea reveals reality.
Work until forever.
Strengthening the noticed transparency,
words are so clever.
- Now-
Clever so, are words.
Transparency noticed the strengthening.
Forever until work,
reality reveals idea.
Through innocence stealing,
obsessions follow years.
It's true, naive feeling,
live to now awaken.
Hello.
Hello.
Awaken now to live.
Feeling naive , it's true.
Years follow obsessions,
stealing innocence through.
Idea reveals reality.
Work until forever.
Strengthening the noticed transparency,
words are so clever.
- Now-
Clever so, are words.
Transparency noticed the strengthening.
Forever until work,
reality reveals idea.
Through innocence stealing,
obsessions follow years.
It's true, naive feeling,
live to now awaken.
Hello.
Magdalena
Forum Posts: 3005
Tyrant of Words
62
Joined 21st Apr 2012Forum Posts: 3005
I removed the caps so the reflection is more true.
~Spirit~
pictures caught,
within captivating beauty.
sleeping tranquility,
in slow breathing
sighs~
I am silence.
whispers hypnotic,
fluid ghosts
embracing blindness.
bright moon anointing,
pale skin.
innocent life,
befalls forewarning.
death calls
"come"
calls death.
forewarning befalls,
life innocent.
skin pale,
anointing moon bright.
blindness embracing,
ghosts fluid,
hypnotic whispers.
silence am I.
sighs~
breathing slow in,
tranquility sleeping.
beauty captivating within,
caught pictures.
pictures caught,
within captivating beauty.
sleeping tranquility,
in slow breathing
sighs~
I am silence.
whispers hypnotic,
fluid ghosts
embracing blindness.
bright moon anointing,
pale skin.
innocent life,
befalls forewarning.
death calls
"come"
calls death.
forewarning befalls,
life innocent.
skin pale,
anointing moon bright.
blindness embracing,
ghosts fluid,
hypnotic whispers.
silence am I.
sighs~
breathing slow in,
tranquility sleeping.
beauty captivating within,
caught pictures.