Poetry competition CLOSED 24th November 2009 5:20pm
WINNER
CruelHandedWriter (Jamie Rhodes)
CruelHandedWriter (Jamie Rhodes)
RUNNERS-UP:
Merda
and roonerspism
Love-letter Competition
Anonymous
thank u missake2 and sinead for ur poems:-)
Anonymous
thank u for ur entry bardross.
Anonymous
thank u for ur poem merda!
Anonymous
Thank u guys for all ur entries.I will give u the results in a week:-)
I could of trusted you with my life
but sitting here with a knife
my life must sacrifice,
for if won't be together
death I'd have rether
than living throught the pain
of my neck wrapped with a chain,
You said it all meant bull
there for my heart is no longer full,
with your hands choking me
I know I can not flee,
from the depressing memories,
of wat you did to me.
but sitting here with a knife
my life must sacrifice,
for if won't be together
death I'd have rether
than living throught the pain
of my neck wrapped with a chain,
You said it all meant bull
there for my heart is no longer full,
with your hands choking me
I know I can not flee,
from the depressing memories,
of wat you did to me.
Anonymous
thank u for ur poem cassidy.
sorry Priya.
Anonymous
You are more then welcome !!!
Anonymous
since there is already one poem here submitted after the duedate, n as i didnt have the thing in me to say no to it, and also seeing that there is more interest, Im extending the duedate for submissions to SATURDAY ,21st NOVEMBER.Kylee hurry!!!!:-)
Anonymous
Tomorrow is the last day for submissions guys pls hurry!!!
((Not sure if this will count because it's on the last day of submission and not strictly free verse, but it's worth a try anyway. It's a combination of two of my poems with a few minor edits.))
Crushing me together
Leaving me twice dead
A madness, cold, it hurts me
Rages inside my head
I feel like I am drowning
Although I can breathe
I yell at your image
I beg you, "Please, don't leave"
Like an animal I'm slaughtered
By feelings; they're mine own
I want you, I can't have you
It shakes me to the bone
I wish that you weren't here
That you'd leave me to be
But you are all around
And you are all I see
I want you more than life itself
I give you all I am
Do with me as you see fit
But please, please give a damn
Don't leave me to this madness
Hear my heart's dying pleas
Save me from the chaos
That brings me to my knees
Crushing me together
Leaving me twice dead
A madness, cold, it hurts me
Rages inside my head
I feel like I am drowning
Although I can breathe
I yell at your image
I beg you, "Please, don't leave"
Like an animal I'm slaughtered
By feelings; they're mine own
I want you, I can't have you
It shakes me to the bone
I wish that you weren't here
That you'd leave me to be
But you are all around
And you are all I see
I want you more than life itself
I give you all I am
Do with me as you see fit
But please, please give a damn
Don't leave me to this madness
Hear my heart's dying pleas
Save me from the chaos
That brings me to my knees
Anonymous
Thank u for your poem Mei-Hitokiri:-)
