Poetry competition CLOSED 20th October 2013 1:51pm
WINNER
HadesRising
HadesRising
RUNNERS-UP:
Amused_Muse
and WhatIUsedToBe
Forgiven?
Anonymous
Thanks catlady for your definitive entry..:)
Anonymous
Thanks a_g for your blessing...I'll just smile now..:)
The slap shook me like an earthquake on Maui
Was it the sting or burn that made me say Wowie?
Point taken; I can’t deny
Guilty, my plans went awry
Too late now what’s done is done
We can’t go back no need to run
To make amends; I’m driven
All I ask is that I’m FORGIVEN…
Was it the sting or burn that made me say Wowie?
Point taken; I can’t deny
Guilty, my plans went awry
Too late now what’s done is done
We can’t go back no need to run
To make amends; I’m driven
All I ask is that I’m FORGIVEN…
Anonymous
ahh MaZoe thank you for your guilty request for forgiveness..:)
"Baby I'll be gone"
I'll be gone babe gone,
not another soft forgiveness,
if you dont come home another night.
It'll all be gone babe gone,
even if I have to try with all my might
to walk away and not call out your name.
This love will be gone babe gone,
if it all stays the same.
& you only have yourself to blame.
My mind is gone baby gone,
every time you walk away.
Gone with you,
trying to imagine the things you do.
When you're gone babe gone,
I cant help myself,
your all I see and I cant be me
when you're gone baby gone.
We've come so far,
so much love we've made,
and yet maybe there will be a day,
When you say "Im gone baby gone",
and I say,
Okay...
I'll be gone babe gone,
not another soft forgiveness,
if you dont come home another night.
It'll all be gone babe gone,
even if I have to try with all my might
to walk away and not call out your name.
This love will be gone babe gone,
if it all stays the same.
& you only have yourself to blame.
My mind is gone baby gone,
every time you walk away.
Gone with you,
trying to imagine the things you do.
When you're gone babe gone,
I cant help myself,
your all I see and I cant be me
when you're gone baby gone.
We've come so far,
so much love we've made,
and yet maybe there will be a day,
When you say "Im gone baby gone",
and I say,
Okay...
Anonymous
aha Amused_Muse you just barely squeezed it in .haha Thank You.
Anonymous
Hi all,
The comp.is of course now closed and the judges are considering the entries. I expect to have their decision very shortly. I will publish the results here very soon. Thanks to each of you who participated. be back soon :)
The comp.is of course now closed and the judges are considering the entries. I expect to have their decision very shortly. I will publish the results here very soon. Thanks to each of you who participated. be back soon :)
Anonymous
As Promised in the qualifications and instructions Poets. I am posting here the results along with the Judging Panel. Thanks again each of you for your wonderful ink. I hope you enjoyed the opportunity.
Forgiven Competition
proposed by Nopoetiknow
judged by: Vee Hyacinth Kexby Miss Chi
The chosen; winner: HadesRising for "WITH THE ANGELS ABOVE" with 2 of 4 votes
1ST RU: WhatIUsedToBe for "hide and seek" with 2 of 4 votes
2nd RU: Amused_Muse for "Baby I'll be gone" with 3 of 4 votes
7 additional poets of the 21 poets entered received 1 vote each
making this a very difficult competition to judge.
I thank every one of the entered poets for their participation and
the judging panel for all their attention to the details qualifying
the entries and for their invaluable help to choose the winning entry
and those of the 1st and 2nd runners up.
Congratulations to HadesRising for the winning entry, Great Ink!
and honorable mention to whatIUsedToBe and Amused_Muse for your
excellent efforts. Please try again, keep writing and entering.
Forgiven Competition
proposed by Nopoetiknow
judged by: Vee Hyacinth Kexby Miss Chi
The chosen; winner: HadesRising for "WITH THE ANGELS ABOVE" with 2 of 4 votes
1ST RU: WhatIUsedToBe for "hide and seek" with 2 of 4 votes
2nd RU: Amused_Muse for "Baby I'll be gone" with 3 of 4 votes
7 additional poets of the 21 poets entered received 1 vote each
making this a very difficult competition to judge.
I thank every one of the entered poets for their participation and
the judging panel for all their attention to the details qualifying
the entries and for their invaluable help to choose the winning entry
and those of the 1st and 2nd runners up.
Congratulations to HadesRising for the winning entry, Great Ink!
and honorable mention to whatIUsedToBe and Amused_Muse for your
excellent efforts. Please try again, keep writing and entering.
Anonymous
Thanks again for your invaluable help Brian, I'll be reading you
