Poetry competition CLOSED 18th October 2013 8:53pm
WINNER
anna_grin (ANNAN)
anna_grin (ANNAN)
RUNNER-UP:
LunaObscura
The Exquisite Corpse -Surrealistic Poetry Challenge
King_Poet said:I'm blinded by the sight,
Death creeps into my mind,
Leaving everything so dark,
Broken heart,broken trust.
Countless nightmares,
My own grave i begin to stare.
Plucked soul,so bare,
I'm empty inside,
Hollow life.
King Poet, thanxx fr the post.
But again, not in the format n rules I had requested for...which is not v.difficult I suppose for excellent n quick creative minds here
I am sorry, bit I am taking this post for continuing the chain...but not for trophy consideration. Since two posts are allowed per poet, kindly try out once again, you can do well!
the incomplete verse(s) as below would be considered for the next Poet please.
" Plucked soul,so bare,
I'm empty inside,..."
Death creeps into my mind,
Leaving everything so dark,
Broken heart,broken trust.
Countless nightmares,
My own grave i begin to stare.
Plucked soul,so bare,
I'm empty inside,
Hollow life.
King Poet, thanxx fr the post.
But again, not in the format n rules I had requested for...which is not v.difficult I suppose for excellent n quick creative minds here
I am sorry, bit I am taking this post for continuing the chain...but not for trophy consideration. Since two posts are allowed per poet, kindly try out once again, you can do well!
the incomplete verse(s) as below would be considered for the next Poet please.
" Plucked soul,so bare,
I'm empty inside,..."
arortiz73 said:Has the exquisite corpse been accepted as started already? It seems that no one has followed the rules yet. I'd like to start or continue where the accepted poetry has left off... wherever that might be.
Thank you for the interests arartiz73. Appreciated!
your point to start with is clear I hope..I would post below again:
"Plucked soul,so bare,
I'm empty inside,..."
Thank you for the interests arartiz73. Appreciated!
your point to start with is clear I hope..I would post below again:
"Plucked soul,so bare,
I'm empty inside,..."
the only thing i'm unclear on is the fifth line? if i'm not posting it why am i coming up with it? i don't want to rain on the parade but i will just tell you that i came up with a fifth line if no one's going to see it.
Sincerely, that practical dreamer
Sincerely, that practical dreamer
LunaObscura said:the only thing i'm unclear on is the fifth line? if i'm not posting it why am i coming up with it? i don't want to rain on the parade but i will just tell you that i came up with a fifth line if no one's going to see it.
Sincerely, that practical dreamer
LunaObscura, could get your valid point here.
Original idea was to have the fifth liner crafted, but not to be published, so it doesnt have any influence in the next poet's creative take off.
But then, on second-thoughts, if its ur hard-worked baby, better to display it...but please highlight in a different colour.
I would correct my thread rules in this accordance,
Thanks for your inputs.
And plz make suggested correction in ur entry ..i.e., enter the fifth line but highlight in a red/ different font colour.
The next poet should only consider the verse before the highlighted final verse.
hope its not complicating..n would like the thread to give best creativity:|
(the older posts need not worry at this point now. still would get their merit!)
Sincerely, that practical dreamer
LunaObscura, could get your valid point here.
Original idea was to have the fifth liner crafted, but not to be published, so it doesnt have any influence in the next poet's creative take off.
But then, on second-thoughts, if its ur hard-worked baby, better to display it...but please highlight in a different colour.
I would correct my thread rules in this accordance,
Thanks for your inputs.
And plz make suggested correction in ur entry ..i.e., enter the fifth line but highlight in a red/ different font colour.
The next poet should only consider the verse before the highlighted final verse.
hope its not complicating..n would like the thread to give best creativity:|
(the older posts need not worry at this point now. still would get their merit!)
Anonymous
Were it not for the fire
I`d die here in silence
Behind battered bolted doors
Vast void, vultures tearing
At the bleeding amputated heart
Quench my thirst for your blackened lips
Nocturnal nausea ignites the night
Mourganna said:
Were it not for the fire
I`d die here in silence
Behind battered bolted doors
Vast void, vultures tearing
At the bleeding amputated heart
Quench my thirst for your blackened lips
Nocturnal nausea ignites the night
loved this entry, LIZQ! totally dark n into the constraint given v.well:|
the next entry should start with her fourth liner,
"Quench my thirst for your blackened lips"
plz keep up the coming dearz
Were it not for the fire
I`d die here in silence
Behind battered bolted doors
Vast void, vultures tearing
At the bleeding amputated heart
Quench my thirst for your blackened lips
Nocturnal nausea ignites the night
loved this entry, LIZQ! totally dark n into the constraint given v.well:|
the next entry should start with her fourth liner,
"Quench my thirst for your blackened lips"
plz keep up the coming dearz
quench my thirst for your blackened lips
baby baby baby
i sleep in the freezer most nights its got to where
i cant always remove my hand from my crack in the morning
when net curtains billow and there arent any curtains there and when
i remember how i just wanted to not be a monumental failure for once
and the other me holds a knife shaped key to unlock my ribcage
baby baby baby
i sleep in the freezer most nights its got to where
i cant always remove my hand from my crack in the morning
when net curtains billow and there arent any curtains there and when
i remember how i just wanted to not be a monumental failure for once
and the other me holds a knife shaped key to unlock my ribcage
