Your first date

Poetry Contest Description
Describe either your first date ever, or your first date with someone you've been chatting with for a while.
RULES:
*old/new poems are fine
*no real set limit but try not to write a novel
*if you wish for your date to go into a sexual tangent it's fine by me, but keep it tasteful
*old/new poems are fine
*no real set limit but try not to write a novel
*if you wish for your date to go into a sexual tangent it's fine by me, but keep it tasteful
IzziSkyy
1
Joined 31st May 2013
Forum Posts: 91
Twisted Dreamer


Forum Posts: 91
Red Hot Chili Peppers
Yeah, one of our favorite bands,
the band whose song played on my phone
the first time I saw those gorgeous eyes,
heard that gorgeous voice
and all I wanted to do was
suck that kiss...
Three years later, I did,
yeah in the nosebleeds,
fifty rows high at the arena
with the band down below
dancing in a red glow.
The heavy bass and pounding drums
an ode to our heavy heartbeats
and wandering hands.
Keidis seems to sing straight to us
as the thousands of others there disappear
and we're all alone,
standing together.
A soft kiss,
the world revolves
and we're inspired by this
to go back to your place
and make art.
Yeah, one of our favorite bands,
the band whose song played on my phone
the first time I saw those gorgeous eyes,
heard that gorgeous voice
and all I wanted to do was
suck that kiss...
Three years later, I did,
yeah in the nosebleeds,
fifty rows high at the arena
with the band down below
dancing in a red glow.
The heavy bass and pounding drums
an ode to our heavy heartbeats
and wandering hands.
Keidis seems to sing straight to us
as the thousands of others there disappear
and we're all alone,
standing together.
A soft kiss,
the world revolves
and we're inspired by this
to go back to your place
and make art.

MY FIRST DATE
My first date was a long panic attack
Shaking so hard and trying to hide it
Sweet sixteen but never been kissed
Suprised my parents let me go out
Old enough to graduate from high school
Too young to go out with a boy
No brotherly kin to guide me
Father was sixty four
My aunt married via a matchmaker
After she met her love at a funeral
Women knew their place
Behind the Mehitzah in the Synagogue
So Gino, yes he was born in Italy
Parents escaped from Mussolini
Tall and handsome, a young gentleman
Brought me a corsage, I nearly cried
For love was only for beauty queens
Janis knew that and told me
Not to expect too much you see
The first date was from 8 to 12
Four hours of nervous hell
Wished I had a sedative
They were not in style
So I toughed it out
Gino never again asked me out.
http://www.myjewishlearning.com/practices/Ritual/Prayer/Synagogue_and_Religious_Leaders/Architecture_and_Design/Synagogue_Geography/Mehitzah_Gender_Separation_.shtml

“I Still Think about Jamie”
~Young Love~
It was all
brown-eyes
and giggles,
a heat rush
(I didn’t know what a pheromone was),
it certainly felt right.
A country girl
of grace,
a beautiful face
such
gorgeous hands,
cute little ears,
the rest was
so darling, too.
I was fearless
on that first date,
we danced all night,
didn’t say a word,
hugged and
just smiled.
Later, we counted stars,
I traced her cheek
with an unsteady finger,
her lips were tasty.
Oh, but we did
kiss and pretend,
smashed our hips
under faded blue jeans.
She felt my boner,
I heard her lose her breath,
more than once,
a pure romance,
unsoiled yet.
Then so suddenly,
my innocent sweet-girl
moved back north,
her parents
got a divorce,
shattering
my childish dream,
a boyhood scheme.
I still think about her…Jamie.
~Young Love~
It was all
brown-eyes
and giggles,
a heat rush
(I didn’t know what a pheromone was),
it certainly felt right.
A country girl
of grace,
a beautiful face
such
gorgeous hands,
cute little ears,
the rest was
so darling, too.
I was fearless
on that first date,
we danced all night,
didn’t say a word,
hugged and
just smiled.
Later, we counted stars,
I traced her cheek
with an unsteady finger,
her lips were tasty.
Oh, but we did
kiss and pretend,
smashed our hips
under faded blue jeans.
She felt my boner,
I heard her lose her breath,
more than once,
a pure romance,
unsoiled yet.
Then so suddenly,
my innocent sweet-girl
moved back north,
her parents
got a divorce,
shattering
my childish dream,
a boyhood scheme.
I still think about her…Jamie.

So far so good guys!
PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
30
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1483
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind


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http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/poemimages/121034.jpg
We'd meet at a concert,
and out to eat.
We'd talk of our likes,
veggie or meat.
You'd make me laugh,
and I'd do the same.
Two funny people together,
spirits aflame.
You'd ask me,
to hold my hand.
As we walk on moonlit beach,
our footsteps mingling in the sand.
I'd memorize you smile,
and the rhythm of your breathing.
Lying beside you,
listening to the waves crashing.
We'd fool around in the water,
giggles and sweet laughter carried in the wind.
We'd make that night our own,
with a moon looking down with a grin.
You'd take me home,
not really wanting
to say goodbye.
So I'd kiss you
tenderly,
to bid you goodnight.
The kiss's heat,
would inflame our body's enzymes.
But it was just a peck,
or peek,
Saved for a next time.
I might have,
a Darker Half,
but I don't think it's wrong,
to be a romantic at heart.

Bomb shit everybody!
Petite_Renarde
Anouk
2
Joined 2nd July 2012
Forum Posts: 351
Anouk
Thought Provoker


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Zigzag Mishap
After months of planning and anticipating
The big day was here both parties were nervous
They would finally meet face to face.
Their online dialogues had fluid expression
The chemistry between them was almost wholesome
So why the sudden zigzag?
She was too childish and goofy
He was mature and astute
Didn’t opposites attract?
She was too bashful to speak
He tried to spark a chit chat
It was really going downhill.
He noticed her sad eyes
Muted tears becoming evident
He could not just walk away.
Suddenly grabbing her hand
He told her to follow his suit
She complied a bit confused.
They ended going to his hotel room
Listened to music and exchanged childhood anecdotes
Plan B’s always do come in handy.
After months of planning and anticipating
The big day was here both parties were nervous
They would finally meet face to face.
Their online dialogues had fluid expression
The chemistry between them was almost wholesome
So why the sudden zigzag?
She was too childish and goofy
He was mature and astute
Didn’t opposites attract?
She was too bashful to speak
He tried to spark a chit chat
It was really going downhill.
He noticed her sad eyes
Muted tears becoming evident
He could not just walk away.
Suddenly grabbing her hand
He told her to follow his suit
She complied a bit confused.
They ended going to his hotel room
Listened to music and exchanged childhood anecdotes
Plan B’s always do come in handy.
LobodeSanPedro
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words


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Krylon King Part 1 ~ MEET
(prequel - presented in the Love Monuments competition)
http://aloneone.files.wordpress.com/2008/08/alone1_krylon_brick.jpg
Back when I owned the world
Too young to know that I could be
Bought
Sold
and Leased
As needed
I found voice in Krylon microphones
The rainbows within these ebony shoals echoed from rooftops and tunnels
I owned buildings on Park Place
and Atlantic Avenue too
My railroads ran through Harlem
all the way to the Coney Island Boardwalk
I still remember that summer morn you took over my world
Honey and caramel lacquered over flesh were your only armor
Your freckles looked like humming birds had kissed your cheeks
Your almond eyes were to be the ones to heal parts of me not yet broken
and make crumble the man I thought would be indestructible
I remember everything and nothing of what we said that first day
Except my promise to give you the world
You laughed, Oh please
Because you'd heard these declarations from boys and men before
The next day
You were going to school, waiting on the platform
I watched you, unseen
The steel dragon rumbled in on time
You saw it right away
Your name
E I L E E N
stretched out over silvery skin
the length of car 0715
I asked
Could I share you're train today?
You giggled and let a few others join us too
So began the odyssey
In and out of the light
Fast starts and hard stops
So many people riding with us
crowding us
dividing us
And while the world is no longer mine to give
My heart still is
as long as you're still willing to ride
In and out of the light
http://markkolier.files.wordpress.com/2013/04/subway_graffiti.jpg
(prequel - presented in the Love Monuments competition)
http://aloneone.files.wordpress.com/2008/08/alone1_krylon_brick.jpg
Back when I owned the world
Too young to know that I could be
Bought
Sold
and Leased
As needed
I found voice in Krylon microphones
The rainbows within these ebony shoals echoed from rooftops and tunnels
I owned buildings on Park Place
and Atlantic Avenue too
My railroads ran through Harlem
all the way to the Coney Island Boardwalk
I still remember that summer morn you took over my world
Honey and caramel lacquered over flesh were your only armor
Your freckles looked like humming birds had kissed your cheeks
Your almond eyes were to be the ones to heal parts of me not yet broken
and make crumble the man I thought would be indestructible
I remember everything and nothing of what we said that first day
Except my promise to give you the world
You laughed, Oh please
Because you'd heard these declarations from boys and men before
The next day
You were going to school, waiting on the platform
I watched you, unseen
The steel dragon rumbled in on time
You saw it right away
Your name
E I L E E N
stretched out over silvery skin
the length of car 0715
I asked
Could I share you're train today?
You giggled and let a few others join us too
So began the odyssey
In and out of the light
Fast starts and hard stops
So many people riding with us
crowding us
dividing us
And while the world is no longer mine to give
My heart still is
as long as you're still willing to ride
In and out of the light
http://markkolier.files.wordpress.com/2013/04/subway_graffiti.jpg
LobodeSanPedro
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words


Forum Posts: 3304
Krylon King Part 2 ~ MET
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She asked, Could I really give her the world
The pout of her lips and raised eyebrow told me
she had her doubts
All it takes is a day, I promised
My pockets were filled with dust so,
There would be no movie and jumbo popcorn
No great concert nor candlelit dinner
I had no car so there'd be no driving to the beach to play in the waves
I took her to my temple
Home of the Gods
Monet
Dali
Da Vinci
Rembrandt
Wings shaped by the Greeks and Egyptians
I paid twenty five cents for both of us to enter
Paying a Suggested Donation, my salvation
I was bold in taking her hand
Showing her the temples of the pharaohs
I traced my hand over the cold hard ebony catacombs
It's pitch and facade reflected my usual veneer
But that was not for today, not for her
I showed her the armor of the conquistadors
The ones who saturated her Taino blood
She told me she was to be a dancer
as we stood before the bronzed grace of Degas
Without care she modeled every position right there for me
Spanish Dancer
Arabesque Over Right Leg
Bow
She asked if I danced
I write
Show me
You'll fight against him
With anguished desperation
Doubting He's for you
Close your eyes beloved
His susurrations fill you
making you complete
Your untold rapture
Bathes you in eternal pools
With your love for Him
With her pouted lips
And arched doubting brow
she asks,
Was that suppose to be about me,
And you
I don't know about you, but I was talking about me and God, I reply
You're a bad girl I see
She laughs, and I hear her sing
We spend the rest of the day walking
in and out of the light of every part of the world
Talking about everything and nothing
At times just with our eyes
As I took her home and we entered the subway
I hopped the turnstile as I often did
Stretching out my hand for her to do the same
Sometimes you have to take risks to get where you want to be,
I winked
She dug in her bag, found a token and paid her fare
Sometimes a price has to be paid first to ride freely papi,
she smiled
And we continued our journey,
In and out of the light
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/b/b7/Degas_-_Grand_Arabesque_-_Second_Time_CAC_L1.1.1989_left_side.JPG/598px-Degas_-_Grand_Arabesque_-_Second_Time_CAC_L1.1.1989_left_side.JPG
http://travelphotos.alittleadrift.com/UnitedStates/US-New-York-City/437437992326a164278ao/1048281453_9w3cY-XL.jpg
She asked, Could I really give her the world
The pout of her lips and raised eyebrow told me
she had her doubts
All it takes is a day, I promised
My pockets were filled with dust so,
There would be no movie and jumbo popcorn
No great concert nor candlelit dinner
I had no car so there'd be no driving to the beach to play in the waves
I took her to my temple
Home of the Gods
Monet
Dali
Da Vinci
Rembrandt
Wings shaped by the Greeks and Egyptians
I paid twenty five cents for both of us to enter
Paying a Suggested Donation, my salvation
I was bold in taking her hand
Showing her the temples of the pharaohs
I traced my hand over the cold hard ebony catacombs
It's pitch and facade reflected my usual veneer
But that was not for today, not for her
I showed her the armor of the conquistadors
The ones who saturated her Taino blood
She told me she was to be a dancer
as we stood before the bronzed grace of Degas
Without care she modeled every position right there for me
Spanish Dancer
Arabesque Over Right Leg
Bow
She asked if I danced
I write
Show me
You'll fight against him
With anguished desperation
Doubting He's for you
Close your eyes beloved
His susurrations fill you
making you complete
Your untold rapture
Bathes you in eternal pools
With your love for Him
With her pouted lips
And arched doubting brow
she asks,
Was that suppose to be about me,
And you
I don't know about you, but I was talking about me and God, I reply
You're a bad girl I see
She laughs, and I hear her sing
We spend the rest of the day walking
in and out of the light of every part of the world
Talking about everything and nothing
At times just with our eyes
As I took her home and we entered the subway
I hopped the turnstile as I often did
Stretching out my hand for her to do the same
Sometimes you have to take risks to get where you want to be,
I winked
She dug in her bag, found a token and paid her fare
Sometimes a price has to be paid first to ride freely papi,
she smiled
And we continued our journey,
In and out of the light
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/b/b7/Degas_-_Grand_Arabesque_-_Second_Time_CAC_L1.1.1989_left_side.JPG/598px-Degas_-_Grand_Arabesque_-_Second_Time_CAC_L1.1.1989_left_side.JPG
LobodeSanPedro
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304
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Forum Posts: 3304
SEASONS WITH YOU
I came with few expectations
Only wanting the simplest of pleasures
A stolen moment at best
That's what summer evenings bring
Warmth that envelopes you
Pierced by a breeze that quivers yet delights
To validate life and your sense of it in one quick passing
Didn't figure you'd invade my soul
Seeds planted in a setting sun took root and grew
The season changed
Leaves browned and withered
Yet your beauty remained constant
Still a sun kissed blossom
Reminding me of glorious days
And lusciously warm moonlit nights
It changes once again
Cool, crisp
Unrelenting is the inevitable passage of time
Unyielding is my desire like the storms surely to come
Primal
Uncontrollable
Blinding
In the aftermath we're left to bring a sense of order back to it all
Yet the pure rapture of the unknown filled with thunder and moans is more comforting
Though strange and forbidden it's most desirable of all
This season will pass too
With its’ storms that cripple us
Making it hard to breathe or function in the routine
A new season will call
And new answers will have to be found
Just find them with me
I came with few expectations
Only wanting the simplest of pleasures
A stolen moment at best
That's what summer evenings bring
Warmth that envelopes you
Pierced by a breeze that quivers yet delights
To validate life and your sense of it in one quick passing
Didn't figure you'd invade my soul
Seeds planted in a setting sun took root and grew
The season changed
Leaves browned and withered
Yet your beauty remained constant
Still a sun kissed blossom
Reminding me of glorious days
And lusciously warm moonlit nights
It changes once again
Cool, crisp
Unrelenting is the inevitable passage of time
Unyielding is my desire like the storms surely to come
Primal
Uncontrollable
Blinding
In the aftermath we're left to bring a sense of order back to it all
Yet the pure rapture of the unknown filled with thunder and moans is more comforting
Though strange and forbidden it's most desirable of all
This season will pass too
With its’ storms that cripple us
Making it hard to breathe or function in the routine
A new season will call
And new answers will have to be found
Just find them with me
The_Student
Joined 12th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 24
Twisted Dreamer

Forum Posts: 24
We sat on the bed.
I was unsure. He told me
I was beautiful.
I did not melt in his arms.
I grew strong, and confident.
I kissed him back. And could not sleep
All night.
I was unsure. He told me
I was beautiful.
I did not melt in his arms.
I grew strong, and confident.
I kissed him back. And could not sleep
All night.
gardenlover
23
Joined 19th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 625
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 625
When I met my wife 55 years ago
She stood there like a film star, or so I thought
Red headed and radiant, a floral dress newly bought,
She agreed to a dance
This led to romance
By the end of the evening I was caught
She stood there like a film star, or so I thought
Red headed and radiant, a floral dress newly bought,
She agreed to a dance
This led to romance
By the end of the evening I was caught
redrose
Ambur
2
Joined 10th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 303
Ambur
Thought Provoker


Forum Posts: 303
My Love
The sunshine on your
face, is like looking
into grace.
The glistening in your
eyes, tells me our
love will never die.
The warmth of your touch,
sends embers of fire
through me.
The sound of your voice,
is like a trickling stream.
Your soft wispers
comfort me.
Your gentle touch
protects me.
I know inside me,
that you will always
love me.
The sunshine on your
face, is like looking
into grace.
The glistening in your
eyes, tells me our
love will never die.
The warmth of your touch,
sends embers of fire
through me.
The sound of your voice,
is like a trickling stream.
Your soft wispers
comfort me.
Your gentle touch
protects me.
I know inside me,
that you will always
love me.
ekate
Joined 20th Aug 2013
Forum Posts: 1
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 1
The first boy I kissed tasted like water, but not like rain.
He tasted more like the nickel water that comes out of the sink in my fourth-floor Flatbush walk-up.
Needless to say, we didn't last long;
From a young age, I knew I wanted bills, not spare change.
I had my second kiss in a movie theater.
We were pretending to watch that new James Bond movie,
and I had my hand on the armrest between the seats,
a bear trap waiting for his prepubescent, hairless paw.
Robby tasted like Twizzlers and fake butter and all the cravings that I didn't know what to call yet.
My dad picked us up at a quarter of nine.
Since then, I've been kissed a million times,
but I'm still waiting for the one that tastes like truth.
He tasted more like the nickel water that comes out of the sink in my fourth-floor Flatbush walk-up.
Needless to say, we didn't last long;
From a young age, I knew I wanted bills, not spare change.
I had my second kiss in a movie theater.
We were pretending to watch that new James Bond movie,
and I had my hand on the armrest between the seats,
a bear trap waiting for his prepubescent, hairless paw.
Robby tasted like Twizzlers and fake butter and all the cravings that I didn't know what to call yet.
My dad picked us up at a quarter of nine.
Since then, I've been kissed a million times,
but I'm still waiting for the one that tastes like truth.