Poetry competition CLOSED 11th May 2013 00:15am
WINNER
Pravus
Pravus
RUNNER-UP:
GothicAngels
First Time
NimmieAmee said:The last sentence confused the point for me *shrugs*
Here is an example:
Deep penetration
Slow strokes
I feel a little pop as my walls open slowly
I give a small cry as I feel pain
He kisses me on my lips and neck
The whispers in my ear, "All you have to say is stop baby."
I look him in the eyes as he goes slow with me
It feels good as he strokes me gently
Making me feel good in anyway possible
Slow strokes
He is slow with me even slower even slower when he popped my cherry
His hands burn my curves with pleasure
He whispers, "Baby do you want me to pick up speed?"
I say yes softly and he moves his way until he is in a faster pace
I bite my lip and hold my moans
He tells me, "I want to hear everything you say so let me hear that moan."
Tears flow down my cheeks as he brings pleasure to my body
I let out moans as I feel him hit spots that felt like heaven
He puts me on top and lets me ride it
He takes a last thrust and soon I am through
He holds me tight kissing me with so much love telling he loves me
Telling he was happy to be my first time
Here is an example:
Deep penetration
Slow strokes
I feel a little pop as my walls open slowly
I give a small cry as I feel pain
He kisses me on my lips and neck
The whispers in my ear, "All you have to say is stop baby."
I look him in the eyes as he goes slow with me
It feels good as he strokes me gently
Making me feel good in anyway possible
Slow strokes
He is slow with me even slower even slower when he popped my cherry
His hands burn my curves with pleasure
He whispers, "Baby do you want me to pick up speed?"
I say yes softly and he moves his way until he is in a faster pace
I bite my lip and hold my moans
He tells me, "I want to hear everything you say so let me hear that moan."
Tears flow down my cheeks as he brings pleasure to my body
I let out moans as I feel him hit spots that felt like heaven
He puts me on top and lets me ride it
He takes a last thrust and soon I am through
He holds me tight kissing me with so much love telling he loves me
Telling he was happy to be my first time
It wasn't really my first time, but it counts, right? right. >.<;;
I was nervous, you were lost,
you wanted this, no matter the cost.
No condom, we were smart,
I thought you loved me, like we'd never part.
You were so shaky, but so was I,
When I touched you, you let out a small sigh.
Your cheeks were red and sweaty,
You pressed yourself to me before whispering "are you ready?"
I nodded and smiled, I felt you press into me, deep,
I felt like I was your's, and you were mine to keep.
You only lasted a little bit,
But it was heaven and I loved it.
I was nervous, you were lost,
you wanted this, no matter the cost.
No condom, we were smart,
I thought you loved me, like we'd never part.
You were so shaky, but so was I,
When I touched you, you let out a small sigh.
Your cheeks were red and sweaty,
You pressed yourself to me before whispering "are you ready?"
I nodded and smiled, I felt you press into me, deep,
I felt like I was your's, and you were mine to keep.
You only lasted a little bit,
But it was heaven and I loved it.
we ditched school
I had no fears
but when I felt you so near
I nearly stopped you
but I held my tongue
and I never regretted it
I didn't understand love
until you finally showed me
you unleashed your majestic beast
and my eyes opened, I could finally see
how much you meant to me
it was an hour of blissful passion
you showed me how, guided me along
and for that hour I belonged to you
it felt so right
nothing went wrong
and I was blinded by my love for you
every now and then
I'll think of us
your breathtaking strength
and how I miss your touch
and the way we were entwined
so tonight
when the shadows creep
I'll think of you
and when the darkness wins
I will meet you there
in my dreams....
I had no fears
but when I felt you so near
I nearly stopped you
but I held my tongue
and I never regretted it
I didn't understand love
until you finally showed me
you unleashed your majestic beast
and my eyes opened, I could finally see
how much you meant to me
it was an hour of blissful passion
you showed me how, guided me along
and for that hour I belonged to you
it felt so right
nothing went wrong
and I was blinded by my love for you
every now and then
I'll think of us
your breathtaking strength
and how I miss your touch
and the way we were entwined
so tonight
when the shadows creep
I'll think of you
and when the darkness wins
I will meet you there
in my dreams....
My First Time (A begrudging thank you)
Star Wars marathon,
release date order,
pressed up behind me.
No wandering hands,
our favorite films,
unwilling to turn away.
Hours slip by
in happy silence,
enraptured until the moment.
“Turmoil has engulfed
the Galactic Republic;”
minds start to stray.
Then his hands,
my pleased smile,
still, loyalty holds us.
And it comes;
“Oh no! Hey!
Help me! Help me!”
Like final permission,
sweet breaking point,
youthful bodies clash together.
Jar Jar Binks,
how I despise
that I owe you this memory.
First
It was magic when we touched
his fingers danced upon my skin
I held on tight and caught my breath
so we could join within.
It wasn't really different
from what I thought it’d be
the pain it was forgettable
with the love he held for me.
When I think back and remember
it was more than I could have ever asked
because not only was he my first
but he has also become my last.
It was magic when we touched
his fingers danced upon my skin
I held on tight and caught my breath
so we could join within.
It wasn't really different
from what I thought it’d be
the pain it was forgettable
with the love he held for me.
When I think back and remember
it was more than I could have ever asked
because not only was he my first
but he has also become my last.
Anonymous
Two pills
the same
ingested
when he was over,
my friend
a good friend,
one who i never thought any
thing too thoughtful
in this way before,
it just sort of happened
I suppose during the
relaxation of the drugs
swallowed, anti-anxiety
prescriptions,
so there was no worry
no extra thought
fuck it, we did.
Lotioned up
he got undressed
and all i did was
take my shirt off
and unravel my underwear,
but they needed to be off.
Then he pressed in and
it hurt, each rub
each hump further
and he didn't even finish
until after.
I stood in the middle of the room
eyes wide,
I finally lost it,
the big v in me.
And now I wish
I had waited like
I originally wanted.
the same
ingested
when he was over,
my friend
a good friend,
one who i never thought any
thing too thoughtful
in this way before,
it just sort of happened
I suppose during the
relaxation of the drugs
swallowed, anti-anxiety
prescriptions,
so there was no worry
no extra thought
fuck it, we did.
Lotioned up
he got undressed
and all i did was
take my shirt off
and unravel my underwear,
but they needed to be off.
Then he pressed in and
it hurt, each rub
each hump further
and he didn't even finish
until after.
I stood in the middle of the room
eyes wide,
I finally lost it,
the big v in me.
And now I wish
I had waited like
I originally wanted.
This is rather long but it is one of my favorites.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/70157-lucky-bastard-part-1/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/70157-lucky-bastard-part-1/
Anonymous
“Thank You Martha (a.k.a. Marty)”
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_0570QrP0qjA/S-D7INB3l_I/AAAAAAAABko/udQt_AQXwDo/s1600/tfs+girl+hippie.jpg*
I got dusted
but good
the first time,
just like she
thought I should.
It was great
(majorly understated),
better than
I ever imagined
and
so much more,
really.
She took all the time
in the world,
unfurled my masculinity,
took my virginity,
but
it didn’t matter,
my heart exploded,
my mind scattered
in bodily-sensuous-sin,
she was a bit older.
I did not try to run or hide,
I spied her first,
was rather bold,
held her jawline,
her eyes twinkled,
we thirsted on our magic,
it flowed righteously.
All the sounds
were profound,
the tastes
heavenly-delicious,
succulent,
so sweet.
She was insatiable,
adorable,
I craved her
rock-nipples,
I swallowed
her abundant flow,
constantly.
I loved her
feminine-power,
a beautiful
full-petal-flower,
kissed her
swollen-lips
gently,
fervently
for hours.
Her eyes were
like a rare wine,
I became
drunk on her flavor,
I will never forget
her sensual acts,
the ones she taught me,
the ones I still savor.
Thank you Martha,
wherever you are,
you will always
be my first.
* The picture is not Marty, but a strikingly close resemblance....!
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_0570QrP0qjA/S-D7INB3l_I/AAAAAAAABko/udQt_AQXwDo/s1600/tfs+girl+hippie.jpg*
I got dusted
but good
the first time,
just like she
thought I should.
It was great
(majorly understated),
better than
I ever imagined
and
so much more,
really.
She took all the time
in the world,
unfurled my masculinity,
took my virginity,
but
it didn’t matter,
my heart exploded,
my mind scattered
in bodily-sensuous-sin,
she was a bit older.
I did not try to run or hide,
I spied her first,
was rather bold,
held her jawline,
her eyes twinkled,
we thirsted on our magic,
it flowed righteously.
All the sounds
were profound,
the tastes
heavenly-delicious,
succulent,
so sweet.
She was insatiable,
adorable,
I craved her
rock-nipples,
I swallowed
her abundant flow,
constantly.
I loved her
feminine-power,
a beautiful
full-petal-flower,
kissed her
swollen-lips
gently,
fervently
for hours.
Her eyes were
like a rare wine,
I became
drunk on her flavor,
I will never forget
her sensual acts,
the ones she taught me,
the ones I still savor.
Thank you Martha,
wherever you are,
you will always
be my first.
* The picture is not Marty, but a strikingly close resemblance....!
