Poetry competition CLOSED 6th March 2013 3:05am
WINNER
PassionOfVengeance (Jacqueline R)
PassionOfVengeance (Jacqueline R)
RUNNER-UP:
EngrVV
Page:
THE LAST LINE
Poetry Contest Description
Create a poem,using the last line of many different poems...
Please ask permission if using another poets work,and a reference them as well...Also refer,if it is your own...I will want proof you're not just coming up with them as you go along;)
2 WEEKS
10 LINES OR LONGER...1 POEM PER POET
USE FACE ICONS PROVIDED BELOW,FOR TITLES
NO COLLABS
2 WEEKS
10 LINES OR LONGER...1 POEM PER POET
USE FACE ICONS PROVIDED BELOW,FOR TITLES
NO COLLABS
This is more of a challenge considering you don't just come up with it, so I decided to actually try this. I am going to use last lines of my poems.
Set Free With A Past
Seen through their eyes are they not, feel through their hearts are they there
Is that me
My soul is let free
Only some can see
With one little word
I have been set free
And through the eye
A nightmare to no end
To the end of the path I lay, only to rise and leave, now a part of the rivers path, I join them by their side
Just leave me be
An end to all the pain
You were there for my last breath
A memory of the past and soon to be future, to build higher and higher, older and younger
As now I'm your past
My midnight door
In your past of misery
Set Free With A Past
Seen through their eyes are they not, feel through their hearts are they there
Is that me
My soul is let free
Only some can see
With one little word
I have been set free
And through the eye
A nightmare to no end
To the end of the path I lay, only to rise and leave, now a part of the rivers path, I join them by their side
Just leave me be
An end to all the pain
You were there for my last breath
A memory of the past and soon to be future, to build higher and higher, older and younger
As now I'm your past
My midnight door
In your past of misery
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Deteriation
Fuck this
and blow my fucking brains out
Left to the abandonment of my mind
Drifting into nothing
Spreading malice to all those who happen to come by
Screwed this one up
Growing on dreams
Every night painting the city red
Finding little contentment in this annihilation
So often overlooked in our busy society
I resent you
Stained with the blood of their creators
All is gone
I shove you into a room in front of me and on your knees,
remorselessly pulling the trigger
making whole the mind that was reaped
Embracing the evil that I have become
(all from various poems of mine)
Fuck this
and blow my fucking brains out
Left to the abandonment of my mind
Drifting into nothing
Spreading malice to all those who happen to come by
Screwed this one up
Growing on dreams
Every night painting the city red
Finding little contentment in this annihilation
So often overlooked in our busy society
I resent you
Stained with the blood of their creators
All is gone
I shove you into a room in front of me and on your knees,
remorselessly pulling the trigger
making whole the mind that was reaped
Embracing the evil that I have become
(all from various poems of mine)
My Last Poetic Lines
Now, we're back in each other's arms
Let’s give love a second chance
Feel our crazy love, once innocent and pure
To sow a new seed from where a new life will begin
Nice prelude to sexual culmination
Reunited at last
And the power of love brought us back together
On this special day, a September to remember
For whatever season it may be
My forever love, my love forever…
(I used the last lines of my own poems as the title implied)
Now, we're back in each other's arms
Let’s give love a second chance
Feel our crazy love, once innocent and pure
To sow a new seed from where a new life will begin
Nice prelude to sexual culmination
Reunited at last
And the power of love brought us back together
On this special day, a September to remember
For whatever season it may be
My forever love, my love forever…
(I used the last lines of my own poems as the title implied)
DEADLY LOVING
Your heart desires,
My fair lady
So I can make the perfect puppet out of you
Because I have nothing to lose
You won’t respond.
Feel my loves cold dead skin beneath my fingers
After my nightly meeting, with the dead that grin
And it was glorious
in its loving embrace
Pain is beautiful
And free.
(These are the last lines of my poems)
Your heart desires,
My fair lady
So I can make the perfect puppet out of you
Because I have nothing to lose
You won’t respond.
Feel my loves cold dead skin beneath my fingers
After my nightly meeting, with the dead that grin
And it was glorious
in its loving embrace
Pain is beautiful
And free.
(These are the last lines of my poems)
