Poetry competition CLOSED 11th March 2013 8:18am
WINNER
runningturtle87
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RUNNER-UP: maryanns

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Water — Submerged

bloodytearsoflife
Amy E. Down
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 5th Mar 2013
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Deep

It's to cold,
Surprised it's not ice,
Falling unknowingly,
The presser building,
The waves throw me,
Away from them,
Part of me thank them,
As life slows,
I see,
In the misty water,
I see a building,
No buildings,
And before I died,
I saw Atlantis.
The lost city.

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Forum Posts: 3273

Thank you all for the entries.  There are quite a few to review, so bear with me, will be back with a winner when I can.

:)

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Winner: runningturtle87 for Submerged

Runner-ups:
ravenwing for Gravel in the Well
Pibeseth for Full Fathom Five

Not at all an easy task, choosing the winners.  Some very strong entries here, thanks everyone.

Remember to look out for selected entries that will be published in Serendipity Magazine. Follow their news here: http://magserendipity.blogspot.com/

The water issue is due out on 30 April.

LeColonel
Fire of Insight
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Does that mean that runningturtle87 is a water turtle???

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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LeColonel said:Does that mean that runningturtle87 is a water turtle???

Lol mark, ALL turtles are water lovers.

EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 11th Sep 2012
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Hope I'm not too late for the party...CONGRATULATIONS to all the winners and my thanks to Atakti for this challenge and to all the participants for a job well done!

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