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NimmieAmee
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firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
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Joined 14th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 808

I hear the tap on my window
And I unlatch the sides,
Giggling quietly
As she slips inside.

I have my bed all made up,
....what good it would do
I've got this beautiful creature to myself,
Alone in this room.

I can tell she's got this fire in her eyes,
Because I can feel it inside my head.
And in sync, like we know,
We go straight to the bed.

We take turns undressing each other,
Admiring each and every touch.
Who knew love felt like this,
Not just in fairytales and such.

I can feel heart heartbeat quicken,
As I kiss my way down.
And I savor every moment,
Every sigh... every sound..

And I take my tongue,
As unskilled as it may be.
And slip it deep inside,
To places unseen

A reaction I was hoping for,
I had found her weak spot.
And now it was time,
To finish the job..

A few moments later
A gasp, a clench, a sigh.
And I knew instantly,
She was yet again, satisfied..

firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
United States 17awards
Joined 14th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 808

"I'm not much for PDA", she says.  
So we go to the quiet of her room  
Tossing our clothes to the floor  
And get wrapped in blanketed cucoons  
 
Away from judging eyes,  
We can be ourselves under the covers.  
Let loose, and let go..  
We're free to explore each other  
 
Our lips are the first to meet,  
I always adored her sweet taste.  
And before I knew it, my hands  
Were making their way down her waist  
 
As they stroke her thighs  
I can hear her raspy gasps  
When I slip them inside
She reaches for something to grasp  
 
I kiss my way to her hips  
And dared myself to taste.  
She's as sweet inside  
As the lips upon her face  
 
When she was finished,
And more than satisfied.  
She took my face in her hands,  
And I swear I saw stars in her eyes.

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

Hmmm I have a 3 part poetry series that you might like, am I allowed to post it. and Should I?

firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
United States 17awards
Joined 14th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 808

I'm staring down this barrel
Playing chicken with a gun..
Planning every step,
Who knew this was fun?

The revolver clicks,
Now it's my turn.
I pick up the handle,
In my hand it starts to burn.

I put it to my head,
Thinking of my will.
I pull the trigger
And suddenly everything is still..

Right before my heart stops,
I can see my brains on the gun..
Even though I've lost,
I can't help but think I've won..

firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
United States 17awards
Joined 14th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 808

Deleted double post.. oopsy lol

firesister
Samantha Jane
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 2nd Mar 2012
Forum Posts: 15

yes and yes

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026


Alice in Zombieland (Part 1)

There was once a girl
and a rabbit hole
Now there is a teenager
with a hurt soul

She wondered into the woods
searching for a nostalgic past
Found a worn down chasm
eroded by the spell time cast

She took another plunge
into a world once familiar
Although this time
all of the color had disappeared

Darkened skies and decaying trees
littered the once breath-taking landscape
The entrance sealed behind her
There would be no easy escape

A struggled moan behind
caught Alice's attention
She turned around
and quickly wished she hadn't

There was Tweetledum and Tweetledee
They were merely scraps of their bodies
Bone and diseased muscle all over
They were zombies

Alice screamed in terror
Her old friends were gone
All that were left were monsters
What had happened?

They advanced on her
She fell back; landing on the ground
She needed a weapon
There was nothing around

The twins dragged forward
Suddenly their heads shattered
When Alice turned her head
She saw the Mad Hatter

He was still alive
although a little less sane
He held pistol
Things had changed

His old top hat was done
Now he wore a black Cowboy's one
He rode an old Harley Davidson
He was armed with guns

"Hop on, we have a tea party to get to,"
He said in raspy voice
She jumped on behind him
and the engine made a noise

They raced down a winding road
To a table set with care
At the end was a surprise
One depressed,but living hare

The old friends gathered
and drank a warming drink
Tea spiked with brandy
Helping the company think

Safety was here
At least for a breath
Alice could adjust
Terror wouldn't come, just yet



Alice in Zombieland (Part 2)


The party concluded
all too soon
The crawling red zombies
were on the move

Cups were traded for weapons
Hatter had a couple Spas 12
Hare had a AR-15 with a drum mag
Alice kept it simple

She took a bladed whip
snapping it at dead flesh
squeezing fragile necks
and with a pistol, shot the rest

They made an opening
and they had to take it
They ran into the dying wood
praying to make it

They ran due west
looking for the White walls
Hatter said there lies their hope
The White Kingdom wouldn't fall

They ran to the closed gates
Shouting for help
The White gates opened
while a guard rang a bell

Refuge was here
but only for a short time
For they would be overrun
by moon rise

The White Queen promised troops,
supplies, and a map
She explained a story
of the mishap

One day in wonderland
A stray bolt of magic
Hit a dead soldier
Causing him to rise from the pit

He ached for battle
hungered for flesh
One bite was all it took
to have his lonely needs met

The final battle would come soon
White versus dead Red
This is not that tale
Stay tuned for the next


Alice in Zombieland(Part 3: The Bloody Finale)

The peace of the White
was short lived
They had a final fight
one last battle to win

They marched to the plain
Near the Red Kingdom
Now they just had to wait
for the dead to see them

The horde marched on
one by one, two by two
The Red decaying Queen
was in center view

Alice had two Uzis
Her whip to use too
She choose the whip in one hand
and a gun in the other, ready to use

The Order came
The horde ran forward
"Fire!" said White
They shot at the dead

Soon the lines collided
Friend mixed with foe
Allies spread out
Prepared to go

Alice herself was doing well
She would snap at one with the whip
shoot another's head off
and then do both with a spin

The hatter had the most fun
You could here his laugh everywhere
He rode his bike through the waves
on the back was a shooting hare

Alice saw the Hatter sweep by
She jumped onto the back of the seat
Then propelled herself up
tossing a grenade at the dead's feet

Arms and legs rained along with blood
The battle wasn't done
Some White turned Red
They haven't won

Alice found the Red Queen
constricted her neck in the whip
Snapped it with a flash
It ripped through her neck

The battle was won
The dead feel lifelessly to the ground
White roared victory
The battle was won

Alice stood there
in her black shirt and skinny jeans
hopping her world would returned back
to the way it was meant to be

The Hatter gave her a lift
to a magical mirror
He paused a moment
then said her home was through there

Alice was sad to go
but she had to get to her world
That's the thing about stories, they end
They also have Sequels. ;)

Icuduseahugritenow
WallFlower
Thought Provoker
United States 3awards
Joined 1st Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 108

firesister said:omg i love this one! its so true! damn the legos!!!
:D thank you

NimmieAmee
Thought Provoker
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Joined 3rd Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 204

The Reason For My Bruised Knees


He stands before me, towering and aroused  
and I, kneeling, smile as I lean forward.  

I run my tongue along him, swirl around the tip  
and find myself reveling in his flavor.  

He lets out a gasp as the wetness of my mouth envelops him,  
serving to drive my passion onwards.  

My head darts back and forth as I eagerly begin our rhythm  
moaning slightly with the pleasure of pleasuring him.  

I try my best for the full length of him, which is always too much,  
and am almost to the point where it makes me sick.  

I suppress the instinct and take him in further  
his hands entangling my hair as my throat clenches around him.  

Never stopping, tongue working even now,  
I increase the pressure on him.  

And I feel it, the enthralling drink filling my mouth  
salty and sweet and needed.  

I swallow and continue suckling for a moment  
not wanting to miss a single precious drop.  

He pulls back and I let him  
despite the fact that I'll miss the feeling of him in my mouth.  

I gaze up at him and lick my lips  
the taste of him still warmly present.  

He smiles and offers his hand  
and on shaking legs I rise to meet him.  

As both of us knew he would, he turns his head away  
as I stand on my toes for a kiss, giggling slightly.  

When we lay down on our bed together  
I wrap my arms around him and intertwine our legs.  

His arm under me and gently petting the back of my hair  
I fall asleep, content.

NimmieAmee
Thought Provoker
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Joined 3rd Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 204

In Love-Held Captive


I walk into the room and my love is waiting for me
her brazen naked form brings a devilish smile to my lips
I stand over her and her eyes widen as she takes in the sight of me
pleased with the negligee I have bought especially for tonight, she stares
her face turns red as I lift the hem, displaying myself for her
I think of what an innocent and bashful creature my love is as I kneel astride her
she lets out a gasp as I boldly start my play with her nipples
she shrinks away shyly as a lock of my hair falls over my shoulder and tickles her
I lean forward, tongue gliding over her breasts, and I reach downwards
I begin to pleasure us both, her with my lips on her chest and myself with my hand
the sensation is strong for such a chaste girl and I moan as my love cries out
I slow down for her sake, allowing us to truly savor the moment
we stare into eachother's eyes, tearfully and tenderly, as I bring us to climax
overcome with emotion my faultless beauty turns her head away
as I lick my fingers, I gaze at her satiated body gently
not wanting to leave her, but knowing I must, I stand
she calls out to me to come back as a close the door behind myself and I answer;
“I'll see you tomorrow, my love.”

the ropes chafe my wrists as she stands over me, smiling
the concrete is cold against my back, goosebumps on my bare flesh
I would ask her what she wants, but the insanity radiates from her eyes
with a predatory glint, she takes a knife out from behind her back
the hem of her negligee is lifted and a blush heats my face
she smiles as, legs on either side of me, she kneels
I cringe as the knife is traced along my chest, leaving trails of blood
the metallic scent mingles with the out of place freshness of her shampoo
she leans forwards and laps at the blood, while her hand reaches downwards
she finds what she desires on both fronts, the cold knife and her warm fingers
one digging into me, the other into her, my cries of pain obscured by her moans of pleasure
she takes her time, savoring the taste of me, while my once smooth skin trembles
her body writhes hard against me as she climaxes, gazing at the tears running down my face
I turn my head away from on coming death as she lifts the now warm knife
but she licks it clean while looking at me gently
my heart beats harder as she gets to her feet, thighs sticky with her own juices
the door's lock slides home as I hear a sweet voice call out;
“I'll see you tomorrow, my love.”  

Magdalena
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
Wales 62awards
Joined 21st Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 3000



You Know Who You Are.




S ink your need into my world
E nter the realms of my fire
N ever feel this without me
S atisfy your urges with my body
U ndo the rope that holds me together
A nd find the depths of my soul
L ave the gates of my heaven



T ease my skin with the tips of your fingers
E ase your body down onto my yearning
M ould my soft full breasts with your hands
P leasure me with your tongue and mouth
T orture me with endless foreplay
A nd I will please you beyond thought
T ake you to a place you've never felt
I gnite every spark that resides within you
O pen your senses in every way possible
N ever leave you without wearing you out



I want to take you in every written way
N ow I know that you are willing to explore
V eil my tide with your thirst and quench it
I shall feed on you with my ravenous mouth
T ongue play shall send shivers through your core
E ncompassing you all the way to the base
S inking down and back up deftly


Y ou can bend me to your animalistic needs
O blige me with deep thrusts of passion
U nder the darkness of the night sky



I mpale me with the rigid length that I invite
N ame your wants as you release your essence





Magdalena
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
Wales 62awards
Joined 21st Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 3000

Dark Desire
 
 
 

 
A ripple through the
Dark threads of my Soul
You breathe there
and make me feel whole
Stir the power
within my being
Let it burn through
my veins so freeing
 
 
 
I won't let it
fuck with my brain
I won't let it  
send me insane
 
 
 
I control each drip
that I swallow
and sigh with the
pleasure I follow
My sweet desire
stir the threads of my Soul
Breathe there and
make me feel whole
 
 
 
I won't let you  
fuck with my brain
I won't let you
send me insane
 
 
 
Stir the power  
as I swallow
I sigh with the
burn that I follow
Come to me
my Dark Desire
Encompass my Soul
let the power inspire
Find what you  
cannot ever see
Feel what lays  
in the depths of me
 
 
 
I won't ever
fuck with your brain
I won't ever  
send you insane





firesister
Samantha Jane
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 2nd Mar 2012
Forum Posts: 15

All of these are amazing!!

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053927598376y93870873109
Twisted Dreamer
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Forum Posts: 93

i
walk
along
the wall

it is a
never-built
housing boom
ruin

strong bricks
not likely
to crumble

and i
in plimsolls

step after
step after
step



and now,
run

drivelicious13
alon aLion
Dangerous Mind
San Marino 10awards
Joined 1st June 2012
Forum Posts: 346

Penance (for Ms.Devilish)
     
Disengage        
let Your Cage        
evaporate        
       
this fetid pool of flesh        
primitive in how it lets        
microscopic dread embed        
       
YOU Never bled        
rivers flow Red        
only in Convents        
       
YOU remain as pure        
as JEHOVAH`s        
favorite Whore        
       
In other words        
       
You are MORE        
than Us scores        
of cowering cocks        
locked in suits        
       
Im not        
       
but make NO excuse        
for my own weakness        
the WARNINGS        
I resist        
       
I seek You        
as I seek        
the Abyss        
to fall Eternally        
enmeshed in Your Sweets        
       
will You Grant        
my existence Complete?        
       
We both Agree        
Our Substance        
MORE than Meat        
       
shed wretched disease        
that cleaves        
when We secrete        
       
Soon we`ll sail        
beyond the        
frail casings        
that anchor        
Our intense        
Embracing        
       
We`ll fly beyond        
this putrid        
primordial pond        
where slimy fish        
and their ilk        
cant help but        
writhe in soiled        
stench of mud        
of Earth        
so far        
the ONLY        
Mode of Birth        
       
WE will coast        
above the        
refuse of        
gross, toasted,        
Silicone based        
Race        
       
WE LOVE        
outside JEHOVAH`s        
experimental        
Disgrace

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