Poetry competition CLOSED 28th September 2012 7:27pm
WINNER
Atakti
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RUNNERS-UP: diddi and LeColonel

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SHOW YOUR SOLE

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

The Shoes Of A Clown    

I hit the floor
right , left
every step
cracks run over
the tarmac , white pavement
I'm scuffed and ignored
stamped on ton by ton
this sole is of poor
quality , man made I think .

Run me down
'til I leak
then start to speak
then chuck me out
if I squeak too noisily
if I don't fit the clown's big feet
who stepped in shit
so clumsily
who lived to trip
a stumbled day
with no grip to slip
away from play .


 

forgive01
Lost Thinker
Australia
Joined 28th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 6

Size 7 please
Size 7 please
Size 7 please
You try me on
You decide I fit
I can to have some fun
Now it’s over
I am put back on the shelf
How many more, that will borrow me
For their own personnel pleasure
Size 7 please
Size 7 please
It’s not fun being a Bowling shoe


poet Anonymous

Fellows Poets,

Lots of great poems to choose from...give me a bit more time!

Thanks,
Strider

poet Anonymous

Okay Poets,
Great poems to read and peruse~interesting styles and messages! Every writer was worthy of recognition.  In choosing the winner, I went back to the "shoes speaking vibe" of what I was looking for:

MrA.,lightbaron, jadielue, and wing~~great quality, I really liked them- I was hoping for perhaps just a bit more-
Gypsy Red and somelikeithot~~ I loved the imagery...you two definitely have it going on in word and in message, hot shoes, both!
mcr4everyoung, and drivel~~powerful messages of tough life experiences, explicit word histories and appreciated.
ricecake- Beautiful imagery of a mystical place...footprints in the snow became real.
The unheard~ I heard your soul, but, it was not the sole I was exactly looking for...
Forgive01--Very nice and very close to the runners-up in content.

Ataki--Winner--great imagery--I heard the postal shoes speaking their lament.
LeColonel and diddi--Runner-ups--awesome shoe sounds from the two of you!

Thanks to everyone for their entries...write-on!

Strider

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
32awards
Joined 1st Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 3273

My first trophy!  Trying and failing to be cool about it, woooooo.  Thanks, Strider!

Well done to runner-ups, and good stuff from everyone.  Off to do a victory lap, with my goofy grin.

poet Anonymous

Nice work ataki with the subject....Strider.

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