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Diviy (The Illusionist ofSorrow)
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Poor Perception and First Impressions

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
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Poetry Contest

Have you ever been judged by the way you look or speak?
It happens everyday. People get judged for all the wrong reasons. Tell me about a time you've seen or had this done to you. Does NOT have to be a poem, but DOES need to be properly written.
No Slang, or text talk.
And must be in the form of a story or essay if not a poem.
200 hundred words, more or less. Collabs are fine.

Any more questions, send me a PM.  :)

Diviy
The Illusionist ofSorrow
Thought Provoker
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Joined 10th June 2012
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Misunderstood, Part II

To some I am to tall,
Others I am to fat,
They speak truth intwined with lies,
Of how I could be that,

I look different then you,
Or do you look different then me?
What is this 'normal' that you speak of?
Because 'normal' could never be,

I'll hide behind my imperfections,
Since you keep throwing them in my face,
You will never see the true me,
My soul I will encase,

My hatred will grow stronger,
Eventually I will become you,
I will hurt others the way you hurt me,
I will be born again, anew,

Rage will enclose upon my mind,
Becoming blinded from the truth,
If an eye for an eye makes the world go blind,
Then I am glad we're born with two...

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
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Diviy, thank you. That was well written.  :)

opheliac
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 2122

essay?

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 5152

Ah, not necessarily, just a nicely written discussion on what your experience with this topic is. Or a poem

Dulcea
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 23rd May 2012
Forum Posts: 21

See this pendant 'round my throat?
It must mean I'm a freak!
"Why is it, your clothes are dark?
   To the Devil, you must speak."

No!  . . .oh, no
You've got it wrong.
The cover spoils not the book.
But still you guess, assume, and judge
based on how I look.

If only you took the chance
          to know me.
Interests - diverse and deep.
There's plenty of light and love inside me.
You know not of what you speak!

SmilesandPretenses
Trevin Michael
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 30th May 2012
Forum Posts: 114

Logistics Integration Analyst
says the title on my office door
3/4 inch gauges, covered in tattoos
something my CEO had never seen before

Interviewed over the phone
my mind was hired on the spot
my skin shows up for work
received by glares of shock

company performance was 74
and is now at 96
keep on staring you fkn haters
you all can kiss my dick




Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
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Thank you Dulcea and Smilesandpretenses. Good poems.

laceyspacey
Fire of Insight
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Joined 29th May 2012
Forum Posts: 711

Alright
Were do I even begin.
I was born.
Then the judging began.

Red_emption
Diseased
Lost Thinker
Australia
Joined 10th June 2012
Forum Posts: 33

Can you hear our voices...?
Sitting on a street corner,
Walking down a path.
You see us.
Do you hear us?

Punk boots,
Knee high.
Don’t mind the buckles...
The spikes...
Can you see my eyes?
Stranger?
Can you see my mind?

Fishnets.
Stockings.
I’m not a sl*t...
Black lace and attire...
I’m screaming at you.
You look at me,
But you cant see me.

Devil Child!

Heavy mascara...
Yes I know its overdone.
No, I’m not goth.
I’m not emo.
I have no label.
Please...
Don’t give me one.

Don’t sew a sign
Into my skin...

Don’t judge me

Please... can you hear me?

poet Anonymous

THE JOB INTERVIEW FROM HELL

The day started with a phone call

Four in the morning, wanting to fuck me

Not again, tried to get back to sleep

Wasted and worn, drinking coffee

Looking for my pills, TV showing

The latest crash on the 401

Got in the car, drove around it

Got there on time, go to the room

Told to wait, made to ask for key

To bathroom, mascara running

Hair day is worse than bad

Look down, runs in my stocking

Go to the loo, period starting

No tampons, no pads, only toilet paper

Pop some pills so the pain will not come

Finally in room with interrogator

Asks me questions I am doomed to fail

Does not give me a chance to explain

Just like a sergeant he drills me again

And again, my words are stumbling

I feel my stocking ripping

It feels wet underneath

I think I have bled on the chair

The interview is over, he will get in touch

A week later, I do not hear

Phone a friend, who has the dish

Poor girl, she said, you fucked up big

He said you looked terrible, very unprofessional

Your voice was too loud, your resume unreadable

He would never hire you, even if desperate

Which was very ironic as the pay was so low

It would not pay for the gas it took

To commute all that distance

The job interview from hell

Was not the first, will not be the last

My bottle of Jack Daniels will not last.

ph8t
b4sic8
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 24th June 2012
Forum Posts: 101

smoking is my habit
speaking verbally not my favorite chose
is hard for me to express my self
but elders see me as if am doing wrong

i here people talking
you all here them to
its the sound of contradiction
its the devils work

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 5152

Thank you for your entries.  :)  Keep 'em coming.

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

I just walk you know
but yet they judge
a simple walk home
but they say I look rough

I always have that glare
don't mess with me
But to all of my town
a punk is what they see

Now for those who know me
they think I had a bad day
But for those who don't
tend to stay away

MagicianType0
Enjoi
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 8th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 369

Wait no slang kitty? What kind of shizznozz is up with that b notch on the Forizzums

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