Poetry competition CLOSED 21st May 2012 11:07pm
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chezz
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Write an adventure poem!

Deontejordan
D. Jordan
Fire of Insight
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Joined 4th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 703

DAMN!

Danii
Tyrant of Words
United States 5awards
Joined 27th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 5152

la la la. la la la. la la la la la la la
I love........me! ANYONE ELSE? lol lets dance!

FishCake
Thought Provoker
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Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

hills on fire
hearts in two
what they need
they all know
a hero
to save the day
a knight
in shining armor
they call for me
i hear their crys
and i come running
a child?
stuck in a house?
on the hill?
i look up
houses are burning
to the ground
i spot the child
in a window
i go running
up the sides
into the room
a child
crying
all alone
reminds me of my past
i scoop her up
and take her to the door way
its like the flames arent even there
she drops down
and makes a safe escape

boards fall
my head is fuzzy
my eyes are going dark
this is the end

"grow up strong little one"
"you to miss"
so she knew i was a girl under all this armor
good for her

Deontejordan
D. Jordan
Fire of Insight
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likey

FishCake
Thought Provoker
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Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

did i do a good job?

Deontejordan
D. Jordan
Fire of Insight
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Joined 4th Nov 2011
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YES! i love it.

FishCake
Thought Provoker
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Joined 10th May 2012
Forum Posts: 344

Thanxz You!! I Don't Like Long Poemz!!


Deontejordan
D. Jordan
Fire of Insight
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SIX DAYS LEFT. SOMEBODY SUBMIT!!!

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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I was the last gunslinger left in this horrible world
All that was left was the dead
Walking and sleeping
I killed him
I killed mum and dad
I killed everyone
But the plagued ones were still here
Too many bodies
Not enough bullets
I could travel as I was for the rest of my life, and never kill them all
I wasn't ready to die, I had reached my lifetime goal of eliminating the assholes in my life
I wanted to sit and soak of the pleasant lonliness
But, I was scared to do anything
Scared to eat, for I knew not of what could have the plague
I was scared to sleep in fear of never waking up
They would find me, smell me
No perfume could mask the scent of my warm precious blood, the last living blood on the face of Earth
I did not regret the havoc, I caused on this terrible place
I was selfish, didn't care about them
I let him go, burned him myself
He seemed confused at my emotionless, blank stare
Hey, a girls gotta do what she's gonna do
But here I was now, cornered in an old gas station
Surrounded by those fuckers

chezz
Lost Thinker
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Joined 7th Jan 2012
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The traveler

I woke on an unfamiliar bed
body ravaged and aching head
I knew I was alive but felt closer to dead

Memory assailed my numbed thought
Shaky legs attested I was good for naught
A glance through the room I was in
Tells of where I had been
A few bottles of strange brew
A few empty glasses about
A half dozen naked  bodies lay strewn
Stale smell of cheap drought  

Stumbling I reached the door
Looking back at the carnal carnage on the floor
Ruefully I smiled in the dusk
Onward , forward I must

My horse snickered in disgust
anxiously awaiting for my toes to nudge
My sympathy was shared with my horse
This place reeked of evil and dicourse
Though it all was worth my saddle bags filled with pixie dust

Homeward bound to elf country
The queen has promised me a hefty bounty
I could have been there already
Had I not stopped for a small sherry
I have never been one to berate my self for pleasure
Though two bags of this rare treasure .....

They hail me from afar two senior elf
Their eyes gleaming as they move with stealth
I nod in greeting and smile with wealth
My horse canters to the golden shelf

My bags seem heavier now
As before the queen I bow
A strange furrow crosses her brow
As she grants me what is mine now

Celebration into the night
I am no more a traveling kite
I have found a home and with it might


   

Deontejordan
D. Jordan
Fire of Insight
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Don't get me wrong, it's a great poem. But it doesn't fit the parameters I envisioned when creating this competition.

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 5152

who? me?

Deontejordan
D. Jordan
Fire of Insight
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Joined 4th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 703

I have a winner chosen, but surely someone has one more submission to throw into the chex mix.

ThorneTheRed
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 193

Danii said:la la la. la la la. la la la la la la la
I love........me! ANYONE ELSE? lol lets dance!
~ accepts daniis dance offer~

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 5152

ThorneTheRed said:[quote-84612-Danii]la la la. la la la. la la la la la la la
I love........me! ANYONE ELSE? lol lets dance!
~ accepts daniis dance offer~[/quote]oohh, wat kind of dancing will we do? lol

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