You're the other gender
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Poetry Contest Description
write a poem about if you were the opposite sex/ trapped in the wrong body
Think about if you were the opposite sex. Would you see the world diffrently? Would the way you look, feel, love, how people precieve you- what would be diffrent?
Or what if you're the opposite sex stuck inside the opposite body, how would you handle it? Maybe you are trapped in the wrong body- whats wrong or right?
This is atopic thats been really big in my mind, about people and what they feel they are or aren't. Because I'm a major tomboy, sometimes I feel confused or trapped being a girl.
This intresting competition spawned from the idea of "what if I were the other side?"
Rules:
2 poems per poet
Nothing over 50 words (please and thank you)
Have fun:)
Or what if you're the opposite sex stuck inside the opposite body, how would you handle it? Maybe you are trapped in the wrong body- whats wrong or right?
This is atopic thats been really big in my mind, about people and what they feel they are or aren't. Because I'm a major tomboy, sometimes I feel confused or trapped being a girl.
This intresting competition spawned from the idea of "what if I were the other side?"
Rules:
2 poems per poet
Nothing over 50 words (please and thank you)
Have fun:)
Devilish
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OOh goodness. i will so be back for this one. hell yeah.. i got to do this comp.lol. so perfect.
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Devilish XD thanks for the enthusiasm! Can't wait to see what you got:)
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If only i had a dick..
That "fire" shot from your attire..
Lingers a scent of sick! ..
A shot of penicillin produces healin
from that feelin of that burning itch!!
On secondhand..
since your the man...
Like the little engine who thinks he can,
tell me i'm good...
Humanity is in a league of its own,
ruling the throne of perfection...
Not some incurable infection
causing your dick to shoot fire!!
Any way The Devil only grazed
the existence of phrase...
So the only thing in need of being saved
is that firey sensation...
You seem to be mistakin that im in need of your VD....
A Clinic perhaps?
Under wraps of course. I wish I had a dick .. if only if only..
then i wouldnt be so fucking lonely...
Id name him cockasoaress for all the pain..
and the drain.. but in all fairness
if i had a dick i would stick it in EVERYTHING..
Here kitty kitty kitty.. Lassie come home..
That "fire" shot from your attire..
Lingers a scent of sick! ..
A shot of penicillin produces healin
from that feelin of that burning itch!!
On secondhand..
since your the man...
Like the little engine who thinks he can,
tell me i'm good...
Humanity is in a league of its own,
ruling the throne of perfection...
Not some incurable infection
causing your dick to shoot fire!!
Any way The Devil only grazed
the existence of phrase...
So the only thing in need of being saved
is that firey sensation...
You seem to be mistakin that im in need of your VD....
A Clinic perhaps?
Under wraps of course. I wish I had a dick .. if only if only..
then i wouldnt be so fucking lonely...
Id name him cockasoaress for all the pain..
and the drain.. but in all fairness
if i had a dick i would stick it in EVERYTHING..
Here kitty kitty kitty.. Lassie come home..
Devilish
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Oh damn im sorry .. 50 words i got carried away.. i shall revise now.. forgive me.
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If only i had a dick
That "fire" shot from your attire..
Lingers a scent of sick! ..
A shot of penicillin produces healin
from that feelin of that burning itch!!
since your the man...
Like the little engine who thinks he can,
ruling the throne of perfection...
Not some incurable infection
causing your dick to shoot fire!!
Any way The Devil only grazed
the existence of phrase...
So the only thing in need of being saved
is that firey sensation...
You seem to be mistakin that im in need of your VD....
A Clinic perhaps?
If only I had a dick
Id name him cockasoaress
and i would stick it in EVERYTHING..
Here kitty.. Lassie come home..
fuck i suck ,,ive learned how to spell but not count.. i can withdrawl and start over, im sorry/...lol
My Grammer sucks ass and my poetry is highly offen
That "fire" shot from your attire..
Lingers a scent of sick! ..
A shot of penicillin produces healin
from that feelin of that burning itch!!
since your the man...
Like the little engine who thinks he can,
ruling the throne of perfection...
Not some incurable infection
causing your dick to shoot fire!!
Any way The Devil only grazed
the existence of phrase...
So the only thing in need of being saved
is that firey sensation...
You seem to be mistakin that im in need of your VD....
A Clinic perhaps?
If only I had a dick
Id name him cockasoaress
and i would stick it in EVERYTHING..
Here kitty.. Lassie come home..
fuck i suck ,,ive learned how to spell but not count.. i can withdrawl and start over, im sorry/...lol
My Grammer sucks ass and my poetry is highly offen
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-I’m the Best Female-
I am beautiful
Beyond beautiful
I am craved, for my body and my mind
I understand men and women
I am a female
All I need to do is ask in a sweet voice
Flash them a brilliant smile
And then all men are my slaves
i hope u enjoy this, i did it on a whim
I am beautiful
Beyond beautiful
I am craved, for my body and my mind
I understand men and women
I am a female
All I need to do is ask in a sweet voice
Flash them a brilliant smile
And then all men are my slaves
i hope u enjoy this, i did it on a whim
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Me, Actually.
I happen to be male,
Just listen to my tale.
It seems as I have been born with such utter fail.
I was born with TWO X chromosomes,
Instead of just one.
Wait! Stay and dont judge...
At least till I'm done.
I act and look male in almost every way.
But take a look closer and
HEY!
You have a big chest, It just isnt FLAT.
Then they come closer and give it a "pat".
Stop!
But they dont.
Not only just that...
They decide to do another quick pat.
But this time, its not my chest,
But as I fear,
You can figure out the rest...
In every way possible, I am male,
But my physical body just isnt right.
Why didnt I just die that fateful night?
Sometimes I think it wouldve been better,
To have died when I was born.
Instead of being able to write such a letter...
I happen to be male,
Just listen to my tale.
It seems as I have been born with such utter fail.
I was born with TWO X chromosomes,
Instead of just one.
Wait! Stay and dont judge...
At least till I'm done.
I act and look male in almost every way.
But take a look closer and
HEY!
You have a big chest, It just isnt FLAT.
Then they come closer and give it a "pat".
Stop!
But they dont.
Not only just that...
They decide to do another quick pat.
But this time, its not my chest,
But as I fear,
You can figure out the rest...
In every way possible, I am male,
But my physical body just isnt right.
Why didnt I just die that fateful night?
Sometimes I think it wouldve been better,
To have died when I was born.
Instead of being able to write such a letter...
Rosewingaangel
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ok... well... I fail... its not only 50 words.... ill retry.
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Looking Closer
Look closer
And then you'll see
That maybe my body is not what it's supposed to be.
I was born as a girl,
But its as plain as can be,
That THAT was a fluke.
I am as male as can be...
Look closer
And then you'll see
That maybe my body is not what it's supposed to be.
I was born as a girl,
But its as plain as can be,
That THAT was a fluke.
I am as male as can be...
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ok. thats better. hope you like it. (actually both) they'll be in my poems too.
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Thanks Devilish, Greek Myth Geek and Rosewingangel for the entries!
and don't worry to much if you went over, I'm not actually counting
it was more of a guideline.
So far I think they are amazing XD and I can really sympathize with yours Rose
Good job people XD I hope to see more:)
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and don't worry to much if you went over, I'm not actually counting
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So far I think they are amazing XD and I can really sympathize with yours Rose
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Good job people XD I hope to see more:)
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If I were a boy
Id open car doors
and pull out chairs
Id kiss her in public
like no one was there
Id listen as she wept
about her needs
Cause as woman I wish
that men would do this for me
Id open car doors
and pull out chairs
Id kiss her in public
like no one was there
Id listen as she wept
about her needs
Cause as woman I wish
that men would do this for me
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you want ALL that in 50 words-I just cant yet have the 2 decades of experience to do the write---that sux--next time maybe? Lol peace, Miki
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mikimoondancer said:you want ALL that in 50 words-I just cant yet have the 2 decades of experience to do the write---that sux--next time maybe? Lol peace, Miki
.. hey beautiful.. lol. it doesnt suprise me you made an appearance.. i was to afraid to try and delete mine due to my past tries.. i think im already on the first page 4 times.. i suck! and thank you very much thread starter cause i am so sorry that i went over twice then screwed up tryin to delete..
.. hey beautiful.. lol. it doesnt suprise me you made an appearance.. i was to afraid to try and delete mine due to my past tries.. i think im already on the first page 4 times.. i suck! and thank you very much thread starter cause i am so sorry that i went over twice then screwed up tryin to delete..