Your Safest Place?
siphondarkness
Levi
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Joined 6th Apr 2011
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Levi
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gfk'lhfg'h'skfhbgkb aww I have a thousand and one safe places to write about...jk...Yo people do this Comp. (there I promoted it)
siphondarkness
Levi
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Joined 6th Apr 2011
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Levi
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My safe place
is my escape
a place of beauty
frozen in space
Something I can't describe
in any amount of time
You have to see it yourself
not through my lines
I suppose you can
call it my haven
A place hidden in the trees
and is graced with wind
A secretive spot
I can be lost in thought
A wonderful view
of the river and rocks
Down by the track
is where its at
but it is hidden
by the trees wrath
is my escape
a place of beauty
frozen in space
Something I can't describe
in any amount of time
You have to see it yourself
not through my lines
I suppose you can
call it my haven
A place hidden in the trees
and is graced with wind
A secretive spot
I can be lost in thought
A wonderful view
of the river and rocks
Down by the track
is where its at
but it is hidden
by the trees wrath
drone
10
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
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the safest place
for me to be
is a place
thats hard
to face
for me to be
is a place
thats hard
to face
BleedingInferno219
Kristyn Ashley.
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Joined 3rd Apr 2011
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Kristyn Ashley.
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whoa, just saw your submission, dude. Sorry.(: Well, I like how it's short and to the point.. it's got a rhyme, I like that..(: Nice job.
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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Joined 18th Dec 2009
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StephenPaul Summerscales
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How Much It Hurts (SP Summerscales)
I can hear the drone
of the tightened bow
it draws across
the strings so slow
I feel the stinging
inner cold
the music chills
it fills my soul
if only you could ever know .
How much it hurts
how much it pains
I have no worth
no more to gain
the cold of church
take me away
oh steeple high
can I now pray
no time to buy
left in this day
the blue of sky
colours to fade .
Piano help me
with your soft notes
the air of you
it makes me float
the harp of yesteryear
it ripple pools
the diamond water tears
now crushed up jewels .
Just crushed up jewels .
I can hear the drone
of the tightened bow
it draws across
the strings so slow
I feel the stinging
inner cold
the music chills
it fills my soul
if only you could ever know .
How much it hurts
how much it pains
I have no worth
no more to gain
the cold of church
take me away
oh steeple high
can I now pray
no time to buy
left in this day
the blue of sky
colours to fade .
Piano help me
with your soft notes
the air of you
it makes me float
the harp of yesteryear
it ripple pools
the diamond water tears
now crushed up jewels .
Just crushed up jewels .
lesbianoutcast
Cael
Joined 14th Apr 2011
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Cael
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The place I go to
Be safe from harm
Is snuggled up close
In your arms.
You shelter me
From the dangers I face
You my love
I could never replace.
To me you are more
Than my safe place
You beautiful
Are my sweet escape.
Be safe from harm
Is snuggled up close
In your arms.
You shelter me
From the dangers I face
You my love
I could never replace.
To me you are more
Than my safe place
You beautiful
Are my sweet escape.

UNDERGROUND
I cannot live on the earth
I have to hide
Humans are too scary
So come with me to see
The new space
You go to the house
You knock on the door
The robot will scan you
For 3 minutes or more
Enter, it says
Come down the stairs
It looks so normal
It is just a basement
In the wall - you cannot see it at all
Is a door which opens more
Down more steps
Like maybe a 4 plex
Suddenly the cavern emerges
Built to look like a shrine
Wait, why are there so many people
Hey we are the unwanted
So we got the hint
Decided to become hermits
Then became lonely
Now it is a commune
For societies pariahs
Who look so normal
That is because of good habits
We do not want creeps
We just want the unwanted
We get along
Collectively
No one argues
Everyone must love
Like GOD loves us - unconditionally
So in essence we are nuns and monks
Of the Holy Order of the Fools for the Lord
Who saw life above
Was nasty, brutish and long
Now we devote our life to song
Chanting and prayers
Day in and day out
Make a heaven of the old salt mine
Where workers died
Where widows cried
We have sanctified
The place
With our creative spirit
Watch your step
This is holy ground
Unfortunately because
Of nasty humans
It must be underground
I cannot live on the earth
I have to hide
Humans are too scary
So come with me to see
The new space
You go to the house
You knock on the door
The robot will scan you
For 3 minutes or more
Enter, it says
Come down the stairs
It looks so normal
It is just a basement
In the wall - you cannot see it at all
Is a door which opens more
Down more steps
Like maybe a 4 plex
Suddenly the cavern emerges
Built to look like a shrine
Wait, why are there so many people
Hey we are the unwanted
So we got the hint
Decided to become hermits
Then became lonely
Now it is a commune
For societies pariahs
Who look so normal
That is because of good habits
We do not want creeps
We just want the unwanted
We get along
Collectively
No one argues
Everyone must love
Like GOD loves us - unconditionally
So in essence we are nuns and monks
Of the Holy Order of the Fools for the Lord
Who saw life above
Was nasty, brutish and long
Now we devote our life to song
Chanting and prayers
Day in and day out
Make a heaven of the old salt mine
Where workers died
Where widows cried
We have sanctified
The place
With our creative spirit
Watch your step
This is holy ground
Unfortunately because
Of nasty humans
It must be underground

My safest place
Lies deep within
A million loves
No need to win
A million times
To hide and cry
A rest sincere
Within just I
A heart that knows
A soul that glows
A mind that chooses
And defies excuses
Alone in darkness
In music and guitars
In truth, In wisdom
I came this far
And when I seek safe company
I sit back, and go to me.
Lies deep within
A million loves
No need to win
A million times
To hide and cry
A rest sincere
Within just I
A heart that knows
A soul that glows
A mind that chooses
And defies excuses
Alone in darkness
In music and guitars
In truth, In wisdom
I came this far
And when I seek safe company
I sit back, and go to me.
firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
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Joined 14th Feb 2012
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StayAwayFromTheNutcase
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I find haven
within my tears
I don't need
To escape my fears..
I can accept all
that I cannot be..
I don't have to hide
They set me free..
My tears they are
my biggest pain..
But I find them safe
When they pour like rain..
**I am well aware this SUCKS.. but I wanted to post anyway..
within my tears
I don't need
To escape my fears..
I can accept all
that I cannot be..
I don't have to hide
They set me free..
My tears they are
my biggest pain..
But I find them safe
When they pour like rain..
**I am well aware this SUCKS.. but I wanted to post anyway..
kriticool
Forum Posts: 596
Fire of Insight
32
Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596
.:SAFE PLACE:.
in a DEEP sleep
where the manics don't creep
villains don't peep; they just pass us by
eyes don't notice because they into SHUT EYE
into that status of not being awake
unconscious; we love this
from the world
it's a break
in a DEEP sleep
where the manics don't creep
villains don't peep; they just pass us by
eyes don't notice because they into SHUT EYE
into that status of not being awake
unconscious; we love this
from the world
it's a break
BlackRose_Mira
trashcat
Joined 25th Apr 2012
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trashcat
Twisted Dreamer

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The Safest Place?
in a cave called my room
where the fear doesn't loom
Where no sharp eyes scrutinize
and no perfectionists criticize
and locked doors seem like a solution
to every single problem
the one thing to diminish my fear
that makes anxiety so mere
in this one space I call my room
my heart is light
and free of fright
in a cave called my room
where the fear doesn't loom
Where no sharp eyes scrutinize
and no perfectionists criticize
and locked doors seem like a solution
to every single problem
the one thing to diminish my fear
that makes anxiety so mere
in this one space I call my room
my heart is light
and free of fright
fieryangelsouljia
M6rr6g6n
2
Joined 30th Nov 2011
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M6rr6g6n
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there is no safe place on earth
I was never even safe in my mother's womb
even before my birth
I will never be safe until I'm resting in my tomb
The safest place is in my mind
a beautifully created place
every resource I can ever find
lie right before my face
a beautiful forest
a flowing clean river
a bed of clouds where I can rest
and there's no cold so I can't shiver
my soulmate I can hold
so that I will never be lonely
safe from the realistic dangers of old
and surrounded by beauty
nothing will cause disease
and nothing will harm us
there are bees
but they only sting when they must
which of course is never
because in my world
there is no danger
just my lover and I nestled
in my safe little world
I was never even safe in my mother's womb
even before my birth
I will never be safe until I'm resting in my tomb
The safest place is in my mind
a beautifully created place
every resource I can ever find
lie right before my face
a beautiful forest
a flowing clean river
a bed of clouds where I can rest
and there's no cold so I can't shiver
my soulmate I can hold
so that I will never be lonely
safe from the realistic dangers of old
and surrounded by beauty
nothing will cause disease
and nothing will harm us
there are bees
but they only sting when they must
which of course is never
because in my world
there is no danger
just my lover and I nestled
in my safe little world
SupHomeboi
15
Joined 9th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 276
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Journal
For many years now my journal was my refuge.
Room for my world but it isn't that huge
It isn't a threat and it isn't that wide
But don't underestimate the contents inside
Two hardcovers the walls for my words
The untold truth despite what you've heard
Maximum security is a tiny lock and key
The entries inside run deep as the sea
Every paragraph right down to the sentence
My bible, my scriptures, it's all documented
My version, my verses, my own interpretation
Written by me my personal liberation
Not behind the bars of any steel cages
Just between the lines going across blank pages
The tranquility of it all makes me feel secure
It makes me not afraid to grow up and be mature
My identity is in a book that can't be exposed
Once it's closed there's no cracking the code
Sealed, locked away, and hidden till tomorrow
The time when I'll express my future of sorrow
For many years now my journal was my refuge.
Room for my world but it isn't that huge
It isn't a threat and it isn't that wide
But don't underestimate the contents inside
Two hardcovers the walls for my words
The untold truth despite what you've heard
Maximum security is a tiny lock and key
The entries inside run deep as the sea
Every paragraph right down to the sentence
My bible, my scriptures, it's all documented
My version, my verses, my own interpretation
Written by me my personal liberation
Not behind the bars of any steel cages
Just between the lines going across blank pages
The tranquility of it all makes me feel secure
It makes me not afraid to grow up and be mature
My identity is in a book that can't be exposed
Once it's closed there's no cracking the code
Sealed, locked away, and hidden till tomorrow
The time when I'll express my future of sorrow
firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
17
Joined 14th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 808
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
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Another safe haven
I have found I hide
Was in my blood
And blade of mine
Crimson tears
Stream down my face
And the blood drips
At a steady pace
Nobody knows it
And I don't really care
I feel my safest
When I am there
I have found I hide
Was in my blood
And blade of mine
Crimson tears
Stream down my face
And the blood drips
At a steady pace
Nobody knows it
And I don't really care
I feel my safest
When I am there
goodest
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
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if it was not for her arms
i wouldnt know how it felt to be warm
her heart is my waking alarm
in her embrace my heart feels no harm
the look in her eyes envelop so much charm
for her sweet precious fruit i will surely farm
wherever she is is where i want to be from
because she makes my heart feel safe...everybody needs one....
i wouldnt know how it felt to be warm
her heart is my waking alarm
in her embrace my heart feels no harm
the look in her eyes envelop so much charm
for her sweet precious fruit i will surely farm
wherever she is is where i want to be from
because she makes my heart feel safe...everybody needs one....