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equalknot
vaine valenc
Lost Thinker
Germany 1awards
Joined 20th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 10

Poetry Contest

who ever has a better songs will win
any work is allowed to be entered open to the public

equalknot
vaine valenc
Lost Thinker
Germany 1awards
Joined 20th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 10

why cant i love you
i am going insaine
i cant kill the flame
your love is the blame
and i am dying in the shame
{beat}
every person that i meet
i go a hundred thousand feet
people try to dig me out
as i scream out loud
and i am dying in the shame
{beat}
i
try
to figure things about you
why cant i love you
i
try
to figure things about you
why cant i love you
{beat}
i am going insaine
i cant kill the flame
your love is the blame
and i am dying in the same
{beat}
i
try
to figure things about you
why cant i love you

kill me
when i start to hate you
kill me
when i start to hate you
{beat}
i
try
to figure things about you
why cant i love you

i
want
you
you
want
me
about you

i
try
to figure things about you
why cant i love you
{beat}
[remix of i hate everything about you]
[three days grace]

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

Taking The Violet Away     (SP Summerscales)


Tell me about your dreams
what goes on ,   behind the scenes
does emotion ,   never seem
to be the one ,    you ever feel
the day is done ,   so unreel
down goes the sun ,   glow , surreal

Is the energy ,    of above
the one you deal in ,   for your love
have you ever seen him ,   at all , enough
clandestine meetings ,   a mall or church

The day is done
down goes the sun
come on and get out ,  your gun

The day is done
down goes the sun
come on and get out ,   your gun


So unreel
glow ,  surreal
make everybody feel
the time has come
for us to run
from done deals
come on and get it  ,  get your gun
I wont feel it
because I'm numb
an orange peeling ,  dried up
I'm on the ceiling ,   that's where I'm stuck
in a dodgy dealing ,  and no luck .

So tell me about ,  your dreams
what goes on ,     behind the scenes
does your anologue , tick in time
and come into line ,   with mine
are these words ,    just fine lines
in turning worlds ,   so blind

I wont feel it ,    I'm numb
on the ceiling and stuck
go on get it ,    get your gun
and kill it ,     the bitter flavour  .

The day is done
down goes the sun
come on and get out ,  your gun

The day is done
down goes the sun
come on and get out ,  your gun

It's time ,   to make it right
in the darkened ,   lightday
sunshine ,  of a night
is taking , the violet away .


 







   

equalknot
vaine valenc
Lost Thinker
Germany 1awards
Joined 20th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 10

shut up
i try to run away
from the fear inside of me
i cry and cry
and i try and i try
as i open my fucken eyes
my soul is so dried
i cant say a lie

everyone around me
talks and talks
as they walk the walk
all i want to say is...

shut up
shut up
shut up
i'll fuck you up
shut up
shup up
shut up
i'll fuck you up

everyone around me
cant i see
cant i see
the soul that will save me
from the demons down below
and all i have to say is...

shut up
shut up
shut up
i'll fuck you up
shut up
shut up
shut up
i'll fuckkkk youuuu upppp

as i try to run away
from the fear inside of me
i cry and cry
and i try and i try
as i open my fucken eyes
my soul is so dried
i cant say a lie


equalknot
vaine valenc
Lost Thinker
Germany 1awards
Joined 20th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 10

this song is not tords you just to get that clear

humanoid
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 23rd Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 14

and a happy new tear

bastardofbodom666
Helvete Blod
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 804

Blood Cravings


The need to bleed
The will to kill
I love the pain
And the screams of the slain

The limits of my sanity
Broken by humanity
The bloodshed shall begin
Following Satan's way of sin

I crave your blood more and more
Straight from my Satanic Lore
Psychotic will driving me
Massacres will set thee free

Slit my throat if you dare
Dance within this bloody lair
The more you make me bleed
The more gore I'm gonna need

Cravings for blood unsatisfied
Even when a thousand's died
Bathe with me within their guts
So I can satisfy my lusts

I crave your blood more and more
Straight from my Satanic Lore
Psychotic will driving me
Massacres will set thee free

Rip me apart if you can
I am the death of all man
I grow drunk from the spilling blood
As your corpse is dragged through the mud

I crave your blood more and more
Straight from my Satanic Lore
Psychotic will driving me
Massacres will set thee free

Cravings for blood unsatisfied
Even when a thousand's died
Bathe with me within their guts
So I can satisfy my lusts

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

A Guitar Girl    (SP Summerscales)


I would play , you
my sweet
all the way , to
an offbeat
any day , or
any night
to a chord
solo in flight

I would play , you
my sweet
all the way , to
an offbeat
any day , or
any night
to a chord
solo in flight
Rhapsodic , melodic
tuned tight , white light
song perfection
no conjection
a musical
of love projection

I would play , you
my sweet
all the way , to
an offbeat
any day , or
any night
to a chord
solo in flight
Rhapsodic , melodic
tuned tight , white light
song perfection
no conjection
a musical
of love projection
a lyrical
gesticulation
the pinnacle
of times
gestation , elation
to betrothe
a coronation , mixed nation
a radiation , modulation
a centre station
for our love

SychophanticSlag
Dangerous Mind
United States 5awards
Joined 24th May 2011
Forum Posts: 1958

So like, I'm going to try and write a little teeny bopper pop punk song. Because y'know I can't always be fucking serious. Here we goooooooo.

Verse 1 [starting off with a poppy kind of bittersweet guitar background]

She said "Chapped lips 'cause i wanna tear the taste of you away
You slipped; i gripped and only got bloody finger tips."
[Then the drums and bass kick in]
Well it wasn't a walk in the park for me either babe.
I'm waiting for you to realize; it's not me, just you.

[K so then it goes into a generic poppunk guitar+bass combo, which is played through out the whole thing]

Chorus:
So this is your wake up call
and yeah, maybe I shouldn't have waited so long
But I couldn't help but watch you fall
Honey, this is your relationship protocol

Verse 2:
Your perfume still lingers in the air, burning my throat while I reminisce that chilling stare;
The night I broke your relationship status, it was almost as if you had normal emotions.

Chorus


Bridge [a cute little keyboard moment]:

Don't feel bad
I'm sure there's
a bleeding heart out there
for miserable you.

Chorus



skinnyjean
Llamaliscious
Thought Provoker
New Zealand 6awards
Joined 23rd May 2010
Forum Posts: 311

Look at this
A new rythym and it's
So contagious
Like an anorism with a drunken status
I might want to pass out
Right about now

Ow!

My head hurts like
Two ears ringing
But eyes aren't open
Can't tell if they're stinging YEA-EAH
I'll say I want to give in

Right about now

I'm gonna sing it, I don't care what you think But

Cut It Out- Fake your own Death
This is My time to SMILE
AGAIN
And fix it up![Yourself] shut up, FUCK UP your mouth
Stop Agonising me

Go interigate yourself!!

Look at this, is it vommit?
On the Carpe-e-et
Cos I feel like I'm gonna throw up
Eat your own words
TASTE how they hurt
Do you even know what your saying

So re-arrange it, and erase the last few sentences... Oh Oh
Don't defend yourself,
coz your not worth the paper
Your birth certificate was printed on...

 
Cut It Out- Fake your own Death
This is My time to SMILE
AGAIN
And fix it up, shut up, FUCK UP your mouth
Stop Agonising me

Go interigate yourself!!

I Am a legend in the making, YOU ARE the only one who's tried top stop me, LECTURE oh my pleasure, I'll be your punching bag for LI-i-ife


Love isn't just a game, a song isn't only words, angers just a curse, I'm cursed......Hate is only hate, time for it to leave its scars, keep going seee where it gets you

TONI-Igh-igh-igh-ighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhtttttttt

Look at this
A new rythym and it's
So contagious...


Cut It Out- MAKE A NAME FOR YOURSELF
This is My time to SHINE
Yea-eah!
And fix it up, shut up, Zip up your mouth
Stop Agonising me

Go interigate yourself!!

AlexnEmoLand
RevolutionOfAlex
Fire of Insight
Japan 10awards
Joined 19th July 2011
Forum Posts: 216

Tenshi

i conseterd this fallin angel ellagent,
for she had wings that may appear beautiful.
she held herself from lonlyness and disapontment.
this angel is from lost hopes, and brocken dreams.
casting apone your visiouse screams.
but this angel is diffrent, unique in a way,
so fear her not.
she has apeared to be discrete,
and here for another chance at life.
her wings taken away from reason..
but she continues to hold herself,
petrified,bemused, and most of all
she felt as if she were a error to this disition.
this, making her humen once more.
but she..still lay on the ground...
still disorderly....lost...and beliving in no
faith.
she held herself from lonlyness and disapontment.
this angel is from lost hopes, and brocken dreams.
casting apone your visiouse screams


-kimiko Yamamoto

skinnyjean
Llamaliscious
Thought Provoker
New Zealand 6awards
Joined 23rd May 2010
Forum Posts: 311

Rain on your parade

What a sweet little temporary thing you are
How's about a smile? Once in every so often.
You were born TO BE a PAGEANT queen
You were born to be a bitch, As you are YOU ARE YOU ARE

So damn cold your stoned and cold
I'm gonna miss you, when your nothing(but a casualty)
But I think thats something you'll have to learn yourself

Chasing daydreams
Underneath the thunder clouds
Be mine tonight
They will carve you up
Fore' lightening strikes
He said I love you Dear
You said thats so sweet
He said I'm not gonna miss you when the clouds come in

To rain on your parade

What a sweet little temporary thing you are
How's about showing some emotion every so often.
You were born TO BE a little conceided
And you've lived up to your EXPEC-Tatio-io-io-io-ions

You so damn plain
And we're not in spain
Let's watch as it rains. Darling: I sang

Chasing daydreams
Underneath the thunder clouds
"Be mine tonight"
They will carve you up
Fore' lightening strikes
He said I love you Dear
You said thats so sweet
He said I'm not gonna miss you when the clouds come in

To rain on your parade

Your not worth it, so not worth it.....

Harper83
Harper
Twisted Dreamer
Australia 1awards
Joined 19th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 93

We share a wine at your table
Young summer sun in our eyes
With a voice that you save for strangers
You read loudly from your book of lies
I know but one thing is for sure
Our love's in a heap on the floor

Tell me Caroline, divine
How do you sleep there so soundly?
With bells on your toes and a lie on your lips

Tell me,
Who am I if I'm not the one who is feeling used?
But now that it's done
Who'll keep your sweet thing satisfied?

Blue masquerade in the evening
Words from some purple crusade
Delivering the loaves and the fishes
To the souls of a passing parade
I clearly see your design
Pass me some more holy wine

Tell me Caroline, divine
Oh how you sleep there so soundly?
With bells on your toes and a lie on your lips

Tell me,
Who am I if I'm not the one who is being used?
But now that it's done
Who'll keep your sweet thing satisfied?

AlexnEmoLand
RevolutionOfAlex
Fire of Insight
Japan 10awards
Joined 19th July 2011
Forum Posts: 216

Were no sound Apears

i want to be def...
so i can no longer hear what has been
braught apone my life
were there is no one to judge me on my smile.
i want to obsolete what the next person says..
i want to close my ears..
were no sound apears..
for life to be like a dreamland.
and haterd words cant flow from thy evils tounge.
longing for a secound of bliss..
so i shall not face the problems that i fear..
that i hear..
that has been close near..
i want to be def..
were my neghbor voice is vacent..absent
no longer here..
were your sound i shall not perceive.
know for this..
i want to close my ears..
were no sound  apears..


-Kumiko Yamamoto

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

A Tazer Won't Phase Her    

I sit in the tunnel
alone and listen
no one is coming
my thoughts are wishful

blue

there's only you .

I don't know why
I come here sometimes
echoeing , falling
I keep on calling

you

there's only you .

Wandering I'm lost
in the frost you frozen
beholden
I'm folding
untold
in the cold
of

you

where are you .

A lazer she sent down
broke my emotions
a tazer won't phase her
no commotion or frown
at all

she'll never crawl

Was it nice
did it feel good
my insides you diced
then you boiled my blood ,
how does it feel
to taste my spleen ,
was I clean enough
for your taste buds ,
distraction
detraction
subtraction love ,
a fraction
or fracture
is all I ever
was

that's all I was  .










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