A Poem That Heal your wounds
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I added something on my summer and winter poem would it still be accredited if I post it now? hehe just a thought... thanks for the crit :D
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Not really :)
paolajane16
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i have two entries
paolajane16
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FishCake said:[quote-92584-violet]
FISHCAKE: 3
FIREBYRD: 2.8
MISSY: 3
CINNY: 3.4
ATROPABELLADONNA: 3.5
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219:2.8
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PAOLAJANE16: 2.4
SUPHOMEBOI: 3
KRITICOOL: 3.5
REDCRYSTAL: 2.7
CARMELITALUVET: 3.6
MIKIMOONDANCER: 3.9
your very harsh[/quote]
i have two entries
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SUPHOMEBOI: 3
KRITICOOL: 3.5
REDCRYSTAL: 2.7
CARMELITALUVET: 3.6
MIKIMOONDANCER: 3.9
your very harsh[/quote]
i have two entries
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FishCake said:[quote-92584-violet]
FISHCAKE: 3
FIREBYRD: 2.8
MISSY: 3
CINNY: 3.4
ATROPABELLADONNA: 3.5
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219:2.8
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER: 2
PRETTY_NORMAL: 2
PAOLAJANE16: 2.4
SUPHOMEBOI: 3
KRITICOOL: 3.5
REDCRYSTAL: 2.7
CARMELITALUVET: 3.6
MIKIMOONDANCER: 3.9
your very harsh[/quote]
No I see what she's saying. Very hard to connect with these poems. Most where more like talking. Some talking flowery . I personally couldn't connect much at all.
FISHCAKE: 3
FIREBYRD: 2.8
MISSY: 3
CINNY: 3.4
ATROPABELLADONNA: 3.5
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219:2.8
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER: 2
PRETTY_NORMAL: 2
PAOLAJANE16: 2.4
SUPHOMEBOI: 3
KRITICOOL: 3.5
REDCRYSTAL: 2.7
CARMELITALUVET: 3.6
MIKIMOONDANCER: 3.9
your very harsh[/quote]
No I see what she's saying. Very hard to connect with these poems. Most where more like talking. Some talking flowery . I personally couldn't connect much at all.
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Gg78 said:[quote-92592-FishCake][quote-92584-violet]
FISHCAKE: 3
FIREBYRD: 2.8
MISSY: 3
CINNY: 3.4
ATROPABELLADONNA: 3.5
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219:2.8
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER: 2
PRETTY_NORMAL: 2
PAOLAJANE16: 2.4
SUPHOMEBOI: 3
KRITICOOL: 3.5
REDCRYSTAL: 2.7
CARMELITALUVET: 3.6
MIKIMOONDANCER: 3.9
your very harsh[/quote]
No I see what she's saying. Very hard to connect with these poems. Most where more like talking. Some talking flowery . I personally couldn't connect much at all. [/quote]
It's subjective (like everything else)
One man's cat is another man's steak.
FISHCAKE: 3
FIREBYRD: 2.8
MISSY: 3
CINNY: 3.4
ATROPABELLADONNA: 3.5
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219:2.8
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER: 2
PRETTY_NORMAL: 2
PAOLAJANE16: 2.4
SUPHOMEBOI: 3
KRITICOOL: 3.5
REDCRYSTAL: 2.7
CARMELITALUVET: 3.6
MIKIMOONDANCER: 3.9
your very harsh[/quote]
No I see what she's saying. Very hard to connect with these poems. Most where more like talking. Some talking flowery . I personally couldn't connect much at all. [/quote]
It's subjective (like everything else)
One man's cat is another man's steak.
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like i said beferoe, as violet, i think she said,
this is very subjective, what i like, maybe you dont like it,
or what turns me on, it does not turn you on.
so this is my advice, and thats why i like to do this type of competitions:]
OU
IF YOU SEE A COMPETITIOIN, STARTED BY SOMEBODY, CREATED, BY SOMEONE,
YOU NEED TO READ THEIR POEM, TO KNOW, HOW THIS POET WRITES, KNOW HIS STYLE, HOW HIS OR HER IS. AND THEN WRITE. THATS WHY YOU NEED TO READ OTHER POETS POEM. PLEASE. DONT YOU BE THE ONLY POET. THAT WE ALL HAVE TO READ YOUR POEM.
SENA
this is very subjective, what i like, maybe you dont like it,
or what turns me on, it does not turn you on.
so this is my advice, and thats why i like to do this type of competitions:]
OU
IF YOU SEE A COMPETITIOIN, STARTED BY SOMEBODY, CREATED, BY SOMEONE,
YOU NEED TO READ THEIR POEM, TO KNOW, HOW THIS POET WRITES, KNOW HIS STYLE, HOW HIS OR HER IS. AND THEN WRITE. THATS WHY YOU NEED TO READ OTHER POETS POEM. PLEASE. DONT YOU BE THE ONLY POET. THAT WE ALL HAVE TO READ YOUR POEM.
SENA
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READY4ANYTHING JUDGEMENT IT WAS SENT TO MY INBOX
FISHCAKE 3.8
FIREBYRD 3.8
MISSY 4
CINNY 4
ATROPABELLADONNA 4.2
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.4
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.5
PAOLAJANE16 4.7
SUPHOMEBOI 4.2
KRITICOOL 4.5
REDCRYSTAL 3.8
PAOLAJANE16 4.4
CARMELITALUVET 4.5
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.6
FISHCAKE 3.8
FIREBYRD 3.8
MISSY 4
CINNY 4
ATROPABELLADONNA 4.2
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.4
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.5
PAOLAJANE16 4.7
SUPHOMEBOI 4.2
KRITICOOL 4.5
REDCRYSTAL 3.8
PAOLAJANE16 4.4
CARMELITALUVET 4.5
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.6
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PAGEWRITER JUDGEMENT SENT TO INBOX
FISHCAKE 4
FIREBYRD 3
MISSY 5
CINNY 4
ATROPABELLADONNA 4
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 3
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 5
PRETTY_NORMAL 4.3
PAOLAJANE16 4.2
SUPHOMEBOI 3
KRITICOOL 4.0
REDCRYSTAL 3
PAOLAJANE16 3.2
CARMELITALUVET 3.4
MIKIMOONDANCER 4
-Sincerely Paige Rider
FISHCAKE 4
FIREBYRD 3
MISSY 5
CINNY 4
ATROPABELLADONNA 4
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 3
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 5
PRETTY_NORMAL 4.3
PAOLAJANE16 4.2
SUPHOMEBOI 3
KRITICOOL 4.0
REDCRYSTAL 3
PAOLAJANE16 3.2
CARMELITALUVET 3.4
MIKIMOONDANCER 4
-Sincerely Paige Rider