Bring your powerhouse..

Unnatural Disaster

Your blazing fire starts at the base of this barren tree
The clouded heat slowly rises charring my broken limbs
Seeping through my pores your scorching words turn my cells to ash

Your flames try to reach my heart and burn the glacier within
But the walls of ice are far too thick for your hell to reach

An emotional avalanche starts to erupt my soul
Blasting icy glass through my eyes dropping you from your stance
Instantly chilling every nerve in your baked black heart

You try to rise and defend this new contrasting feeling
But the forming iceberg proves too heavy for your efforts

Fearful and shivering your heated soul starts burning through
Melting faster than the winter clouds an ice storm begins
A silver thaw shooting shards from every direction

Puddles collectively gathering and starting a flood
Waves crashing against all the barren trees you left behind

We each stand tall and strong not phased by the chilling water
The burning amber ball rises quickly over the world
Evaporating your hurtful soul into the unknown

raorrick said:Unnatural Disaster

Your blazing fire starts at the base of this barren tree
The clouded heat slowly rises charring my broken limbs
Seeping through my pores your scorching words turn my cells to ash

Your flames try to reach my heart and burn the glacier within
But the walls of ice are far too thick for your hell to reach

An emotional avalanche starts to erupt my soul
Blasting icy glass through my eyes dropping you from your stance
Instantly chilling every nerve in your baked black heart

You try to rise and defend this new contrasting feeling
But the forming iceberg proves too heavy for your efforts

Fearful and shivering your heated soul starts burning through
Melting faster than the winter clouds an ice storm begins
A silver thaw shooting shards from every direction

Puddles collectively gathering and starting a flood
Waves crashing against all the barren trees you left behind

We each stand tall and strong not phased by the chilling water
The burning amber ball rises quickly over the world
Evaporating your hurtful soul into the unknown

An emotional avalanche starts to erupt my soul
Blasting icy glass through my eyes dropping you from your stance
Instantly chilling every nerve in your baked black heart .. HELL YEAH!! this is why girl!! I knew you had it!

Magdalena said:I've been looking through what I have but not sure what to post yet, I will be back though.

Excellent entries so far.

Oh idk mag,.. ALL OF THEM lol

HELL YEAH!! this is why girl!! I knew you had it!


Thanks

JadieAngelik said:[quote-79258-Magdalena]I've been looking through what I have but not sure what to post yet, I will be back though.

Excellent entries so far.

Oh idk mag,.. ALL OF THEM lol[/quote]
I know right?. she has to pick the best out of all the best..lol. tough stuff.

Wake the Abated Nullify the dated-
By Mikimoondancer
Peace




Abruptly awakened
A Novel station
Time....
It's duration
Emancipation
Unaware

Latent stages
Unprepared
Erasing pages
It was all there
In logic phases
Unaware

Imagination
Dilation
Sovereign rage
Violent
Caged in...

Alignment
Succumbed
Eternal entwines
Three fates combine
Enraptured
In vines

Limb wrapping frame
Entwined and woven
In sensual pain
Sustained -unspoken
Unaware

Lustful note's
Orgasmic syllables
Heightened in
Euphoric bliss
Unmentioned
Wishes
Soulful kisses

Aware sets in

Diving out past
Shards of elements
Holographic answers to
unasked questions

In hollowed divide
In blacked out-
red skies
I surmise
The intellectual
craving the delectable
Exchanging the incredible

Amassing a molecular
laden with orbicular
suggesting a derivative
In Skyway's unfamiliar

Celtic haunting's
on Spanish morning's
Native's calling
A buffalo's warning
Andes are mocking
The dead are up walking


Nostradamus cries to O'Keefe
Awareness is Freud's
The truth is free
Yet it's Maslow
His Hierarchy
Indeed
That keeps us here
Or sets us free...

Go with a classic
and
Let it BE

What do you want here? The best poem I think I have or most powerful?
If I'd of known we were measuring sausages I'd of wore my best boxers. :)

mikimoondancer said:


Wake the Abated Nullify the dated-
By Mikimoondancer
Peace




Abruptly awakened
A Novel station
Time....
It's duration
Emancipation
Unaware

Latent stages
Unprepared
Erasing pages
It was all there
In logic phases
Unaware

Imagination
Dilation
Sovereign rage
Violent
Caged in...

Alignment
Succumbed
Eternal entwines
Three fates combine
Enraptured
In vines

Limb wrapping frame
Entwined and woven
In sensual pain
Sustained -unspoken
Unaware

Lustful note's
Orgasmic syllables
Heightened in
Euphoric bliss
Unmentioned
Wishes
Soulful kisses

Aware sets in

Diving out past
Shards of elements
Holographic answers to
unasked questions

In hollowed divide
In blacked out-
red skies
I surmise
The intellectual
craving the delectable
Exchanging the incredible

Amassing a molecular
laden with orbicular
suggesting a derivative
In Skyway's unfamiliar

Celtic haunting's
on Spanish morning's
Native's calling
A buffalo's warning
Andes are mocking
The dead are up walking


Nostradamus cries to O'Keefe
Awareness is Freud's
The truth is free
Yet it's Maslow
His Hierarchy
Indeed
That keeps us here
Or sets us free...

Go with a classic
and
Let it BE







In hollowed divide
In blacked out-
red skies
I surmise
The intellectual
craving the delectable
Exchanging the incredible
...... If you can only see me.. I'm reaching in my screen and touching you!! Hell yeah! Oh my damn . I feel the air1

MrAlptraum said:What do you want here? The best poem I think I have or most powerful?
If I'd of known we were measuring sausages I'd of wore my best boxers. :)
Lmao.. sweet.. now i have a visual as i read thank you .. anyone of yours are great so id close my eyes and pick one..

MrAlptraum said:What do you want here? The best poem I think I have or most powerful?
If I'd of known we were measuring sausages I'd of wore my best boxers. :)

mmm sausages....and eggs.... i want breakfeast now...

id measure with you but see... its uh... cold outside... yes.. thts it...

Well now i have two visuals.. not that i wasnt using em anyway..=)

But In The End....

Standing in this forgotten hallway....
Facing gray steel doors....
I reach out my hand to grasp the handle....
My heart skips a beat....

Darkness engulfs me as I push on through....
Faint whispers....The smell of death....
Tiny fingers prickling at my flesh....
Ghosts of the past floating by....

This hallway....These rooms....Forgotten for years....
Tell a story....Of tortured mangled bodies....
Writings and etchings on the walls....
Of the insane mind left to dwell in their own filth....

I stop at the first door....Pushing to go in....
In the corner a ghost long forgotten....
Reliveing each beating....Gagged and bound....
Upon the bed left to die....Begging for mercy....

He turns his head to look...Glowing demon eyes....
Piercing....Never ending stare....
Telling all in three simple words....
"Go To Hell"....

I move on toward the next door....
Pausing for a moment....
Eyes wide with horror....
As I view the blood covered room....

Peering through the small rust laden window....
Sits Julie....Cowering in a corner....
Blood smeared walls....
Hellfire and damnation....All she knows....

Glowing fingertips....
Eyes black as the pits of Hell....
She rides in the Devil's army....
Ready to steal the soul of all who enter....

Caught between two dimensions....
No where to go....
Determined to give back....
What was given to her....

At the third door I find....
The Devil himself....
Ready and waiting to condemn all....
Saying these are my children....I'm proud....

They all came to me....Begging for redemption....
In this asylum I sent them to train....
Soul stealer....Demon God....Reaper of Hell....
Their job completed....Their days spent....

Left in their own Hell to repent....
I drove them insane....Was extremely easy this task....
The down and out....Sold their soul at a high price....
To escape reality....And live in eternal sin....

But in the end....Repent they shall....
The contract signed and sealed....
Their souls belong to me....
Demented as they may be....

Devilish said:[quote-79279-MrAlptraum]What do you want here? The best poem I think I have or most powerful?
If I'd of known we were measuring sausages I'd of wore my best boxers. :)
Lmao.. sweet.. now i have a visual as i read thank you .. anyone of yours are great so id close my eyes and pick one.. [/quote]

She's such a charmer oh no.

BlackVelvetRose said:But In The End....

Standing in this forgotten hallway....
Facing gray steel doors....
I reach out my hand to grasp the handle....
My heart skips a beat....

Darkness engulfs me as I push on through....
Faint whispers....The smell of death....
Tiny fingers prickling at my flesh....
Ghosts of the past floating by....

This hallway....These rooms....Forgotten for years....
Tell a story....Of tortured mangled bodies....
Writings and etchings on the walls....
Of the insane mind left to dwell in their own filth....

I stop at the first door....Pushing to go in....
In the corner a ghost long forgotten....
Reliveing each beating....Gagged and bound....
Upon the bed left to die....Begging for mercy....

He turns his head to look...Glowing demon eyes....
Piercing....Never ending stare....
Telling all in three simple words....
"Go To Hell"....

I move on toward the next door....
Pausing for a moment....
Eyes wide with horror....
As I view the blood covered room....

Peering through the small rust laden window....
Sits Julie....Cowering in a corner....
Blood smeared walls....
Hellfire and damnation....All she knows....

Glowing fingertips....
Eyes black as the pits of Hell....
She rides in the Devil's army....
Ready to steal the soul of all who enter....

Caught between two dimensions....
No where to go....
Determined to give back....
What was given to her....

At the third door I find....
The Devil himself....
Ready and waiting to condemn all....
Saying these are my children....I'm proud....

They all came to me....Begging for redemption....
In this asylum I sent them to train....
Soul stealer....Demon God....Reaper of Hell....
Their job completed....Their days spent....

Left in their own Hell to repent....
I drove them insane....Was extremely easy this task....
The down and out....Sold their soul at a high price....
To escape reality....And live in eternal sin....

But in the end....Repent they shall....
The contract signed and sealed....
Their souls belong to me....
Demented as they may be....



Can you hear it?.. poetic masters.. have took heed.. so beautiful.  This is by far the longest ive ever stayed logged on. i love reading poetry.

Devilish said:...this whole thread will be beautiful...

You were very right in saying...wow!

Devilish said:i get off on poetic perfection. a great orgasm.=).

Easily done on this thread