Battle me...
Devilish
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I'm so lovein it.. Thank you all so much..
bastardofbodom666
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Rotting Within Remains:
A blade I sharpen as I loom over your restrained body
Whilst you weep in sorrow and fear that you call remorse
Like the last one that crossed me and took her you’re in for shit
And I begin to carve into the flesh that you so cannot control
Spilling the blood that you never deserved to contain within your veins
Your very existence is repugnant and I aim to take that existence
And destroy it beyond the point of it ever seeming it happened
All that will be left of you and your memory will be the remains of you
One slice after another I mutilate you whilst you scream in pain
I break your arms and legs and each one of your very ribs
And slice slits within the broken pieces of them six inches deep
Now I’m going to do to you what you did to deserve your torment
As I plunge my cock into the slits I created in your chest fucking you
Raping your body while you scream with pain and disgust
The pain in your lungs and the pain in your flesh soon silence you
And force you to just take it like the little whore you sought to be
No mercy I will show with every thrust I make into you
Switching holes often between the breaks in the ribs to puncture
Your lungs in different places and to force your blood from your veins
Whilst I sharpen the knife for some modifications to your genitals
I slice open your testicles and slowly remove them from your scrotum
And force them into two of the holes I afterwards carved into
Your stomach forcing them into the bodily cavity along with your organs
And I begin to remove the skin upon your penis leaving just the muscle
I cover each of the fibers within it with the finest powered glass
And force a flesh-light onto you forcing the glass to tear into your cock
All while I still remain raping your lungs that you struggle to breathe from
I pull out from you once I can see that you are about to take your last breath
And I flip you over onto your stomach and attach hooks into the foramen of your
Vertebrae in your back and begin to pull the steel they’re attached to
One by one removing your vertebrae from your back all the way up
To your neck where the last is pulled and your spinal cord severed from your heart
And death is instant the one thing you’ve been praying for since the start
Your torture is over and you couldn’t be happier than be rotting within remains
A blade I sharpen as I loom over your restrained body
Whilst you weep in sorrow and fear that you call remorse
Like the last one that crossed me and took her you’re in for shit
And I begin to carve into the flesh that you so cannot control
Spilling the blood that you never deserved to contain within your veins
Your very existence is repugnant and I aim to take that existence
And destroy it beyond the point of it ever seeming it happened
All that will be left of you and your memory will be the remains of you
One slice after another I mutilate you whilst you scream in pain
I break your arms and legs and each one of your very ribs
And slice slits within the broken pieces of them six inches deep
Now I’m going to do to you what you did to deserve your torment
As I plunge my cock into the slits I created in your chest fucking you
Raping your body while you scream with pain and disgust
The pain in your lungs and the pain in your flesh soon silence you
And force you to just take it like the little whore you sought to be
No mercy I will show with every thrust I make into you
Switching holes often between the breaks in the ribs to puncture
Your lungs in different places and to force your blood from your veins
Whilst I sharpen the knife for some modifications to your genitals
I slice open your testicles and slowly remove them from your scrotum
And force them into two of the holes I afterwards carved into
Your stomach forcing them into the bodily cavity along with your organs
And I begin to remove the skin upon your penis leaving just the muscle
I cover each of the fibers within it with the finest powered glass
And force a flesh-light onto you forcing the glass to tear into your cock
All while I still remain raping your lungs that you struggle to breathe from
I pull out from you once I can see that you are about to take your last breath
And I flip you over onto your stomach and attach hooks into the foramen of your
Vertebrae in your back and begin to pull the steel they’re attached to
One by one removing your vertebrae from your back all the way up
To your neck where the last is pulled and your spinal cord severed from your heart
And death is instant the one thing you’ve been praying for since the start
Your torture is over and you couldn’t be happier than be rotting within remains
Devilish
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Um... for some reason I just got excited.. You are definetly one of the most disturbing writers i've seen here.. I was hopeing you would enter. I Bow..
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Magic poemz
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RATE ME AS A KING
U can talk all bad words in my heart
Bring all the comments that are bad
But don’t forget the hater u are dealing with is mad
Cant u get it already by these words.
All I do for me is writing
U are a f… looser if u think u fright me
All I want to feel is thunder and lightining
Thanks to poetry I got the reason for smiling.
My stuff is dedicated for everyone
But all u f… do is just none
Im a king and im here to create joy and fun
Do u think I care if u are not my number one fan.
Raters have labeled me as the best
DU is proud of me that’s why im in this space
So all suckers who want to hate
Forgive me if I do not play your game.
Powerful and strong and just getting bigger
I speak anything I want plus I raise my middle finger
Im a poetical king and my follower have backed me up with figures
Bow down because im the new millennium SINBAD.
U can talk all bad words in my heart
Bring all the comments that are bad
But don’t forget the hater u are dealing with is mad
Cant u get it already by these words.
All I do for me is writing
U are a f… looser if u think u fright me
All I want to feel is thunder and lightining
Thanks to poetry I got the reason for smiling.
My stuff is dedicated for everyone
But all u f… do is just none
Im a king and im here to create joy and fun
Do u think I care if u are not my number one fan.
Raters have labeled me as the best
DU is proud of me that’s why im in this space
So all suckers who want to hate
Forgive me if I do not play your game.
Powerful and strong and just getting bigger
I speak anything I want plus I raise my middle finger
Im a poetical king and my follower have backed me up with figures
Bow down because im the new millennium SINBAD.
cavanwomble
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Nob ody
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Gonna give this a shot, a lot of talent here though!!!
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Here's an edited section from one of my first poems called "I Continue To Walk"
I want to seize her and lick her face,
chew on her nose,
spit into her mouth.
I want to look at her, naked.
I want to scrape dirty fingernails
down her waist and thighs.
I want to take her to nowhere
- a black expanse where nothing exists but myself and her,
standing naked facing each other.
Pushing her down by her face
whilst tearing at her hair
is a sublime experience for my mind.
Trying to force a fist into her mouth
as I kick and stamp over her legs,
I push a purposefully flaccid penis into her
and my fingernails cause lacerations
along her bloated stomach.
I think she cries out as I do this, but I cannot be sure.
As my penis grows inside her
I try to urinate but I am unable to
so I begin to punch her face repeatedly.
I continue to do so until her entire skull has caved in.
Her black blood coats my fist and I keep punching until my knuckles break
and shift backwards into my fist.
I stand above her with a broken hand
and I want to imagine tearing violently at her dead buttocks
and breasts
but I am again seized by an acute sadness
and I have to flex my muscles once more to halt the flow of tears.
I have imagined the colour of her bruised breasts
and the smell of her damaged vagina.
I continue to walk.
The shaft of the pistol is warm and wet,
and before pressing it against me
I remember sucking the barrel
and listening intently to the rolling of my tongue
in the hole of the muzzle. [/quote]
I want to seize her and lick her face,
chew on her nose,
spit into her mouth.
I want to look at her, naked.
I want to scrape dirty fingernails
down her waist and thighs.
I want to take her to nowhere
- a black expanse where nothing exists but myself and her,
standing naked facing each other.
Pushing her down by her face
whilst tearing at her hair
is a sublime experience for my mind.
Trying to force a fist into her mouth
as I kick and stamp over her legs,
I push a purposefully flaccid penis into her
and my fingernails cause lacerations
along her bloated stomach.
I think she cries out as I do this, but I cannot be sure.
As my penis grows inside her
I try to urinate but I am unable to
so I begin to punch her face repeatedly.
I continue to do so until her entire skull has caved in.
Her black blood coats my fist and I keep punching until my knuckles break
and shift backwards into my fist.
I stand above her with a broken hand
and I want to imagine tearing violently at her dead buttocks
and breasts
but I am again seized by an acute sadness
and I have to flex my muscles once more to halt the flow of tears.
I have imagined the colour of her bruised breasts
and the smell of her damaged vagina.
I continue to walk.
The shaft of the pistol is warm and wet,
and before pressing it against me
I remember sucking the barrel
and listening intently to the rolling of my tongue
in the hole of the muzzle. [/quote]
Devilish
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Well please do sir.. bring your worse and most sinister thoughts ...
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Helvete Blod
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Would you like me to post my old friend Violence Fetish? If you liked that last this one you'll like too. It's more obscure than the other two but it has a more psychotic feel.
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Viral Soup
Enter the blackest dismay
it slices the silence in two
and reaps malicious visions
Slithering about
it mingles with hate
concocting a terminal wrath
It burns and singes
the finest, most debonair
morsels of shadow
Metastasizing, scheming
and victimizing my mind
into believing that death is the only way out
Cuffed are my hands
my vision is whited out
while thought explores unhindered
Poison seeps into my veins
and reality chimes verbose
as guttural sounds drown out my logic
I am not human anymore
but composed of unbidden impulse
coiled to strike at the demon that haunts
To escape this cell of woe
buried beneath the recesses of my mortality
I must risk myself
I bathe in his blood
and feed on his remnants
so that I may die in order to live
He is the antithesis of grace
his name is vengeance
and he is my nemesis
Enter the blackest dismay
it slices the silence in two
and reaps malicious visions
Slithering about
it mingles with hate
concocting a terminal wrath
It burns and singes
the finest, most debonair
morsels of shadow
Metastasizing, scheming
and victimizing my mind
into believing that death is the only way out
Cuffed are my hands
my vision is whited out
while thought explores unhindered
Poison seeps into my veins
and reality chimes verbose
as guttural sounds drown out my logic
I am not human anymore
but composed of unbidden impulse
coiled to strike at the demon that haunts
To escape this cell of woe
buried beneath the recesses of my mortality
I must risk myself
I bathe in his blood
and feed on his remnants
so that I may die in order to live
He is the antithesis of grace
his name is vengeance
and he is my nemesis
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Bye-you said
and then drove away.
I lost my Son, home,
dogs, mind-
that day.
I sat and cried
hid, bled, crept
a year in bed.
No-one is
coming to my
aid-I said
near dead..
Where dd I start
can I find
a way out-
I must have
faith-
just try-don't doubt
Fuck this! I shout
I was a woman
with meaning
and worth
I can exist outside of
his birth!
Picked my then fat ass
up off the floor
called up my $%$
asked for help-
got screwed more.
I carried my
own wounded ass
out that door-(whore!)
Now you
wanna fuck with me more?
your slow...
I beg you stay back
NOT cause Im scared
you'll hurt me!
because now
I would kill you
slowly..
To set a flea
FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and then drove away.
I lost my Son, home,
dogs, mind-
that day.
I sat and cried
hid, bled, crept
a year in bed.
No-one is
coming to my
aid-I said
near dead..
Where dd I start
can I find
a way out-
I must have
faith-
just try-don't doubt
Fuck this! I shout
I was a woman
with meaning
and worth
I can exist outside of
his birth!
Picked my then fat ass
up off the floor
called up my $%$
asked for help-
got screwed more.
I carried my
own wounded ass
out that door-(whore!)
Now you
wanna fuck with me more?
your slow...
I beg you stay back
NOT cause Im scared
you'll hurt me!
because now
I would kill you
slowly..
To set a flea
FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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If I had that old A.K.
still-Today!
The people and places
I would spray-no refrain!
Feeling this sick,
twisted shit in my head-
Some, I don't want dead-
Tortured instead-
Held down-ties to bind
as I stand behind-
my fist inside.
I wanna feel blood
see you cough it up-
show me love-
open up! had enough?
NO.
I would leave them there-
little breath to spare and
find a way to get to you.
YOU.
A bitch I abhor-always
acting so brave!
You are the one
the world needs to save!
You- I would kill
but Oh, so much slower
for you, my love I just
Can't get over..
I have tried to kill you
so many times before-
I cant get my old A.K. back-
Since they found us on the floor.
Trying to kill you-
always hurts me-
Seems when I cut you
I start to bleed-
So on we go-
against gun control-
Oh- to be cleaning it-
Instead of this bow.
and won't now I'm older.
.
still-Today!
The people and places
I would spray-no refrain!
Feeling this sick,
twisted shit in my head-
Some, I don't want dead-
Tortured instead-
Held down-ties to bind
as I stand behind-
my fist inside.
I wanna feel blood
see you cough it up-
show me love-
open up! had enough?
NO.
I would leave them there-
little breath to spare and
find a way to get to you.
YOU.
A bitch I abhor-always
acting so brave!
You are the one
the world needs to save!
You- I would kill
but Oh, so much slower
for you, my love I just
Can't get over..
I have tried to kill you
so many times before-
I cant get my old A.K. back-
Since they found us on the floor.
Trying to kill you-
always hurts me-
Seems when I cut you
I start to bleed-
So on we go-
against gun control-
Oh- to be cleaning it-
Instead of this bow.
and won't now I'm older.
.
TLIFD
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i call this piece excited with sister sin
TLIFD
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here bitch lick
i flaunt my cock infront of her mouth
sealed with cellatape
she cries
and she wiggles like a snkae
but foolish little girl there is no escape
her hands are chained blood upon her face
fucking bitch
you fucking whore
i scream as i loud as i can
while punching the tears out of her
she lays broken
robed of her dignty
but i've only beaten her
only now do i feel horny
i rip of everything shes wearing
till what remains is a bra and a g_string
i pop her again in the mouth
and stomp her stomiach with my foot
now shes stoped moving
then rape her carcass violently
i flaunt my cock infront of her mouth
sealed with cellatape
she cries
and she wiggles like a snkae
but foolish little girl there is no escape
her hands are chained blood upon her face
fucking bitch
you fucking whore
i scream as i loud as i can
while punching the tears out of her
she lays broken
robed of her dignty
but i've only beaten her
only now do i feel horny
i rip of everything shes wearing
till what remains is a bra and a g_string
i pop her again in the mouth
and stomp her stomiach with my foot
now shes stoped moving
then rape her carcass violently
Devilish
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I was hopeing you'd enter..