Poetry competition CLOSED 17th March 2012 9:40am
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bastardofbodom666 (Helvete Blod)
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Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1744

I'm so lovein it.. Thank you all so much..

bastardofbodom666
Helvete Blod
Fire of Insight
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Rotting Within Remains:


A blade I sharpen as I loom over your restrained body
Whilst you weep in sorrow and fear that you call remorse
Like the last one that crossed me and took her you’re in for shit
And I begin to carve into the flesh that you so cannot control
Spilling the blood that you never deserved to contain within your veins
Your very existence is repugnant and I aim to take that existence
And destroy it beyond the point of it ever seeming it happened
All that will be left of you and your memory will be the remains of you
One slice after another I mutilate you whilst you scream in pain
I break your arms and legs and each one of your very ribs
And slice slits within the broken pieces of them six inches deep
Now I’m going to do to you what you did to deserve your torment
As I plunge my cock into the slits I created in your chest fucking you
Raping your body while you scream with pain and disgust
The pain in your lungs and the pain in your flesh soon silence you
And force you to just take it like the little whore you sought to be
No mercy I will show with every thrust I make into you
Switching holes often between the breaks in the ribs to puncture
Your lungs in different places and to force your blood from your veins
Whilst I sharpen the knife for some modifications to your genitals
I slice open your testicles and slowly remove them from your scrotum
And force them into two of the holes I afterwards carved into
Your stomach forcing them into the bodily cavity along with your organs
And I begin to remove the skin upon your penis leaving just the muscle
I cover each of the fibers within it with the finest powered glass
And force a flesh-light onto you forcing the glass to tear into your cock
All while I still remain raping your lungs that you struggle to breathe from
I pull out from you once I can see that you are about to take your last breath
And I flip you over onto your stomach and attach hooks into the foramen of your
Vertebrae in your back and begin to pull the steel they’re attached to
One by one removing your vertebrae from your back all the way up
To your neck where the last is pulled and your spinal cord severed from your heart
And death is instant the one thing you’ve been praying for since the start
Your torture is over and you couldn’t be happier than be rotting within remains

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 24th July 2011
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Um... for some reason I just got excited.. You are definetly one of the most disturbing writers i've seen here.. I was hopeing you would enter. I Bow..

JAITO
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight
Kenya 8awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
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             RATE   ME   AS  A  KING
U  can  talk  all  bad  words  in  my  heart
Bring  all  the  comments  that  are  bad
But don’t  forget  the   hater  u  are  dealing  with  is  mad
Cant  u  get it  already    by  these   words.

All  I   do   for  me  is  writing
U   are  a   f…  looser  if  u  think  u  fright  me
All  I  want  to  feel  is  thunder  and lightining
Thanks   to  poetry  I  got  the  reason  for   smiling.

My   stuff  is  dedicated   for  everyone
But  all  u  f…  do   is  just  none
Im  a  king   and  im  here  to  create  joy and  fun
Do  u  think  I  care  if  u  are  not  my  number  one  fan.

Raters   have  labeled  me  as  the  best
DU  is  proud  of  me  that’s   why  im  in  this  space
So   all   suckers  who  want  to  hate
Forgive  me  if  I do  not play  your  game.

Powerful  and  strong  and  just  getting  bigger
I   speak   anything  I  want  plus  I  raise  my  middle  finger
Im  a  poetical  king  and  my  follower   have  backed  me  up  with  figures
Bow   down   because  im  the new  millennium SINBAD.



cavanwomble
Nob ody
Lost Thinker
Israel
Joined 10th Mar 2012
Forum Posts: 21

Gonna give this a shot, a lot of talent here though!!!

poet Anonymous

Here's an edited section from one of my first poems called "I Continue To Walk"

I want to seize her and lick her face,
chew on her nose,
spit into her mouth.
I want to look at her, naked.
I want to scrape dirty fingernails
down her waist and thighs.
I want to take her to nowhere
- a black expanse where nothing exists but myself and her,
standing naked facing each other.

Pushing her down by her face
whilst tearing at her hair
is a sublime experience for my mind.
Trying to force a fist into her mouth
as I kick and stamp over her legs,
I push a purposefully flaccid penis into her
and my fingernails cause lacerations
along her bloated stomach.
I think she cries out as I do this, but I cannot be sure.

As my penis grows inside her
I try to urinate but I am unable to
so I begin to punch her face repeatedly.

I continue to do so until her entire skull has caved in.
Her black blood coats my fist and I keep punching until my knuckles break
and shift backwards into my fist.
I stand above her with a broken hand
and I want to imagine tearing violently at her dead buttocks
and breasts
but I am again seized by an acute sadness
and I have to flex my muscles once more to halt the flow of tears.

I have imagined the colour of her bruised breasts
and the smell of her damaged vagina.
I continue to walk.

The shaft of the pistol is warm and wet,
and before pressing it against me
I remember sucking the barrel
and listening intently to the rolling of my tongue
in the hole of the muzzle. [/quote]

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1744

Well please do sir..  bring your worse and most sinister thoughts ...

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1744

cavanwomble said:Gonna give this a shot, a lot of talent here though!!!

Well please do.. I can't wait to read the sinister feel of you..

bastardofbodom666
Helvete Blod
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 804

Would you like me to post my old friend Violence Fetish? If you liked that last this one you'll like too. It's more obscure than the other two but it has a more psychotic feel.

poet Anonymous

Viral Soup


Enter the blackest dismay  
it slices the silence in two  
and reaps malicious visions  
 
Slithering about  
it mingles with hate  
concocting a terminal wrath  
 
It burns and singes  
the finest, most debonair  
morsels of shadow  
 
Metastasizing, scheming  
and victimizing my mind  
into believing that death is the only way out  
 
Cuffed are my hands  
my vision is whited out  
while thought explores unhindered  
 
Poison seeps into my veins  
and reality chimes verbose  
as guttural sounds drown out my logic  
 
I am not human anymore  
but composed of unbidden impulse  
coiled to strike at the demon that haunts  
 
To escape this cell of woe  
buried beneath the recesses of my mortality  
I must risk myself  
 
I bathe in his blood  
and feed on his remnants  
so that I may die in order to live  
 
He is the antithesis of grace  
his name is vengeance  
and he is my nemesis

poet Anonymous

Bye-you said
and then drove away.
I lost my Son, home,
dogs, mind-
that day.
I sat and cried
hid, bled, crept
a year in bed.
No-one is
coming to my
aid-I said
near dead..
Where dd I start
can I find
a way out-
I must have
faith-
just try-don't doubt
Fuck this! I shout
I was a woman
with meaning
and worth
I can exist outside of
his birth!
Picked my then fat ass
up off the floor
called up my $%$
asked for help-
got screwed more.
I carried my
own wounded ass
out that door-(whore!)
Now you
wanna fuck with me more?
your slow...
I beg you stay back
NOT cause Im scared
you'll hurt me!
because now
I would kill you
slowly..
To set a flea
FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

poet Anonymous

If I had that old A.K.
still-Today!
The people and places
I would spray-no refrain!
Feeling this sick,
twisted shit in my head-
Some, I don't want dead-
Tortured instead-
Held down-ties to bind
as I stand behind-
my fist inside.
I wanna feel blood
see you cough it up-
show me love-
open up! had enough?
NO.
I would leave them there-
little breath to spare and
find a way to get to you.
YOU.
A bitch I abhor-always
acting so brave!
You are the one
the world needs to save!
You- I would kill
but Oh, so much slower
for you, my love I just
Can't get over..
I have tried to kill you
so many times before-
I cant get my old A.K. back-
Since they found us on the floor.
Trying to kill you-
always hurts me-
Seems when I cut you
I start to bleed-
So on we go-
against gun control-
Oh- to be cleaning it-
Instead of this bow.




and won't now I'm older.

.



TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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Joined 17th Dec 2011
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i call this piece  excited with sister sin

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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here bitch lick
i flaunt my cock infront of her mouth
sealed with cellatape
she cries
and she wiggles like a snkae
but foolish little girl there is no escape
her hands are chained blood upon her face

fucking bitch
you fucking whore
i scream as i loud as i can
while punching the tears out of her

she lays broken
robed of her dignty
but i've only beaten her
only now do i feel horny
i rip of everything shes wearing
till what remains is a bra and a g_string
i pop her again in the mouth
and stomp her stomiach with my foot
now shes stoped moving


then rape her carcass violently

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1744

I was hopeing you'd enter..

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