Expel Specious Dialogue
Anonymous
<< post removed >>
Anonymous
<< post removed >>
*claps again*
Look at the little "Dom" run away from things that are true... I agree it is a poetry thread, which is why I am confused about what it is you were doing here in the first place.
Poetry tends to have meaning, yet you can't seem to explain yours when I questioned you about it. You only direct me to define them which I did and then gave you a response which you never answered. Are you just writing pretty words that sound nice? That's fine if you are not everything has to be special, but I'd prefer if you'd admit it so I can move along now instead of conversing with someone who can't just explain the ideas behind their poety or words.
Look at the little "Dom" run away from things that are true... I agree it is a poetry thread, which is why I am confused about what it is you were doing here in the first place.
Poetry tends to have meaning, yet you can't seem to explain yours when I questioned you about it. You only direct me to define them which I did and then gave you a response which you never answered. Are you just writing pretty words that sound nice? That's fine if you are not everything has to be special, but I'd prefer if you'd admit it so I can move along now instead of conversing with someone who can't just explain the ideas behind their poety or words.
I am a Dom. And if you correct me, you will be damn sure I accept that correction and learn from it because being a Dom isn't about being better or higher than anyone else outside of the bedroom. It's about taking care of your partner, about trust, about having an understanding and respecting limits learning to be better for your partner and so many other things picked and chosen between two people. Not about whatever bull shit you are constantly spouting anonymously to society as if you understand any kind of meaning to the word.
You disgust me BlackWolf.
You disgust me BlackWolf.
Anonymous
Related submission no longer exists.
Ok chaps... enough windmill dick-swinging... you’re both right, you’re both wrong. Move it along now...
Anyway. To try and get this back on to the original post topic of dark offerings, I’d like to offer this into the fold. I like to post random thoughts as snapshots, this was one of them.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/368507-cloud-wrecked/
Anyway. To try and get this back on to the original post topic of dark offerings, I’d like to offer this into the fold. I like to post random thoughts as snapshots, this was one of them.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/368507-cloud-wrecked/
Anonymous
Ingredients said:Have you felt the wind off of my windmill though? It can be impressive in a still room.
Sadly I will not be competent to comment clearly on your piece. I have difficultly addressing free-verse.
Well, whatever gets you through the day, Son. Nowt to do with me.
And that’s totally fair enough when it comes to commenting. However I find when it’s hard to comment sometimes it’s worth exploring how it made you feel rather than exploring the poem itself. Even if you hated it... it’s still a reaction worth exploring.
Sadly I will not be competent to comment clearly on your piece. I have difficultly addressing free-verse.
Well, whatever gets you through the day, Son. Nowt to do with me.
And that’s totally fair enough when it comes to commenting. However I find when it’s hard to comment sometimes it’s worth exploring how it made you feel rather than exploring the poem itself. Even if you hated it... it’s still a reaction worth exploring.
In my defense, you brought up swinging dicks.
And it's not a matter of hating it or not hating it. When it comes to Free-verse, I find it more difficult to employ standards I can assess and by that same token judge and appreciate a poem by.
But... if you want my personal opinion? Which is what you seem to be pushing towards.
I think this would be more meaningful if you didn't call a shroud a parachute, or had an allusion towards falling or some use of a parachute of some kind. Why would you say "Wrap my bones in white parachutes." Perhaps you are referring to paratroopers who died in them? That's really the only meaningful explanation my mind jumps to.
Why allude shrouds to parachutes if there is nothing else in the poem to connect them?
And it's not a matter of hating it or not hating it. When it comes to Free-verse, I find it more difficult to employ standards I can assess and by that same token judge and appreciate a poem by.
But... if you want my personal opinion? Which is what you seem to be pushing towards.
I think this would be more meaningful if you didn't call a shroud a parachute, or had an allusion towards falling or some use of a parachute of some kind. Why would you say "Wrap my bones in white parachutes." Perhaps you are referring to paratroopers who died in them? That's really the only meaningful explanation my mind jumps to.
Why allude shrouds to parachutes if there is nothing else in the poem to connect them?
Anonymous
Ingredients said:In my defense, you brought up swinging dicks.
And it's not a matter of hating it or not hating it. When it comes to Free-verse, I find it more difficult to employ standards I can assess and by that same token judge and appreciate a poem by.
But... if you want my personal opinion? Which is what you seem to be pushing towards.
I think this would be more meaningful if you didn't call a shroud a parachute, or had an allusion towards falling or some use of a parachute of some kind. Why would you say "Wrap my bones in white parachutes." Perhaps you are referring to paratroopers who died in them? That's really the only meaningful explanation my mind jumps to.
Why allude shrouds to parachutes if there is nothing else in the poem to connect them?
And that’s fair enough. No opinion is wrong and free-verse isn’t for everybody. I always find it interesting how different people interpret things. And I suppose the beauty of that is that when it comes to metaphor everyone does interpret it differently. Parachutes were metaphorical.
I had an interesting chat with a friend of mine who has aspergers, and she was saying that she can’t interpret anything at all that’s metaphorical because it doesn’t make sense to her. And I always think that’s a really interesting perspective to take into account... because some people genuinely can’t process abstract imagery for whatever reason.
I feel that if everything was literal however, there would be very little mystery in the world, don’t you find?
And it's not a matter of hating it or not hating it. When it comes to Free-verse, I find it more difficult to employ standards I can assess and by that same token judge and appreciate a poem by.
But... if you want my personal opinion? Which is what you seem to be pushing towards.
I think this would be more meaningful if you didn't call a shroud a parachute, or had an allusion towards falling or some use of a parachute of some kind. Why would you say "Wrap my bones in white parachutes." Perhaps you are referring to paratroopers who died in them? That's really the only meaningful explanation my mind jumps to.
Why allude shrouds to parachutes if there is nothing else in the poem to connect them?
And that’s fair enough. No opinion is wrong and free-verse isn’t for everybody. I always find it interesting how different people interpret things. And I suppose the beauty of that is that when it comes to metaphor everyone does interpret it differently. Parachutes were metaphorical.
I had an interesting chat with a friend of mine who has aspergers, and she was saying that she can’t interpret anything at all that’s metaphorical because it doesn’t make sense to her. And I always think that’s a really interesting perspective to take into account... because some people genuinely can’t process abstract imagery for whatever reason.
I feel that if everything was literal however, there would be very little mystery in the world, don’t you find?
Miss_Sub said:
And that’s fair enough. No opinion is wrong and free-verse isn’t for everybody. I always find it interesting how different people interpret things. And I suppose the beauty of that is that when it comes to metaphor everyone does interpret it differently. Parachutes were metaphorical.
I had an interesting chat with a friend of mine who has aspergers, and she was saying that she can’t interpret anything at all that’s metaphorical because it doesn’t make sense to her. And I always think that’s a really interesting perspective to take into account... because some people genuinely can’t process abstract imagery for whatever reason.
I feel that if everything was literal however, there would be very little mystery in the world, don’t you find?
Sure. I am definitely Pro enjoying how others might interpret words written by an author. But now I would ask what was your meaning behind your writing?
And that’s fair enough. No opinion is wrong and free-verse isn’t for everybody. I always find it interesting how different people interpret things. And I suppose the beauty of that is that when it comes to metaphor everyone does interpret it differently. Parachutes were metaphorical.
I had an interesting chat with a friend of mine who has aspergers, and she was saying that she can’t interpret anything at all that’s metaphorical because it doesn’t make sense to her. And I always think that’s a really interesting perspective to take into account... because some people genuinely can’t process abstract imagery for whatever reason.
I feel that if everything was literal however, there would be very little mystery in the world, don’t you find?
Sure. I am definitely Pro enjoying how others might interpret words written by an author. But now I would ask what was your meaning behind your writing?
